New FF Hum Tum & Love? (PART 13 page 68) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Deepali88

@ noorya both part awesome and mindblowing😆 i am much awaiting for shaan and khanak meeting and shilpa entry.karan corrector so loveble.😆
nice written 👏

thanks deepali😛

Originally posted by: nine2

aww/..well first of all i am extremely sorry for replying late..had been really buzy these past few days n i think i will be super buzy during weekdays..so in future if i comment late plz forgive me

i loved this part.. so ur not gonna tell us abt shilpa... n i have a feeling that sunshine that shan met wasnt khanak bt it was shilpa....cant wait till every one meets...n then there r gonna be 2 karans in this ff..kw n ko...lol...n who is this mysterious hopeless gal..shilpa??...idk..bt thanks for the pm n plz continue soon 😊

thanks dear

Originally posted by: togepe30

Loving the FF...

I like all the actors...

Cant wait to see what happens next....Cant wait for SHANAK to meet at the party !

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

hey Vandu😛

Originally posted by: angel_9

Hi Norya nice FF...........

i loved the way u potrait the characters........

cant wait to see what happens next.......

waintin 4 shanak 2 meet at the party............

thanks Angel😳

Originally posted by: krock

yarr u r to just best love it yaar i read it again karan and khanakh frenship rocks i wonder what will shaan fell hell be jealous i cant wait for party scen yaar plz update soon sweety

Originally posted by: NazNgs

Oye meri jaan, meri writerni..

tum kya cheez ho yaar , kya kya nahi karsakti..

FF, OS, VM, tussi toh great ho yaar..

OMG kya beginning hai yaar..

awesome start..i luv how u started

with Shaan being devdas..omg the whole first part

felt as if i was watchin YashRaj prods movie..

omgg..i just love the convo that

shaan and sunshine had..

and 😆 sunshine omgg when readin her parts

i could imagine Priyanka Chopra..

patta nahi kyun yaar...this character suits her...

abhi toh patta nahi teri kahani mein kaun hai yeh sunshine..

omg nice suspense yaar...and the dialogues are awesome..

and i love the name sunshine..😊 i luved how she was all bindaas

and wanting to reach for her dreams..and workin hard..

i already love her spunky bindaas character..

aur Shaan rich can get anything accept the love of his parents kind a guy

both so opposite....

yaar just teri fabulous writing se

i could sense the great chemistry between them

during the convo..awesome yaar...👏👏

omg i have to tell u u improved like professionally in the writing.

the last FF i read of urs was like ages ago...and this one is like

omgggg a movie..aggar kisi writer ke haath yeh lag gayi

toh movie zaroor banadenge..oye tussi copyrite claim karna samdje..😆

i just loved the whole first part..

uff chalo goin to read the next part 😃

Naz

DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII🤗🤗

Originally posted by: NazNgs

Mm second part is starting amazing..

nice intro by the way...

(pics nahi dekh paayi 😔 lakta hai kuch garbar hai with tinypic anyways)

love love the pavitra rishta yaane ki dosty of Khanak and Karan

very nice dialogues yaar..

😆😆 Karan the business boy..awesome

could imagine him in his hot suit..😳

the morning routine at Khandewal household

is also very serial and filmy...

and hailaa 😆 yeh saas bahu toh bare modern typos hai

saas even says OMG...i like it..hehe..lekin inka character mein

kisko imagine karoon.? chal kisiko bhi karlungi..anyways..

and do i smell some rivarly between big bro and lil bro..?

aisa lakta hai akshay is jealous of Shaan and his succes..?

mmm 🤔 yeh sochne waali baat hai..

mazaa aayega..big bro kahin villian na hojaaye.

gettin excited here..to read the story more..

hai apun gettin impatient yaar..😆

tu toh jaanti hai meri aur patience ki kitni dosti hai 🤣

awweee Khanak and her love column..haila reminded me of Mahi yaar..

