New FF Hum Tum & Love? (PART 13 page 68)

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Loving the FF...

I like all the actors...

Cant wait to see what happens next....Cant wait for SHANAK to meet at the party !

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Hi Norya nice FF...........

i loved the way u potrait the characters........

cant wait to see what happens next.......

waintin 4 shanak 2 meet at the party............

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

yarr u r to just best love it yaar i read it again karan and khanakh frenship rocks i wonder what will shaan fell hell be jealous i cant wait for party scen yaar plz update soon sweety

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Oye meri jaan, meri writerni..

tum kya cheez ho yaar , kya kya nahi karsakti..

FF, OS, VM, tussi toh great ho yaar..

OMG kya beginning hai yaar..

awesome start..i luv how u started

with Shaan being devdas..omg the whole first part

felt as if i was watchin YashRaj prods movie..

omgg..i just love the convo that

shaan and sunshine had..

and 😆 sunshine omgg when readin her parts

i could imagine Priyanka Chopra..

patta nahi kyun yaar...this character suits her...

abhi toh patta nahi teri kahani mein kaun hai yeh sunshine..

omg nice suspense yaar...and the dialogues are awesome..

and i love the name sunshine..😊 i luved how she was all bindaas

and wanting to reach for her dreams..and workin hard..

i already love her spunky bindaas character..

aur Shaan rich can get anything accept the love of his parents kind a guy

both so opposite....

yaar just teri fabulous writing se

i could sense the great chemistry between them

during the convo..awesome yaar...👏👏

omg i have to tell u u improved like professionally in the writing.

the last FF i read of urs was like ages ago...and this one is like

omgggg a movie..aggar kisi writer ke haath yeh lag gayi

toh movie zaroor banadenge..oye tussi copyrite claim karna samdje..😆

i just loved the whole first part..

uff chalo goin to read the next part 😃

Naz

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Nazmien aka Naz

@NazNgs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Mm second part is starting amazing..

nice intro by the way...

(pics nahi dekh paayi 😔 lakta hai kuch garbar hai with tinypic anyways)

love love the pavitra rishta yaane ki dosty of Khanak and Karan

very nice dialogues yaar..

😆😆 Karan the business boy..awesome

could imagine him in his hot suit..😳

the morning routine at Khandewal household

is also very serial and filmy...

and hailaa 😆 yeh saas bahu toh bare modern typos hai

saas even says OMG...i like it..hehe..lekin inka character mein

kisko imagine karoon.? chal kisiko bhi karlungi..anyways..

and do i smell some rivarly between big bro and lil bro..?

aisa lakta hai akshay is jealous of Shaan and his succes..?

mmm 🤔 yeh sochne waali baat hai..

mazaa aayega..big bro kahin villian na hojaaye.

gettin excited here..to read the story more..

hai apun gettin impatient yaar..😆

tu toh jaanti hai meri aur patience ki kitni dosti hai 🤣

awweee Khanak and her love column..haila reminded me of Mahi yaar..

and kya main bhi apni complicated love likh sakti hoon

shaayad mujhe bhi advice miljaaye..😃😆

🤣🤣🤣🤣 mona and rosa

omg they are hilariouss...reminds me of those

despo singles joh har ek handsome pe dore daal te hai..

awesome..🤣🤣🤣🤣 Karan bhi naa

sooo funnyy...omg awesome comedy yaar..

seriously u have to start wrting scripts..arre koi yeh script kisiko director ko dikhao..

has has ke meri toh aankh men ansoo aagaye..🤣🤣🤣

omg could totally imagine Mona's face when Karan said

the privacy thing with Sunshine 🤣🤣🤣🤣

btw ek baat mujhe batana..

tumne Karan ko last name Oberoi kyun diya..?

not that is not suitin or anything

but mujhe lakta hai maine pehle kahin yeh naam suna hai..

kisi serial mein..shaayad? mujhe achha laga name

it must have been from a previous serial which i watchd maybe..

