FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 14

loving this story! keep it up!

Hmm so shaan has a thing for khanak but maintaining his distance and awe he regretted not making most of the moment like he wanted to kiss her but wonder why the distance and cold behaviour towards her which he regrets later and haha awe khanak frustrately ranting about shaan and awe he was and still is her major crush she always wanted to talk to him and that's why she used to hate him because he 'ignored' he which for sure he did not do and haha so true whenever she wears so something nice she does meet shaan which I'm sure she will at Roxies anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

☺️niceand fantastic update👏

hei mani,
1st of all thanks for updating..n thanks 2 ur day off..tat was a nice update..both shaan n khanak letting out wat they feel abt each other to themselves n khanak to jassi..i feel like y dont they both just sit n open up their feelings..ok..now i think something may happen in roxie's...hope u'll update this weekend..waiting for ur update..
luv,
ramani.

Super-Duper Cute !!

Cant wait for the next part.....Khanak-Shaan to meet !!

Continue on Saturday !! Hehehe

Luv,

Vandu

fantastic update love the way u defind the first crush .......................loved it shaan feels for khanak and khanak also for shaan but both r burthals yaar...................but loving it ha andplz some roance begging u

Manita darling....*muwah* Loved it!!!

Read it late yesterday night...went to comment but IF and my net conspired against me and my post did not appear...

manita dis ws so so so so so so so so so so so so cute d way shaan was talking to himself & the way khanak said dat shaan had always been her crush & she was always attracted to him & wantd 2 b W*H him bt nw i m really eager 2 c wt hpns in the pub so pls pls pls pls update soon

Thanks to all of you for responding to part 5....

@ priya cool........thanks sweetie for so generous and amazing words😳........glad that you liked it 😃 !!

@ adventure_gurl ................thanks a lot sonali !!😃

@ shamima............thanks a lot dear and loved the detailed analysis !!😊

@ sayni .........thanks a lot !!😊

Originally posted by: RB81

hei mani,
1st of all thanks for updating..n thanks 2 ur day off..tat was a nice update..both shaan n khanak letting out wat they feel abt each other to themselves n khanak to jassi..i feel like y dont they both just sit n open up their feelings..ok..now i think something may happen in roxie's...hope u'll update this weekend..waiting for ur update..
luv,
ramani.

@ ramani........thank you so much dear.......!!
@bold .............since last 5 parts......she is trying to talk and open up her feelings.....but he is not allowing...and neither does he interact much............so they practically can't talk much😆

@ Vandu............thanks dear !!

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Originally posted by: krock

fantastic update love the way u defind the first crush .......................loved it shaan feels for khanak and khanak also for shaan but both r burthals yaar...................but loving it ha andplz some romance begging u

@ ankita .........thanks a lot darling !!
@ bold..........😳😳😆😆......

@ Krishna darling.........Loved loved your analysis and I have always loved the detailed comments .......it shows that the reader didn't sleep through halfway😆......thanks for noticing the tiny parts that I had included......you do this with 2 darling daughters and loads of commitments.....hats off to u !!

@ shiksha.........thanks a ton dear.......!!😃

thanks a lot everyone who read and pressed 'like' as it re-enforced the pleasure of writing.....
there is no fun in writing if people don't read or read but don't like.....
thanks for encouraging !!

Beautiful update.. like an everyday scene.. natural.. realistic!!