*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :)

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Sneha Patro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Hey vatty .....have to say loved ur style of writing its like im reading a novel....its superb yaar.....very cute story 3parts are awsome loved it.....👏👏👏.....update it soon........

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Liked the 3 parts a lot. Good creativity ... Pls update the next parts soon ....

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Amritha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

dude vatty??...update na!

wait a sec....u hav BOARDS rite?...me too!...

ok then....lets go STUDY!

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

hey vatsalya pls update soon ur update ws really short & sweet
luv
shiksha

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-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Reserved Vattieeee ...

I have to read previous parts .. I dont remember anything !!!!!

Will read others and come back to comment on this one !!!

Next time se Frequent Update kiyaaaa karrrrr ... samjhi !!!!!

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NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best
Reserved Vattieeee ...
I have to read previous parts .. I dont remember anything !!!!!

Will read others and come back to comment on this one !!!

Next time se Frequent Update kiyaaaa karrrrr ... samjhi !!!!!

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Haan yaar...sorry!!😳

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

kya baat, kya baat, kya baat..abhi ruk mat jana..continue yaar...

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

loved the update Vatty! keep it up!

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

hai vatty,
i was very new to the forum when u started this..but i read it when i got time..later it was not updated n i didnt comment..now seeing 4th part i was thinking of the story..but reading few lines in the 1st part i remembered it..so got back..hereafter dont take such a long break..
update was awesome..i didnt expect that shanak would meet this soon.however i felt happy that they met..so they have plenty of things to catch up na?so u start updating regularly n give us more shanak moments..