anyways like it..

aur ek funny baat batawoon

everytime u short the name of Shaan dad in Su

🤣 i see Hussain as Sumit 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

ab teri story mein i see Hussain as Sunil Khandewal 🤣

OMG im lovin the fun and masti of Karan and Khanak

😆 pehle party ke liye blackmail phir whole mall shoppin

jodi mast hai i have to say..

i just wish this was an actual serial yaar

aaj kal ki serial toh bas saas bahu rona dhona crap

damn yaar aise serials kyun nahi aate..anyways

wow what a coincicental meeting

of the future saas and bahu maybe 😳

awesome yaar awesome..

and wow Shaan and Karan bumpin

omg i love the timing in the story..

everything so perfect timed..in the dialogue

like the phone call durin the convo of Karan and Shaan

awesome and i love the cute dosty wala fight of Khanak and Karan😆

hailaaa i can't see the pic of Khanaks dress...😭

plss tell me which colour, blue, black, purple..?

and omg the last part soo sweet and caring

hai yaar for a min i felt like i want them to be a couple 😕

so nice pic of them in my head Karan putting the necklace on her

and she smiling haiii perfect jodi..😕

omg bechara karan kya hoga uska when khanak ko pyar hogaya toh..😭

but woh toh tere haath mein hai writerni..😆

anyways love love love this part as well..

lookin forward to the next one...

usse pehle tum mujhe ek baat batao

Meri jaan kahin tum koi

serial writer toh nahi.? apni identity humse chuparahi ho..?

aur mujhse bhi..? apni soulsis ko bhi nahi batayi tune..? ab hasso mat

itna mindblowing writing toh sirf ek professional ka kaam hi hosakta hai..

aur nahi ho..toh yaar seriously think about writing..

coz this is awesome girl awesome

love u

Naz

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Awe so now it's a leap and both have their own career and awe love the bon between khanak and karan it's so sweet and haha he made her his fake gf to get rid of mona and rosa lol and ooh khanak has already made a good impression in khushboo and madhavi and hmm I suppose shaan would think that khanak is karans gf because of the jewellery shop incident and awe khanak didn't know who shaan was because she didn't let him tell her his name but ooh in the party I just can't wait to seetheir reactions anyways a great ff an storyline 😊

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: rafia 24
WOW where to begin, thanks for the PM by the way. The characters are all so interesting Love Khanak and Karan at the moment and aww karan loves Khanak I see the bechara's heart breaking unless he does get the girl in the end. Loved the whole khandelwal house scene could really imagine it sounded so naturally like them. I also love the way Khanak is like some love guru/ agony aunt ties in nicely with her being a match maker on the show right now😉.
also loved the interaction between khanak and kads/boo her complimenting mads on looking to young to have a married son was genious 😆

Love the details you give to each scene/set e.g khanaks dress ect

Cant wait for the party scene

Again 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Hey Rain😛

thank u soo much dear for likin the part and the characters😊

and ya Karan really loves Khanak but best friend type not pyaar wala type😆😆

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: imane568
awesome...Going good so far...
I can't wait for this story to unfold. Karan's character is pretty cool, i never really watched any of his shows or anything but i like your characterization. Mads was thanking Khanak, that made me smile. :)
Shaan is awesome as always. Witty and Charming. LOL
Thanks for the PM continue soon.

thanks a lot dear

well i hope u will like Karan till the end😉

and yeah strange but Mads is a good woman😆😆

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: sampar
superb 👏👏.....story is unfolding in a nice manner...love all the characters....love khanak and karan's friendship, they are cool together......hmmm surprise but good that Mad is nice in ur ff.......karan and shantanu will be good buddies.....awesome

thanks for the pm .....continue soon......

Shai

thanks a lot Shai😳

i think all of u are surprised that Mad is nice😆😆

and yeah Shaan n Karan will be great buddies just need some time

to setlle the whole thing naa