FF: An Innocent Vixen-Part 5A pg 24

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Posted: 14 years ago

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oh it was gr8......................loved yaar cant wait them tomeet ........................jaldi update karna sweety

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sana

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Its awesome...you r very good

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swetamwari

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Posted: 14 years ago

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really g8t...m loving it...plz update sooon

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Posted: 14 years ago

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its awsme.ur dng a gr8 job...luvd readng it.cont soon........

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Bona

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Rooj.. I am madly in lovee with ur FF😍 can't wait for shaan and khanak too meet..... plz continue soon. You have sketched the characters brilliantly👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

wow rooj another awesome update......waiting for the two to meet......very well written dear

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isomers

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

ohemgee! so amazing, love the way the story is progressing!
This Shaan is nothing like the one in the show.😆 He's actually responsible! :O LOL, kidding!

I love Khanak's personality! and her friend's too.
and I cannot wait till Shaan and Khanak meet!! eeeeekkksss! it's going to be awesome!

update soon.
-nitya

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Urooj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Thanks Guys for liking it so far.

Here's a sneak-peek of the next part. I hope you like it.😉

Rooj

Khanak gasped as the water dripped down her dress. This was her favorite dress and now it was covered in water. For a minute she wanted to yell at the person who wasn't looking where he was going but then she realized that even she didn't know where she was going.

"I can't believe this! Definitely not one of my days," She spoke to herself.

"I'm so sorry! I didn't know you would be on the other end of the door." a strong, husky-type man voice appologized to her.

Without looking up she responded, "It's ok. Hota hai."

She smiled and looked up to be met with the most amazing chocolate brown eyes in the world.

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Next part will be up soon!