FF: An Innocent Vixen-Part 5A pg 24 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi iam ankita and it was gr8 dear todha bahut inspiration calta hain but it was interesting i love this kind of story dear it is dam good
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its real really good !! do continue soon.... it seems exciting!!
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Hiii Rooj u can call me bona😃... WOWWW I just lovee the first part of the FF... the introduction of shaan and Khanak... amazingggggg⭐️.. please continue sooon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏 Hi Rooj ..superb yaar .....its really nice .....i loved it....Khanak a fun loving character.....eagerly waiting for khanak and shantanu's scenes.......it would be interesting to see how shaan handles her masti 😃

continue soon

Shai

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely yaar !!
I wish they'd meet sooon !!
U have written Khanak is the eldest daughter.....then in the next line you have written younger to khushboo....Wat does that mean? U meant youngest daughter???
Continue Soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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its really good.luv readng it.plz cont soon....im varsha.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Sana.shanak: Thanks so much for the comments. I agree Khanak is beautiful. She has a beauty on its own, hence I called her an Innocent Vixen. It's not every day that you find such beauty at least that is how I believe.

@iluvmanar: I agree she has all the qualities. Yashu is superb and classy. I find her very sophisticated. She knows how to present herself. I love her too and I find her attractive.

@bona: Thanks hun…and thanks for the lovely comments on FF. will continue soon!

@loveshanak: Thanks for the lovely comments.

@simiv: Thanks simi for the comments. You know I love Rani and I love the way she is so talented and the way she represents herself. I think that is one reason why I see Rani in Yashu but in her own way. If you look at Rani, you wouldn't find her attractive in the first glance but once you get to see her interact and act, you could say that she is most gorgeous lady you have ever seen. I remember in dance reality show when she was the judge, she was amazing! I loved her! Her actions were genuine.

@Sshriyaa84: Thanks so much! Yashu looked amazing in that lehnga and yes she has one of the deadliest waists. Oh I don't think it's anything wrong in admiring a beauty, in fact it eliminates the jealousy factor in a girl. I mean we all have something to be jealous about but I think if you admire someone, you are actually feeling good about it especially if it's a girl. You feel that want to become that person but in your own way. Did my comment make sense? Lol sorry if it didn't. lol Thanks for liking my story!

@Karishma: Thanks so much! Yes she is simple but yet trendy and modern. I think I'm developing my character of khanak after keeping Yashu in mind. She has all the qualities that we love so much!

@jyothi1989: Thanks so much for the comments! She is Hot but I prefer that she is an innocent Vixen, idk why but I prefer to call her that! Lol

@Priya_cool_123: Thanks so much for the comments. She def. has the amazing smiles and almond shaped eyes that makes you go gaga for her!

@Ankita: well I love Madhuri too but then again I didn't see any resemblance to her so I picked Rani. For me Rani is the new version of yesteryear heroine. But you have a different vision of Yashu so I respect that! I did put Shaan and Khanak in a different character. Just wait and watch. I think I already made Khanak wear western clothes so planning to do more on that. As the story develops so will their characters. Thanks for liking it so far! Yea it sort of is inspired with current track but future track is diff from the current one.

@showgurl: I hope KT fall for her but that is just a fan's wishes. I don't want to pin-point in their personal lives. That is their lives. That Gr8 magazine is the main reason that made me realize that what Yashu reminded me of. I started watching it by mistake since I don't have cable so I came across one of the dhulwadi scenes on youtube and I got hooked! I watched all the shanak scenes before finally catching up. I didn't watch the whole drama mainly coz I figured out the show from their scenes plus shanak chemistry attracted me. Lol

@Varsha: yep they work wonders on screen. I can see in your siggies how much u love their chemistry. Thanks for the comments!

@Krishna di: Thanks so much for the comments. I still can't take in the fact you don't like Rani. Lol but each to its own. Anyways Rani to me presents herself as classy heroine so hence I picked her and compared her with Yashu. As for Priya and Rahul…that was unintentional. I couldn't think of anything else. Lol

@Zennnn: Thanks so much for the comments! I hope you like the FF so far. I didn't like KT much before this show coz I didn't watch that many shows but caught his glimpse here and there but then now I have to say he is perfect for this role! I loved the same fact that this girl is concentrating on improving herself further hence she doesn't prefer media reporters on set.

