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Hi Manita
Awesome update
well written
i too thought it would be white roses Loved it
please continue soon..

Thanks to everyone who read part 6 and liked it......
those who did not like can pm me their views😳.....I am open to criticism....😊......

@ priya cool --- thank you so much honey !!.......always the first to respond😉.....

@ rbo_d_best --- shalini.....your comment box is still showing 'reserved'.....read it and come back to comment darling....

Originally posted by: m4manju

lovely update.... sameer-jassi are really cute...love them already....😳

cld totally understand how khanak must be fighting with her thoughts to stay away frm him and still not able to...thats why i felt abhiya glimpse here u knw....love it this way 😳 and then the car convo....lol they both were fighting for "i was wrong"😆 ....and the rose part...hope soon the color of those roses is red 😳 hmm so kavya and zarine are the new entires or just cameos?m really excited for how u gonna develop this one :)...continue soon...

Manju Darlingggg...........loved your comments; I knew you would love Samir -Jassi.....thanks
@ bold regarding Abhiya.....I am seriously contemplating now to twist the story K-maiya way and make Shaan a Vampire😉😳😆......pushing human Khanak away from him.......now you wait and watch😡😆......loved it though......and love you.....
Kavya and zarine have important parts but my story is ONLY SHANAK story !!!😳😳..........

@ Vandu .....thanks dear.....I always love your predictions !!

@ saaaz .......thanks a lot !

@ Naveen -- thanks a lot dear !

@ ramani -- thank you so much for reading and commenting.....!!

@ Jessica -- thanks dear for such a cute long comment.....I actually thought that the update was lengthy this time and not many ppl will prefer reading so long......so they kinda skip parts of it.....😆😆.....thanks a lot for the awesome words !

@ adventure_gurl -- thanks a lot sonali......glad that you liked it !!

@ sayni - thanks a lot dear !!

@ KrazEee -- thanks a lot for the beautiful words !!

@ angel_9.......thanks a ton honey !!

@ shiksha -- thanks a lot dear !! glad you liked it !!

@ Krithika -- thanks a lot sweetie !! even you thought white roses !!.....we all know them so well !!

Thanks a lot everyone ........your 'likes' and comments made my day and made me feel that it is worth the effort to write and post !!
love you all

Manita

Are you posting abhi??? *looks expectantly at Mani*

Post Kar Na !!! Jaldiiiiiiiii !!

zarine eh?...not lyking d girl!... lol

Lovely update and loved the way you write the dialogues..I have trouble with them!! Yours seem to flow so naturally!! Awesome Manita!!👍🏼

Thanks a lot everyone for liking part 6....
thanking those who posted after mine

@ ammu -- I am glad that u dislike Zarine....even I don't like her.....lol
thanks dear !!
@ simiv -- thanks a lot dear.....coming from an awesome writer herself... .feels so good !!

love you all
Manita

Thanks a lot everyone for reading and appreciating part 6...
thanks Hina for her awesome siggy...love ya dear !!

for gist of story uptil now ( parts 1 - 5)...please read page 20...
Part 6 -- Shaan meets Khanak at the pub and both apologise for their behaviour but still argue that who was more sorry, he gives her roses. They don't talk for 3 weeks and become busy with their work. An associate of Shaan leaves office midway and the place is temporarily filled by a stylish and hot girl Zarine.,...Khanak feels jealous as she works with Shaan in close association.

Part 7 --


I am taking down the part --
Will soon write a gist that helps to understand the story 😊

gosh mani.. i really cant describe how i like ur writing... man this was like an edge seated thriller for me.. it was so interesting...

Manita... You updated ... Yaaay ...Off to read ..
Will update my comments :)