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Hello everyone..i m rupali .well this is my first FF ever on any forum...its on the lovely couple Shanak...the story is completely different from the one on the show...There are wonderful FF writers on this forum n i have read almost all the FF's on Shanak...well compared to them i m too amateur...but still got my courage together n posted this...😊
This story was something that occurred to me randomly n i thought of penning it down...i hope i m not that bad n u guys like it...
i m presenting a very small part ahead...its kind of an intro...please read it n do let me know if u guys like it or not..😊
well i have not given any character introduction...you will get to know about the characterization as the story progresses...
Criticism is welcome😊...please guys do give me your feedback...as its important for me to know whether to like this story or not..
all suggestions accepted.😊
This is my first ever FF so please ignore any gramatical errors...do give me your feedback so that i can keep on improving...
here goes part 1
FF- meri padosi
"My Sunday is doomed"Shantanu thought to himself as he was carrying with him a box full of stuff to his new neighbour's house.This was his fourth time to climb five floors for the sake of helping his new neighbours."ye lift ko bhi aaj hi kharab hona tha"he thought.
Mrs.Kapoor: Bas puttar ye akhiri tha aur nahi hain, itna hi samaan tha("itna hi??"Shantanu thought )tum nahi hote toh pata nahi main akele ye sab kaise sambhal paati...tum toh mere liye bhagwaan ka roop lekar aye ho...
Shaan: (smiling)aree aunty ye aap kya keh rahi hain...maine toh bas aap ki thodi si madat hi..."which included missing my sunday sleep..climbing 5 floors 4times carrying 4kg heavy boxes...n listenning to your constant chatting..." (Shantanu said the last part just to himself)
Mrs.Kapoor:Woh kya hain ki mere husband...(she was about to say something just then her phone rang and she rushed inside her house excitedly.)
Shaan: aree ye kya baat hui...maine unki itni help ki..aur badle main unhone thank u tak nahi bola...kisi ka phone kya aya ...bhaag gayi...jaroor Mr.Kapoor ka hoga..khud pata nahi kaha hain aur yahaan apni wife ko akele shifting ki jimmedari de di..main aisa kabhi nahi karoonga..main toh hamesha apni wife ki help karta rahoonga...waise meri wife hogi kaafi lucky..akhir Shantanu Khandelwal ki jo wife hogi...khair unhone thanks nahi bola toh kya hua ..main toh acha insaan hoon...aise hi keh deta hoon...welcome aunty..
Saying this Shaan opened his door n staight away headed to his room to catch his Sunday sleep again.
Shaan: ahh...bahut thak chuka hoon yaar..baas 2-3 ghante aaram kar loon..thoda fresh feel karne lagunga...(saying he threw his body on the bed)
It had been just five minutes since Shantanu had lied down when he heard the doorbell again.
Shaan: (irritated)Mujhe nahi lagta aaj mujhe koi aaram karne dega.(doorbell)..coming...!coming! pata nahi kaun mare jaa raha hain.
Shantanu opens the door lazily giving a fake smile to Mrs.Kapoor standing in front of him giving him the broadest smile ever. What next happened Shaan would have never thought someone would do to him ...she hugged him tightly almost choking his breath n leaving him gasping for air...
Shaan: Aunty!! meri saans...he said said between gasps..
Mrs.Kapoor: Oh! sorry puttar,main toh bhul hi gayi ki aaj kal ki generation kitni nazuk hain..(glancincing shantanu from head to toe n then noticing his well built body she said)..waise tum toh kaafi hate kate lag rahe ho..phir bhi itni si jhappi se dar gaye..
Shaan had his eyebrows raised in astonishment to the woman's behaviour.
Mrs.kapoor: Waise tum mera naam toh jaante hi hon...but formality ke liye i will introduce myself again...tenu ab tak toh pata chal hi chuka hoga that i m your new neighbour...myself Mrs.Shaanti Kapoor,born n brought up in Bhatinda, B.A. first class from Bhatinda university,waise toh meri bahut achi job thi shaadi se pehle,par shaadi ke baad toh sab chooth hi gaya..(as she said this she entered shaan's house and made herself comfortable on the sofa,while all shaan did was close the door behind her n sat on the opposite chair).ghar,bache sambhalne main hi jindagi kat gayi...but i love being a house-wife(she said smiling)
(Mrs.Kapoorstarted looking over in the house as if searching for someone)
Shaan: (looking at her confused)Kya hua aunty?kuch chahiye tha?