@Priya1209: thanks so much for the comments.

@cool_janu: thanks so much! I hope you like the FF so far!

@Vandu: thanks so much! I hope for the same wish! She def. is something! You know it would be awesome if both KT and YM would become real couple but alas we are fans and it is only our wish. But who knows. Thanks for the mistake, like I said I didn't proof-read it but thanks! I changed it. She is the youngest one. They will meet soon, either the next update or the one after that. It depends.

@luveeduvee: thanks so much for the comments! We all wish for the same on Yasharan part. Thanks for liking the story.

@aditi305: thanks for the comments.

@Nitya: thanks for the comments and liking my story!

@p.fashion.d: thanks so much for liking it!

@shai: thanks for loving my FF. I think Shanak meet in either the next one or the one after. Depending on how long the next update will be. I am still working on their scenes so let's see how they will be. Btw love ur name!

Thanks all who like my FF. I will update the next part soon…exams are near so it might take time but I will whenever I get the chance.

Also thanks for introducing yourselves!

Rooj

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks so much guys for liking my last part.

I hope you like this one too. Sorry for the grammar mistakes. it's not my strong forte.
Also I don't know anything about companies or mumbai. this is what I am making up according to my knowledge.

so enjoy reading it!

Rooj
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Part 2A

Shaan's office 2 days later

"Mr. Mehta, did we find an interior designer yet for the set?" Shaan asked Mr. Mehta, his assistant while looking at the files in his hand.

When Mr. Mehta didn't answer, he looked up, "Mr. Mehta have we found someone yet? No? How about the event planner, Ms. Sonalika?"

Shaan closed the file he was reading in his hand and place it back on the table, leaned forward and folded his hands, looked around the table and smiled. His staff looked scared. They knew that this is one of those times when Shaan's silent smile means a volcano is getting ready to erupt if nothing is taken care of soon.

"That's fine. We have two days left till our clients get here. So I need that done by tonight. I hope that is enough time for everyone," Shaan smiled and addressed his staff sweetly.

Everyone around the table gave him a silent nod indicating that they understood his order along with his "sweet-warning," as many called it. This was one of those times where they knew how serious he gets when he tells everyone to get the job done in the most polite way because his politeness is another form of anger about to erupt soon.

Shaan looked around the room once more, stood up and gathered his files and left the room.

Shaan's Cabin

As he paced his cabin, trying to control his anger, he couldn't figure out how to find an event planner and an interior designer in short period of time. He was angry that his staff still hasn't been able to find someone.

This was Shaan's very first project. It's not that he has never done projects before for his company but this was the first time he was in-charge of one without his dad's help. He wanted everything to go perfect and on time. He wanted to keep his company's name the honor it has build for itself. He wanted his dad to keep the honor he has spent time on to build.

This was a very special project for Shaan. The clients he was working with wanted a set design that will specifically fit their character's situation. Shaan's company was the number one company in Mumbai and in this field. His company worked with many singers and directors. Whenever someone needed to create a specific set for their production, they contacted his company. This was their main production but his company also did other projects and did other side business too.

But for now Shaan was worried about his project with his clients. He needed to find a new set-designer and a new event planner. The ones he has are busy with other projects so hence he needs a new one, especially someone who can specifically understand the project and work on it.

The thought of his company failing or his dad failing brought more misery to Shaan. He needed to get out of here before he does something drastic that he will regret later.

Khanak's Shop

"Khanak, how is the painting for Libby coming along? You know she called again inquiring about it. I swear I have never seen a person so impatient about her own portrait. I mean if she wants something done so quick, why can't she just have a photograph taken and frame it? Why this much trouble?" Ruby went on and on about her complains.

Khanak just shook her head and kept painting, "At least she is honest and still appreciates painted portrait of self than most people these days. Beside Ruby we need business so why deny anyone of their joy. Not to mention I love to paint. It gives me great joy."

