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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

beautiful part manita luvd it bt felt realy sad for both shaan & khanak n pls update soon cnt wait for d next part

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#262

your shaan went from being my favorite to confusing me and himself in a single update....

okay I know this is your story and I hate doing this to you.....BUT YOU have got to have the next update from Shaan;s point of view of the whole back story....you cannot do this to him...😭

lovely update, Mani, enjoyed every line, every emotion....kudos!!!!

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nk.mail

@nk.mail

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#263

Mannu di! ( can i call u that? 😊 )

it was simply mind blowin.... m outta words actually... u r a brilliant story teller! 👏

but i agree with Saaz di! pls pls pls we want Shaan's pov too!!

Love

Neha

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#264

hey Manita.............

awesome update...........

loved it very much.........

now their past is fully revealed..................

so i want to know it about shaan's side that why he is so guarded..........i feel he loves her so why he wants to maintain a distance...............

very emotional n u know how to stick the readers n know more about ur story..........so i think i have to wait till saturday 4 next update............................

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Manita

@-Manita-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

hey everyone.....
thanks for responding.........won't say liking this time.....
as I get it that my nervousness was correct ..........
and my update did confuse you all..............or maybe put my FFs Shaan in not so pretty light.........
Awww..............please don't think bad of him......I hope next update will cheer you up.....

Priya, Ramani, shiksha, angel_9, saaaz, neha, Vandu..........thanks for commenting....
will respond in detail later........
love you all

Manita

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@Medusa..

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

wowww manii....too gud update...

gt to knw all abt their past...n they wer just too real......

wonderfully written....gr8 jobb...!!

luvddd ittt....................!!beautiful update...........

do cont. soonn.......!!

luvvvvss,

shama....

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#267

ufffffffffffff, what updates man, maar hi daloge,lol

12:30 at night i m reading ur update, my god!!! I m actually losing my sleep over it😆

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#268

o manita.i m in luv wid this..thanks a lot 4 the updates...

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dtu

@sampar

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#269

read both parts ......n its awesome yaar......amazing , beautiful.......loved how u revealed their past .....but wonder whts the reason behind shaan behavior....i think he is hiding something from her .....now waiting for part from shaan's point of view........

continue soon

cheers

shai