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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

its an amazing OS Veena di.... really sweet and romantic one....

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dr swati

@supportkt

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

grt.......awsome........pl forward it to cv's too................bt pl make part2 also...........some cozy scenes in room too.............

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Awesome !!

Lovedddd it !!

Keep writing such Superb OS's..

We are soo lucky to have such AMAZING OS Writers in our Forum !

Luv,

Vandu

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

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The moment of love .. moment of bliss.. moment that both of them have been waiting for aching for so long.

She has tears in her eyes.. 'I love you Shantanu' mein apse bauth pyaar kartee hoon'

Shaan face softens.. and he holds her chin between his fingers.. 'khanak .. mein tumko apne zaanse bhi zada pyaar karta hoon'

And gets his lips down to hers.. making it their first kiss.. their first kiss that both of them will remember.. and both of them seal their love with!

To make more promises.. promises forever' promises of life time.. promises of love.

hey dear veena I loved these above lines written by u very much..

u are really good at writing o.s.please continue when u find time..loved this one a lot.....

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

i already read it in the DT *yawn* LOL kidding veena! 😆 Read it again though! hahaha! it was brilliant yaar didn't seem to be your first OS at all! 👍🏼 Gosh these two! they will drive each other mad and US mad with them! loved your writing style. short sentences and the flow was so smoothhhh it was like i was sailingggg 😍 i'll red it for the third time now!

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

really veena...i've no words 2 say anything abt this, it is so damn good....& romatic and u have amagingly written it wid ur emotions...that's superb.....

i m very new in this forum...and u guls amaged me wid ur creativity everyday......i m so lucky 2 have u all as my forum members....u guys rock.....and i m being very attached 2 all of u widin this very short time...thanks 4 such a superb OS...i hope CVs check this & apply this...

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

nyc to see veena writing an OS......congos on writing ur DEBUT one wonderfully!!.. hoping to see more!!

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Ranjini

@MFRanjini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

awwwwwwww Veena it is sooooooo sweet....I loved every bit of it.....specially the ending...its soooooo heavenly.....sooooo pure :)

hats off dear, do write more :)

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srk_kadz

@srk_kadz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

I hope everything except the kiss kiss part happens in the show... aww... 😳

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tvrasika

@tvrasika

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Veena,
Beautiful! Loved it! Like the way u have taken the scene.... from the kitchen to the pool to the bedroom:)

Well-one girl... u shld be proud! Good job!👏

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