FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 29

Thanks a lot people for appreciating the effort.....especially thanks for bearing with me the sad and confusing past................I know all of you want to know the story from Shaan's point of view.....I will definitely tell you...................patience !!!

@ priya cool.....loved your reference to GCS.....me too 11/15 now...!!

@ Ramani........your wishes will come true soon; thanks !!

@ shiksha......sorry for making you sad......this had to be passed soon !!

@ saaaz...........hailaaa my Shaan went on from being a favourite of yours to confusing......I know it would happen, that is why I was nervous......but peeramis I will see to it that he becomes your favourite in next 2 updates........!!!

@ neha..........loved your comment, yes you can call me whatever you want 'as long as you love me'....
(humming the song)..........Shaan's pov will be told soon !!

@ angel_9 ..........thanks dear......you won't have to wait till saturday as I got 2 days off from my hospital and I wrote part11......will update soon.....

@ Vandu........chotu sa reply tells me that you were either late at night or did not 'like' it much.......
tell me what you feel !!

@ Shama.............thanks dear......love !!

@ cadbery..........glad to read that you were losing your sleep over it.😉........it would have been depressing if ppl said that they slept over it 😆...........

@ sonali...........thanks a lot sweetie.....I have been not regular here, plz pm your FF updates to me....I tend to miss a lot of threads !

@ naveen........thanks a lot !!

@ sampar.........thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear.......you are right about your thinking related to Shaan..........I have missed a lot of past few updates of your FF...............plz pm me the updates.....!

@ sayni................thanks sweetie !!.........no sorrys.........even if you miss, I understand !

@ shamima...........now, I am in love with your responses too..........the way you consolidate everything in few words...................is commendable. Only a good understanding and good vocabulary together can do this !!

@ shalini............you made up for your reserved post since last 3 updates........and regarding your request about ShaNak.............*bows*........Yes Ma'm !!! read next part and you will hopefully love it !!

@ simi.........coming from awesome writers..........each compliment is precious........thanks !!

@Varsha................thanks darling !!

@ Roshni.............loved your comment @ part 9.........cracked up at "yeh toh apna Shaan hai....he won't do anything".............are you underestimating him??😆😆😆...................@part 10......your hopes and wishes will come true........soon......

@ jessica.........you were one of those sufferers who missed part 9 and read part 10 directly.........Awww.............it was all my fault dearies..............
loved your responses though............you are understanding them well..........!!

@ Krithika...........thanks a lot honey.........!!

thanks to all those who pressed 'like' but couldn't comment due to lack of time or other reasons........
thanks a lot !!!!

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@ Varsha.............messages and thanks come before updates...............patience sweets..........

@ priya.............I know you will never miss the updates..........your name is at no.1 and If you miss....then I'll be there to keep reminding you !!😛

got 2 days off from hospital so wrote part 11..................will update tonite !!!

I thght you updated ..
Popat kiya meraa !!!!!

Ab uski sazaa ... Aaj Update kar ek part !!!!!!

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

Hey this is not fair

Many other s like me have read and comomented guess u nhave included ur favourits😆 it so.k.never mind!!!

as long it is updated whether u name us or not we dont mind it!! great job!!!so farr

Hailaaaaaaaaa......................don't say like this shriya............I went back and checked........aapne ek baar 'like' kiya hai aur comment liya hai, may be part 3...............so it somehow got missed..........

I missed Vatty too though she had commented recently.............

it's hard to check 37 pages and comments rey...................
don;t say that these are my favourites...................they are just regularly commenting ..............
as everyone who reads my effort as my FF is my favourite.......i'll add your name !!

Dear Friends,

I know I said that I will update on Saturday but I got 2 days off from the hospital so I wrote the next part !!

I understand that you all want to know the story from Shaan's point of view...I'll definitely tell that soon...!!!
Using pooja's siggy this time as I fell in love with it the moment I saw it !!

I updated few parts ( 3 )this weekend...please go through them first, in case you have missed, as they connect the past to the present...

Part 8...page 28.....ShaNak stuck together in the washroom, though they love being together, they show otherwise. and when they come close for a moment, Zarine barges in and watches them there.

Part 9...page 32...Khanak recalls her past, how she had a crush on Shaan and on one of the Holi celebration, when Shaan confesses to liking her, they get the news of Jai's accident !!

Part 10...page 34...the past story continues as Shaan stops talking to her and tells her that he was just attracted to her, there was nothing serious between them.

Part 11...follows...(didn't get time to proof read...kindly ignore mistakes)

I am taking down the part --
Will soon write a gist that helps to understand the story 😊

mani

Mani, I have no words to explain how much I have liked it.

Manita darling....*muwah*

Parmeshwar meri raksha kar....