FF: An Innocent Vixen-Part 5A pg 24 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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agree priya she has a million doller smile........................she has this innocent eyes.....................and that cute and hot expression she gave.............oh but i rather called her madhuri dixit cuz she has all the qualities like her
ya girl go write ff on this but kt and yashu ko kisi or character main dalna with same name
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rooj-i

Hi Guys,


So this is my first official topic here on RBO forum. Ever since I started watching this show, I've been going crazy trying to figure out what is it about Yashashri that makes her a great actress. What is it that appeals her to the audience.

Don't get me wrong, I love her, but she lacks that "it" factor that many other actresses have. She is not "hot" per se but she has something about her that makes her look sooo attractive. She is not tall, she is not completely slim like other actresses on tv, she has huge eyes and her body is not the "it" body.

Hold your horses I'm getting there.

Then I saw the pics, again, from the Gr8 Magazine and it hit me like anything! She is an "Innocent Vixen." She is a tease in her own way. She has the "oomph" factor, better than the "it" factor. She has the innocent looks, great brown, big eyes. Hot lips. Best of all the contagious laugh. She presents herself so greatly that she almost looks like a classic lady in modern form. She has that body too! This innocent looks with the mixture of class and sophistication makes her a vixen to all. She is that one lady who you want to have but can't coz you're too scarred to hurt her. She is a tease to the male population. She absolutely beautiful! Better yet, Vixen-ly gorgeous!

I have to say her pairing with KT is just superb! Hats off to her for looking like an innocent vixen and trapping guys to her looks and herself.

At the end of the day, if KT or anyone else doesn't love her then I would if I was a guy. Sadly I'm not a guy but I love her equally. I am Rani Mukherjee fan and if I were to say that you want a Rani of TV then Yashashri is it!

So, I am thinking of writing a FF based on this title and if you guys want a FF on this title then let me know.

otherwise would love to know your thoughts.

Rooj

PS: I am a girl and I am straight. But I do find some girls attractive.

i just totally agree wid each nd every word of urs....dis is wat i hv been tellin al m frnds aso..i strtd dis show seein her innocent face nd her expressions nd wid Karan opposite her..it was lyk WOW...two totally diff ppl cmg up is a definite treat nd trust m dat has been d main reason m stil watchng it...nd dat Gr8 magazine photoshoot..hmm..m jaw jst dropped nd i knw she'l bound 2 go way up in her profession nd KT fallin or nt fallin 4 her..dat tym wil nly tel..;)))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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agree with each and every word of urs.yashu is really sumthng spl.n her pairng with karan.now ords can xpress it.they look so perfect...n yahsu is just magical....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rooj darling you said it all dear....completely agree with you...though me not abig Rani Mukerjee fan...😆😆
Now get to writing...so I can read your FF....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@rooj

nice topic! waiting for the FF!😊


@showgurl

well said! i remember i saw the first promo of RBO and there was just something about this girl saying 'this man is guilty and only i have the right to punish him!'. i thought she looked so young and innocent. not to mention i loved her no make-up look because i always think the portrayal of characters on indian telly is very superficial. it was a pleasant surprise for me. kt i knew from his previous show though wasn't his fan then. anyways, found the promo extremely interesting! and so the promo led to the show and the show led to me becoming a huge fan of both shanak and yasharan!😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Rooj..nice topic...well said dear...
Yes Zenn.. That first promo with Khanak was catchy ...that 'yeh marha gunhegar hai..iski sajanoo faislo mein karongi' ..dun remember the exact lines...but it had caught my interest and she had that impact....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Zen and Priya...she was indeed the reason I startd watching this show....there was definitly something about her that really caught the eye...her acting was one...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i also appreciate the fact that she can look totally hot and sexy when she wants ( courtesy GR8 magazine pics and SR sequence) but sticks to a simple avatar on screen, instead concentrating on her acting skills.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks so much guys! I will answer you all individually soon!

As per demands by many here, here's the prologue to the FF.

As you know it's called "An Innocent Vixen" the story is set in Mumbai but with different characterization for both Khanak and Shaan.