"woh toh theke hai Khanak lekin hum aur bhi toh kaam karte hain. I mean we run perfectly good shop here that runs mainly on interior designing and event planning so why painting? I mean in today's world, paintings are soo old-stlye," Ruby spoke as if she was disgusted by it.

"Ruby, we've had this conversation million times and still you bring it up. Yaar kabhi toh meri paintings ka peecha chod do," Khanak casually remarked Ruby.

Ruby: "Main tumhari paintings ka peecha tab chodungi ja'"

Khanak cuts in, "Jab koi ladka meri paintings ko khareedega aur woh bhi iss zamane wala. I know I know, you want a guy who is not a painting type to buy my paintings just to show that paintings are still appreciated it. The only flaw in that logic is, my dear," Khanak went up to Ruby and put her head on her shoulder, "that that guy would have to be in love with me in order to like my paintings and I doubt that will happen any time soon. Beside there are so many people who love paintings and that too mine'.I just haven't met them yet."

"wohi toh Khanak. You haven't met them yet. Beside what is wrong with a guy who loves your paintings for you. And I'm telling you Khanak, that guy is not far away."

Khanak gave up on her friend and went back to her painting and Ruby went back to her work of looking up orders.

While checking orders, she came across one order that was needed to be delivered today at 12 pm at K Company.

"Oh Shit! Khanak!" yelled Ruby hitting her head with her palm.

"Kya hua?" Khanak was so startled that she hit paint on her face in the process. She left everything there and ran to her friend to see if she was ok, "Kya hua, Ruby? Are you ok?"

"Khanak we needed to deliver the CP order to the K Company by 12 today."

Khanak looked at Ruby, rolled her eyes and started to go back to her work till Ruby stopped her, "We have an hour to deliver it and you know we only own bike and you know about the Mumbai traffic."

Khanak's almond shaped eyes popped out. She realized the blunder now. If there was something her shop was good at then it was timing and management. They were good on everything but timing was something they were known for and well her shop's reputation was in jeopardy.

She quickly grabbed her things and the order and ran out of the shop to deliver.

"Par Khanak Suno toh!"

"Abhi Nahi Ruby baad main"

"Par Khanak tumhare'" before Ruby could finish her sentence Khanak was gone.

K Company's outside

Thank God I have reached here in time. Thank You God for no traffic today, warna main toh gayee kaam se. Khanak thought to herself.

She parked her cycle and then rushed in the building without a care. She quick-stepped to the main entrance of the building. As she climbed the stairs, she bumped into someone and without facing the man; she apologized and rushed inside to the secretary.

Shaan's building lobby

Shaan was in deep thoughts that he wasn't really looking where he was going. He took the elevator down and nodded his head to his secretary before stepping out to stairs. He wasn't sure where he was going to go but he needed to step out.

He didn't see who he bumped into but he heard a familiar voice, the same voice that he heard two days earlier. He quickly turned around to catch only the back of retreating girl in yellow sun dress with open black hair covering her back. He saw her approach his secretary and asking her something and then heading to the elevator.

Without knowing what he was doing, Shaan started to follow the girl. He tried to catch upto her but the elevator beat it to him.

As he watched the elevator ascend, he was hoping to know where she made the stop but he couldn't say where because the elevator was stopping at every floor. His only hope was to climb the elevator and wait out the whole time before running into her again.

Beta Shaan, tu yeh kya kar raha hai? Tumhara demagh kahan hai? Why such hyper-ness on some silly girl. You don't even know her or what she looks like then why chasing her? Shaan thought to himself. He started to debate on whether to press the button and follow her or go look for someone for his project.

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Thanks guys! I know I left it short but don't worry you will love my next part. Im already working on it!

I promised to post this tonight so hence Im here

Please leave a comment! :)

rooj

Edited by rooj-i - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rooj..it's awesome..pls update ur next part as soon as possible...luv u...
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Hey Lovely part !
Absolutely loved reading it !
I wonder what Ruby was trying to tell her !!
Cant wait for Shaan to meet Khanak...! And Yay....She will be hired as the designer and event manager for the company m sure !
And then we'll have a love struck Shaan buying her painting just for a reason to meet her !! LOL.....How cutee !!

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