Mrs.Kapoor: Woh tum akele rehte ho?tumhare maa bauji kider hain?
Shaan: Woh actually main akele hi rahta hoon...mom dad se alag.
Mrs.Kapoor: Kyu jhagda hua?girlfriend ka chakkar hain?kyu unhe woh pasand nahi ayi?ya phir tumhe actor banana hain aur woh mana kar rahe hain?kahi tumhara underworld se toh connection nahi?drugs shugs ka toh kuch nahi hain na?ya...
Shaan: (almost cutting her in between)Ji aisa kuch nahi hain aunty ...woh main bas independent hona chahta hun ..u know apne apne dam par kuch karna chahta hoon(Shaan was shocked seeing the lady's insecurities.)shaan thinking to himself..."yaar yeh toh kuch jyada hi fast hain...girlfriend se sidha underworld?"
Mrs.Kapoor: aree dekho na main bhi kitni budhu hoon, jis kaam ke liye ayi thi woh toh kiya hi nahi aur tumse gappe ladane baith gayi.(she said bringing shaan out of his thoughts(s)
Shaan:ji?
Mrs Kapoor: woh aaj tumne meri settlement main itni madat ki uske liye thank u!
Shaan:(trying to be generous) its ok aunty akhir ek padosi hi padosi ke kaam ata hain...shaan to himself"yaar tera toh back luck hi kharab hain...soch raha tha ek beautiful,sexy si neighbour mil jayegi gi...aur mili uski maa,kitna acha lagta agar woh jhappi kissi aunty ne nahi balki kissi beautiful lakdi ne di hoti..."
Mrs.Kapoor: waise tumhara naam Shantanu Khandelwal hain na?
Shaan:coming out of his thoughts..ji bilkul..aap mujhe Shaan bula sakte hain..
Mrs Kapoor:shaan ..kaafi jachta hain tumpar...ab toh milna hota rahega...hum padosi jo ban gaye hain..roz shyam ko gappe shappe ladayenge...acha shaan beta ab main chalti hoon ghar main bahut kaam pada hain aur phir khaana bhi toh banana hain..
Shaan:ji bilkul Mr.Kapoor intezaar kar rahe honge(says this so that she leaves quickly n he can get back to his sleep)..
Mrs.Kapoor: are beta acha hua yaad dila diya...unke liye phool bhi toh kharidne hain...
"how romantic"shaan thought to himself"shaadi ke itne saal baad bhi ye log ek doosre ko phool dete hai"
jabhi plastic ka haar pehnati hoon...aise lagta hain jaise photo main se ghoor ghoor kar daant rahe ho(smiling).
Shaan:ji plastic?
Mrs.Kapoor: haan woh roz unki tasveer ko haar pehenana hota hain na..
(shantanu looks at her confused)
woh unhe gujre das saal ho chuke hain.
Shaan:Oh! i m sorry aunty.
Mrs.Kapoor: tum kyu sorry bol rahe hon? ye toh apne apne kismat ki baat hain..hum kya kar sakte hain...
dekha phir tumse baatein karne main lag gayi...ghar pe itna saara kaam pada hain aur main hoon ki...(saying this she started to leave)s
aur waise aaj khanak bhi toh wapas aa rahi hain...itne dinon baad milungi main usse...meri toh ankhen taras rahi hain usse dekhne ke liye..main chalti hoon ..milte rahenge...
Shantanu did not hear anything after Khanak...he didn't know why but that name sounded familiar to him...he felt a strange warmth in his heart hearing her name... unknowingly he whispered "Khanak"
part 2
part 3
part 4
part 5
part 6
part 7
part 8
part 9
part 10
part 11
part 12
part 13
part 14
part 15
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