Prologue

The new rays of early morning shone through the room, hitting the back of the sleeping figure wrapped in white sheets. The foot was sticking out from one end as the sheets covered the bottom half and the top half was bare revealing the back. As the light hit the face, the figure turned the other way to cover the face with the pillow, while still laying on its stomach.

Few minutes later, the shrill sound of alarm clock started its daily call indicating it was 7 a.m. The figure buried its head deeper into the pillows to block the sounds of the alarm.

"15 more minutes, 'Mom'!" grumbled the voice through the pillows, as the left hand reached for the alarm clock on the table.

The hand was successful but for the next 5 minutes only because the alarm clock sounded the alarm again. This time the hand didn't reach for it but instead the figure turned on its back to face the ceilings.

It was the same dream again, him running through the jungle, reaching a garden filled with just pink and red flowers, in the middle of it a girl in white sari reading with head bent down, with a bike next to her. As he approaches the girl, he reaches out to her, "Khanak!" The girl gets up and grab her bike and walk out of the garden. As Shaan watches her leave, he wishes for her to turn around so he can see her face. Before completely disappearing, he catches a glimpse of her face through the water reflection. An angelic face, an ethereal smile, and innocence in the eyes. A face of a child but with touch of woman essence, was all Shaan could see. As he goes after her, the alarm rings, again, waking him from his dream.

Shaan get up, rub his eyes and his face. runs his hands through his hair. He walks to the balcony and feels the wind, while a smile spread across his face as he thinks of the dream again.

"New morning, new day, and new ways. Good Morning Shaan!" he thinks to himself.

He walks back in and grabs his towel from the back of the chair and head to the bathroom to get ready to go to work.

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On the other side of the city...

"Priya! Rahul! Stop it, you two! I can't run after you both with all this in my hand!" A petite girl ran after the two 6-years-old with their clothes in her hands. She was trying to get the two ready to go to school.

Every morning, the kids would get up and make Khanak chase them through out the whole house before getting ready. This morning wasn't any different either. She chased them through the whole house, till she gave up and sat on the stairs, waiting for them to take pity on her and get ready. She sat on the stairs with their school uniform, as the kids approached her.

Both kids had hands holding their ears, with sorry faces. As Khanak gave them an angry glare, indicating her anger. As she kept looking at them, soon her frown turned into a smile as her heart melted to such cute puppy dog faces. She, mockingly, pulled each of their ears with her hands and then very lovingly patted their cheeks. The kids took their clothes and gave her a kiss, each, on her cheeks and ran upstairs to get ready.

Khanak starred after them and then headed to the kitchen to prepare their breakfast, with the help of her elder sister.

"Good Morning Di!" She kissed her sister.

"Good Morning Khanak! So another chase around the house?" Khanak nodded to this, while grabbing milk from the fridge.

"Why do you let them get away from it?" her sister, Khusboo, asked.

"Di, you ask me this question every day and every time I tell you that they are kids and they are so cute and I love them!" Khanak gave her sister a smile as she buttered the toasts for the kids.

"Beside, they may be shaitan but they are not spoiled. Not only that, they are 6 only once in their life so let them enjoy being kids."

"Haan, haan, Tum toh yehi kahogi, kyunki tum bhi un dono ke saath bacha ban jati ho. I expect you to behave your age but you turn just like them. When will you grow up, Khanak?" annoyed Khushboo asked as she placed eggs on the plates.

"Jab shadi hogi tab!" Khanak replied.

"Shadi tab hogi jab tum badi hogi! No guy looks for a girl in a woman!"

"Yea yea...'No guy wants a child for a wife' yehi kahogi tum di. But if my guy doesn't like me for my nature then no point of him being my husband. Beside whoever will have me, will never be bored ok?!"

Khushboo shook her head, hoped that the girl would soon grow up before it's too late.

"Priya! Rahul! Breakfast is ready!" Khanak called out to the kids.

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Sorry If it's not enough but this is what I have so far. I hope you like it so far.

I will soon respond to you all about your comments! Thanks so much!

Rooj

PS: Krishna Di you don't like Rani? why? you know she was born the same day as you? lol


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome Beginning Rooj👏👏👏👏👏 Please update sooon... can't wait too read the next part😃

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