and kya main bhi apni complicated love likh sakti hoon

shaayad mujhe bhi advice miljaaye..😃😆

🤣🤣🤣🤣 mona and rosa

omg they are hilariouss...reminds me of those

despo singles joh har ek handsome pe dore daal te hai..

awesome..🤣🤣🤣🤣 Karan bhi naa

sooo funnyy...omg awesome comedy yaar..

seriously u have to start wrting scripts..arre koi yeh script kisiko director ko dikhao..

has has ke meri toh aankh men ansoo aagaye..🤣🤣🤣

omg could totally imagine Mona's face when Karan said

the privacy thing with Sunshine 🤣🤣🤣🤣

btw ek baat mujhe batana..

tumne Karan ko last name Oberoi kyun diya..?

not that is not suitin or anything

but mujhe lakta hai maine pehle kahin yeh naam suna hai..

kisi serial mein..shaayad? mujhe achha laga name

it must have been from a previous serial which i watchd maybe..

anyways like it..

aur ek funny baat batawoon

everytime u short the name of Shaan dad in Su

🤣 i see Hussain as Sumit 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

ab teri story mein i see Hussain as Sunil Khandewal 🤣

OMG im lovin the fun and masti of Karan and Khanak

😆 pehle party ke liye blackmail phir whole mall shoppin

jodi mast hai i have to say..

i just wish this was an actual serial yaar

aaj kal ki serial toh bas saas bahu rona dhona crap

damn yaar aise serials kyun nahi aate..anyways

wow what a coincicental meeting

of the future saas and bahu maybe 😳

awesome yaar awesome..

and wow Shaan and Karan bumpin

omg i love the timing in the story..

everything so perfect timed..in the dialogue

like the phone call durin the convo of Karan and Shaan

awesome and i love the cute dosty wala fight of Khanak and Karan😆

hailaaa i can't see the pic of Khanaks dress...😭

plss tell me which colour, blue, black, purple..?

and omg the last part soo sweet and caring

hai yaar for a min i felt like i want them to be a couple 😕

so nice pic of them in my head Karan putting the necklace on her

and she smiling haiii perfect jodi..😕

omg bechara karan kya hoga uska when khanak ko pyar hogaya toh..😭

but woh toh tere haath mein hai writerni..😆

anyways love love love this part as well..

lookin forward to the next one...

usse pehle tum mujhe ek baat batao

Meri jaan kahin tum koi

serial writer toh nahi.? apni identity humse chuparahi ho..?

aur mujhse bhi..? apni soulsis ko bhi nahi batayi tune..? ab hasso mat

itna mindblowing writing toh sirf ek professional ka kaam hi hosakta hai..

aur nahi ho..toh yaar seriously think about writing..

coz this is awesome girl awesome

love u

Naz

she is very nice also😆..and dont worry Akshay bhaya bohut ache hain heloves his bro very much...aur chal Hussain ko hi uska dad banate hai

poor guy kya se kya baan gaaye

aur yaar tu Karan aur Khanak ki jodi se pyaar mat karna😲😲 u know naa they are not endin together re tho control ur feelings baba and let them be best buddies

varna agar tujhe ziada pasand aaya naa tho they will end up together aur phir baki members will not spare u

maine tujhe itne saare baatein bataayi hai tho why hiddin this re...aur haan u can write to Khanak lekin phir tera pyaar ka raaz sab ke samne aayega do u really want that??

Originally posted by: dalilangel24

update soon yaar please

sorry dear

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Awe so now it's a leap and both have their own career and awe love the bon between khanak and karan it's so sweet and haha he made her his fake gf to get rid of mona and rosa lol and ooh khanak has already made a good impression in khushboo and madhavi and hmm I suppose shaan would think that khanak is karans gf because of the jewellery shop incident and awe khanak didn't know who shaan was because she didn't let him tell her his name but ooh in the party I just can't wait to seetheir reactions anyways a great ff an storyline 😊

thanks a lot dear😛

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

wen u updating nxt??!!...

very very soon dear😳