FF-meri padosi...updated part 17 A on page 51... - Page 8

hei rupali,
tat was very nice..khanak feeling her own self with shaan..shanak enjoying road side pav baaji n shaan's request to khanak if something happens to him..tat was so cute..😊😊
shaan taking her to beach at tat time n frightening her..then both having fun as old buddies who know each other very well was very nice..khanak's fear of shaan not near her n her involuntary action of hugging him tight seeing him..awwwww...tat was very very very nice...wonderful shanak moment...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
finally shaan got a chance to c her eyes n shameless shaan got lost in her eyes n is abt to kiss her..n khanak closing her eyes expectantly...
but i loved it....😉😉😉😉😉😉
will u let them hav their 1st kiss n giv us another shanak moment r u gonna let someone r something interrupting them?
i hav a feel tat u'll make khanak come back 2 her senses n break the moment..

ok..now its really hard time 4 us readers to wait for d next update...
do update soon..
love,
ramani..

Rupali

it was awesome...

Hi Rupali

omg!!....

just luvving it yaar..pls continue....ASAP

hey rups that was gr8 i loved there date there road side dinner beach scene bhoot rumor shaan scared of bhoots that was surprising .......

over all that was a nice part plz update soon becoz u have ended it on a very agay kia hoga point so i m eager to know whar is going to happen next

gr8 job girl 👏

luv Zara

ruplai, wow loved it the whole road side eatind/date the splashing around in the water, the hug and the ahem ahem anticipated kiss wow talk about leaving us on the edge of our seats

Awe love it especially how Shaan was taking note of khanaks every expression he was analysing her and falling for her for each things he liked about her and found interesting and awe his brother forgot but atleast he got to enjoy pav bhaji even though he reacted like eww lol khanak reassured him and realised it's not so ewe after all and awe ice cream to top it off and them the beach it seemed more like a date than a welcome party lol and then it was khanaks turn to observe him and liked how there both comfortable with each other and khanak is so open with him I wonder what he dark past is ....and ooh the last part shaan approaching to kiss her and her accepting as the atmosphere turned passionate but I don't think he would be able to kiss her as you left it like that meaning maybe some soft of kebab mien hadi will happen lol anyways great update and csn't wait to read more 😊

there is something to be said about writing a romance which touches you softly like a rose petal on your cheek..thats how i felt reading your FF...very nicely done...

Hey rupali...juz came by ur ff its SUPERB....ur way of writing z brilliant....i m in luv wid ur ff.....