OS: ~You me Forever.. ShaNak~ - Page 5

Veeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnaaaaaa.....

Originally posted by: -Veena-

Hiya dears.. This is my first ever OS wrote it for my dear DT girls and thought of sharing it with the forum here. Please humor me and if there is anything you don't like just ignore..😆.. we have some amazing writers on this forum. Hence this hesitance.

Thanks for reading.. Loves.

Veena.

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This starts from where we stopped today in the Friday episode:

Khanak is thinking and goes to the kitchen to make Shaan something to eat..

Shaan comes to the kitchen looking for her after talking to the dude that came to meet Madz..

He notices that Khanak is all shy and all..

So he goes toward her and she moves off..

And he goes toward her and she moves off..

After a few times.. he puts his hand on Khanaks and asks her "do you feel anything when I do this?"

Khanak shy's and tries to take her hand out..

Shaan holds her hand tight and goes toward her.. He asks her again.. "do you feel anything when I do this?"

Takes Khanak's hand toward his lips and kisses it very slowly!! He closes his eyes' he can feel her.. all these emotions come within him..

Khanak not being able to breath .. shy's and puts her head down..

Shaan looks up at Khanak and puts his hand under her chin and tilts her head up so she is looking at him..

Shaan says.. "I love you Khanak" and goes toward her slowly.. he wants to savor every moment..

He wants her to feel all that he is feeling too.. love.. want and impatience..

Khanak not knowing what to say.. closes her eyes wanting stability leans toward Shaan'

Shaan hugs her .. her head by his chest.. he moves her hair on one side .. and kisses softly on her neck' trailing to her shoulder..

Khanak's hands go toward Shaan's waist for support.. she feels like the ground beneath her is going to give up!!!

Shaan feels Khanak's arms tighten around him..

His face by her head.. her hair.. 'gosh' he thinks 'she smells of flowers'

He tightens his hold over her..

He gets a sense of satisfaction that she feels the same as he does..

She feels the love.. she feels the need..

ShaNak are holding each other .. just soaking in the moment..

The moment of love .. moment of bliss.. moment that both of them have been waiting for aching for so long.

Shaan sudden feels Khanak shudder..

He slowly breaks the hug.. looks at Khanak and asks "tum theek ho na Khanak?"

Khanak very shy and not knowing what to do.. shakes her head.. and steps back.. realizing that they are in the kitchen.. and what if someone walks in.

Khanak.. to Shaan.. 'shaan hum kitchen mein hai, koyee aajayee ga'

Shaan pulls her toward him.. "aanee doo"

Khanak: "koyee deekleega"

Shaan: "Khanak ' humaree shaadi hoowe hai.. deeknee do"

K: "Shaan app bhi.. " breaks from him and runs out of the room..

S: Gosh.. yeh laddkee.. mujhe paagal karke choodeegee..

Looks around and leaves the kitchen..

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Shaan as he is leaving gets stopped by Harilal..

There is some paperwork that has come.. and Bade Shaab has sent it home to be kept in his room.

Shaan takes it and goes to his parents room to keep it.. Keeps the paperwork on the table and notices the red dupatta that he had put on Khanak the day before..

He takes the dupatta with and goes looking for Khanak..

He goes to their room.. "khanak.. khanak.. '

Not in the room..

He knocks on the bathroom door .. no answer.. and he opens it.. She is not there.. !

Where can she be..

He goes to the study' she is not there..

He again goes to the kitchen.. not there.. Whereee.. where can she go!??

He stands in the middle of the kitchen thinking..

Walks out.. up the steps.. and off to the corridor toward the terrace.

Comes out toward the pool'

'what a beautiful day ' he thinks.. it is crisp sunny day!

'what a perfect day to come home early'

He is looking for Khanak.. and can't see her around.. and then turns to leave..

And sees someone sitting on the end of the pool on a chair..

His heart misses a beat.. it is Khanak..

What is she doing sitting there.. what is she thinking?

He goes toward her.. very slowly.. and Khanak realizes he is there.. and she raises her head to look at Shaan.

She gets up suddenly and hugs him tight..Shaan is taken aback.. and holds his step! 'what just happened here?' he thinks.

He hugs Khanak tight too.. with the dupatta still in his hand..

After a few seconds.. Shaan tries to break the hug.. Khanak doesn't let go.. he holds on to him tight! She wants the world to stop.. she wants the time to stop.

She wants this moment all to herself.. to feel the hug.. to feel the closeness.. to feel Shantanu's love..

Shaan is confused.. what is wrong?

Shaan to Khanak "kyaa howwa Khanak?" tips her face up..

She has tears in her eyes.. 'I love you Shantanu' mein apse bauth pyaar kartee hoon'

Shaan face softens.. and he holds her chin between his fingers.. 'khanak .. mein tumko apne zaanse bhi zada pyaar karta hoon'

And gets his lips down to hers.. making it their first kiss.. their first kiss that both of them will remember.. and both of them seal their love with!

Khanak feeling the same passion discarding her inhibitions .. gives in.. to the love she feels for Shantanu.. her love .. and now her life!

Shaan breaking the kiss trails them to her nose.. eyes.. forehead.. and look at her and claims her lips again..

Khanak sighs' 'this is so perfect' she thinks..

As if he remembered something'. Shaan moves away from her.. puts the red dupatta on her head.. and says.. 'yeh apne pyaar ke leyee.. chalee?'

Khanak shy's '. Shaan scoops her in his arms.. and starts walking toward their room.. Khanak's head resting on his chest.. and looking very lovingly at him!!

Shaan puts her on the bed' takes her ghunghat off .. that he had just put and brings her down with him on the bed..

To make more promises.. promises forever' promises of life time.. promises of love.

Ohhhh gosh Jess.. *embarrassed*

thanks dear.. 🤗..Lovz!
I don't know what to say... this was so long!! But i loved putting it together and yes it is me😆

wonder who told veenz to write such a classic os.................lol

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

wonder who told veenz to write such a classic os.................lol

yaaaa.. yaaa Kay love this was for you!!!!
Yes Kay requested this in DT and wrote it for her!! phsst!!!

lololol🤗
i want one more like this but wen u feel like it

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

gals i have brought this thread frward fr all my new cutie pies here who wanted to read veenas os.......she was damn good at it.....pls do read n tell her to write more often.....................sheeeeeeeeeeesh veena i still get goose bumps reading yr way of romance😆

Jeeezzz Karishma.. i didn't know you got this thread forward.. thanks dear!!🤗 i guess i need to gear up after your examz.. i know you are going to bug me for Os's !LOL!

@May..
awwwww.... love our ShaNak.. i remember those days when we were sooo crazed about when the SR was going to happen and the cutness around it..
My fav was how they said ILU!!! that was the cutest!!!

@Azara..
LOL... Thanks dear.

@PK..
Thanks...

@Ankita..
awww @cute Besharam.. aww.. LOL! thanks!

@Shalini..
this was long time ago.. LOL... Thanks.

@Angel..
thanks hun!! Thanks.

@Ramani..
this is my only OS..LOL.. thanks dear!!!!

Thanks everyone!

wow veena im late but this was awesome. i loved the kitchen scene and then khanaks emotional i love you and the ahem ahem parts- arey vah veena youve kept that side on the DL lmao
pls write more it was good and i understand why u hesitated even i hesitated with my first ss as every1 on this forum is like super talented but you are no less xxx