FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one di..... love khanak-jas talks...such sweet buddy s they are :) gosh what will happen in that club? hope khanak doesn't get hurt by shan again .....😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey manita...........
love the update
beautiful part...................
shaan likes her but want her to be distant n she is still obsessed with her crush............
awesome update will wait till saturday...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Manita
Lovely update
written so well Good job 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manii!!
Love yr style yaar..it flows and love this story too!! The crazzzy Khanak in love!! And the disturbed Shaan nice!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haila....slowly how you are revealing things....Khanak tho chuppi rustom nikli...

Update jaldi jaldi....

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Posted: 14 years ago
manita.... when r u updating...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot friends for the response......
the ones who posted after me......for them.....

@ Jessica - Thanks dear......glad u liked it !!

@ manju -- so glad that u liked the part. I knew that Khanak - Jas part will be ur fav...😛.....and no I won't let him hurt her again and again.............piramise !!

@ angel_9 -- thanks a lot sweets !!

@ Krithika - thanks a ton !!

@ Simi - thanks a lot for reading and commenting !!

@ saaaz -- thanks dear !!

@ Priya cool - in a while !!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Updating the next part...
it is slightlly longer...so please take time and read...hope you don't sleep through it...😳...
Thanks a lot HIna for the awesome siggies...!!
Story till now --
Part 1 - Shantanu is the strict boss whom Khanak continuously irritates. She comes late for the meeting and accidentally gets 'Tom and Jerry' played instead of her presentation.
Part 2 - Her presentation is however appreciated but she corners Shantanu for staring at her. They end up at a negative note. She goes with her friends to a disc, and while returning back, meets with an accident. When asked about family, she gives the cops Shantanu's number. The cops call him and he immediately confirms that she is right and rushes to the spot.
Part 3 -- Shaan comes to pick up Khanak and is worried for her but Khanak is shocked at his concern and argues with him instead. They reach her building and find the gates locked. To pass time, he suggests that they go for a drive and they go to Juhu beach !!
Part 4 - At the beach, they talk and accept that they are attracted to each other, though only physically ...and they should stay away from each other because it is the best for everybody. They make a truce treaty that says that she will not interfere in his life and he will behave nicely with her. But again she asks personal questions, and he tells her to mind her own business !!
Part 5 - Shaan talk to himself and regrets being rude to her. She talks to Jassi and confesses that she always had a crush on him and therefore she can't keep to herself when things are related to him. She promises to maintain dignity and distance from him.
Part 6 -- follows

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Part 6



I am taking down the part --
Will soon write a gist that helps to understand the story 😊


Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

There s something in your FF that i am attracted to...Dn know what exactly....I love the characterisation..

Another lovely part... Beautifully written... Love shanak s dialogues even if they are cold... non romantic exchanges...
So u updating the next part tomorrow na....
Edited by priya_cool_123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaayyyy .. Manitaaaa !!!!

Another great update .... I just love them .. Whom do i love ... Arey apne Shanak re !!!!!
Nok-Jhok is superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb !!!!!!

Sameeer-Jassi .... Sharing FF space huh ???? Hahahahaha But yes they clicked !!!

Update karooo jaldi !!!!!
Edited by rbo_d_best - 14 years ago

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