FF: An Innocent Vixen-Part 5A pg 24

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

oh rooj wonderful update dear..... as for the paint thingy.. i definitely wanted a scene like that after seeing the title montage..... wow it ll be so cute.....as for what will happen next.. pls dont keep us hanging too long

as for the future plot.... pls write what u feel and conceive ........reading ur work so far.. i surely think u can come up wit something pretty good....

thank u dear... waiting for the next part

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.Dilwale.

@.Dilwale.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

nice work rooj! it's a real fun read!😊

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Bona

@bones88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Rooj🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 mindblowing update.... loveeed khanak and sunil interaction👏👏👏👏👏 and khanak and shaan meeting....... while reading it I got goosebumps ☺️... plz update sooon... loveee ur FF🤗❤️

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Luved ur ff..grt creative input..lykd d characterization..plz update soon...its grt 2 hv 2 highly talentd ff writers ovr here..one is Pooja nd d second u!

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

wow it was really gr8 yaar......................shaans laugh ...........................that was nso sweet yaar jaldi update karna plz cant wait

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Wow yaar!! its turning to be even more fun read!! Update soon sweetheart!😃

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: iluvmanar
yaar..it's 2 good...update as soon as possible...luv u...

thanks hun!

will update after tuesday next week. and u will love next update 😉

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: kubare
Rooj darling...loved it loved it....😆

Loved them riding bikes, loved him smiling through out...and loved loved Sunil and Khanak's first meeting...and the best her meeting Burthal Shaan😆

Can't wait for you to update soon....😆😆😆

Thanks Di!

I thought biking would be different. i want Khanak to have the innocent, masti type thing to her. as for sunil and khanak i want them to bond like that. slow and beti type. lol i know predictable but i like that idea a lot. as for shaan and her...wait for the next one! lol

update will be tuesday

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123
oh rooj wonderful update dear..... as for the paint thingy.. i definitely wanted a scene like that after seeing the title montage..... wow it ll be so cute.....as for what will happen next.. pls dont keep us hanging too long im glad u liked it...sorry bare it for few more days. exams are happening so busy in that.

as for the future plot.... pls write what u feel and conceive ........reading ur work so far.. i surely think u can come up wit something pretty good.... thanks but still i think i cud do better. but lets see i dont want to keep this ff long so will try my best to get it going. lol

thank u dear... waiting for the next part

wait longer priya...u will love the next part. i want it to be good so yea

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

sorry for th late reply

give ur hands dear honestly

this is one of the ffs which has managed to capture my imaginations so well i whole heartedly appreiaite it

and any gujrathi surname would be apt...and meeting would be like:

I dont know if u ahve other plans on this but my views ae

shaan sees thosa paintings learns from sunil about saraswati madam is impressed goes to the place finds saraswati madam copliments her but she says some one else painted and she says khanak and points out to her from distance

Khanak is looking at some other direction shaan knows it is khanak now wants her to come to office

great job so far..