*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :)

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Aww so cute-caught the last two parts together.

Like all the characters you've created.Is it weird I can totally imagine KT and YM in this setting and its all happening in my head as I read it?I guess not since you wrote it so amazingly!

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Bona

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Mindblowing Vattieeee🤗 seriously ur writing has made me fall in lovee with the story❤️ loveed it... can't wait too read the next part⭐️

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

what r u man... u really write so wel... never expected this... always imagined u a bacchu .. a basharam one of course.... classy is the word i have to use now.....

well only for the writing part... otherwise u r a full on besharam fo rme..

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

lovely update can't wait for more!😉

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.Dilwale.

@.Dilwale.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

vatty! wah re! i am so proud of you! such mature writing at such a young age! well done sweetie!👏

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IFsKhanak

@IFsKhanak

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

i was right vatty

u do write like nora roberts

i admire your style :D

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: IFsKhanak
i was right vatty

u do write like nora roberts

i admire your style :D

ab mujhe ye bata ki nora roberts kaun hai😆😆

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

vatty......small but gud update....

u hav got gr8 language skills....no wonder teech is soo impressd wid u !! :D

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IFsKhanak

@IFsKhanak

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

she's america's best selling author :)

but i dont think u'r old enough to read her books..

so leave it!

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

aww vats loved it, especially the whole half and half concept very sweet, love how u keep reminding each of them of the other yet when they meet they have no idea- very cool, looking forward to the next part and pls dont let him like the other girl ill get upset lol.

and next update better be longer yaar