*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :)

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deepali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

ahh !!! vat🤗 Awesome update dear...to short but very nice 👏waiting for next part when they know each other with thier names😃

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

wow vatty kya likha hain love this mistry thing ..............aisa lag raha hain brtish book ka hindi version padh rahu hu but it was tooo godd yar loved it

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Vatttie... Sunday afternooon I had boooked for reading your FF ...

ONE comment ... "Kya Hain Yeh.... Itna TALENT kyooon chupakar rakha thaa abtak " ...

I reallly like your command over the english language .... HATS OFF gurl ...
Jaldi se next part update kar ....

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

SO SORRY!!!!!!! didnt read it befre.... i ahve a thing, whr I just cantread anthr persons Ff/OS wen I am updating mine...

but though shrt I LOVED this part too.........

continue soon.......

love

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Vatsu...

kya yaar u cudn't have made it longer?

seriously...

neways I liked the way they met...totally not to my prediction...now im guessing we will have them attracted next...

and im sensing a love triangle😉 unknown to all?😉

update soon!

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

yaar Vatty,,,,...kya ap hum nacheej ko PM kar sakte hai, while u update...i missed ur 1st & 2nd....now ab 3rd mein ake pata chal that main jis FF ki intejar kar rahithi...uska to 2 part already published...cant believ yaar....and very nice yaar...teri qualities to dheere dheere pata chal rahi hai...