*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 54

Originally posted by: yasharan.love

sorry guys, my internet is nt working properly, so am nt being able send PMs.... plz if u can inform ppl abt the update....

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

reserved.. oye i have to do live update omg pooja.. the update was awesome... i loved it....... iwas prepared for the worst... but then it turned out really good... really good.... btw why is coco with shaan isnt she khanak s dog... i loved it though.... i love shaan coco friendship.... a guy being friend with the girls dog.. how cute that can be....

oh i really liked aditya s out burst... and khanak s reply... of course he is not that important than shaan..

oh and the flowers... too good.... and shaan s dialogue... i donlike this somebody trying to woo my khanak was the best part......

he shud just go ahead and kiss her man.....

oh the ball... did i read that u ll update the next part in two days... love u dear..

loved the im thing.. it was really nice definitley e better impact than they talking it directly

thanks priya.... and Shaan kinda dog-sits coco, wen Khanak is away fr long....coco really does stay in both the houses, shaan has seperate utensild for her that are always in his place only...😆😆😆

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

No need, people look-out for you updates Pooja...Trust me!😃....

thanks may, didnt knw ppl look out fr my updates😳..............

Hey Pooja,
we haven't interacted directly...so I'm not sure if you know me...I'm Manita.
I was never into FF reading and writing initially.......so missed almost all....
But recently, at different stages, I was so disappointed with certain things, we all know, that I tried to divert my mind and I started writing an FF just like that and then developed a love for it......now I slowly started reading too .....and I realise that I missed some awesome work...... I am catching up on all the FFs that I had not read.........
You are a gifted writer.....have started reading your FF from the beginning and loved all that I have read till now.......
awesome style of writing !!

loved the update, it was hilarous, just wondering how and when these two will realize they are made for each other!

U r jst toooo gud!!jaldi se update kar yaar!

pooja yaar even im speechless.....................................................................

superb again 👏👏👏...loved ur new style.....loved the interaction through IMs.... oh man i dont like aditiya trying to wooo khanak.......awww at "my khanak" from shaan...soo cute......

cant wait for the ball now...loved the first dress......shaan ki bolti band ho gai khanak ko dekh kar....😆😆😆.......i hope they realize their feelings for each other ......

loved it ...continue soon ....

cheers

shai

The IM concept really worked and haha naughty shaan getting visions when she mentioned bath lol and ooh he seems to be happy that she didn't mention aditiya but his keeling himself distracted but doesn't feel for Kaira and awe aditiya falling for khanak and is a charmer how he is taking it by steps to impress her and haye shaan feeling jealous that he sent 'his' khanak those roses lol but that part was so cute with him sharing his not liking it with coco lol and awe shaan mesmerised by khanak that he is speachless anyways great update and can wait to read more 😊