*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 23

p.fashion.d maine kal se ap ki ff parhi hai and trust me it was awesome

u had gr8 talent of writing dear may i know ur name plz


plz update next part soon

Originally posted by: AzaraA

p.fashion.d maine kal se ap ki ff parhi hai and trust me it was awesome

u had gr8 talent of writing dear may i know ur name plz


plz update next part soon

thanks azara😃😃

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

omggggggggggg i fel soo bad fr shaan but i know my khanak will give him that love n as u hve said so that many kisses r there nin the future chapters v mayc an intense shank kis soon

loved the part very much
beautiful dialogues

plsssssssss update soon pooja dying toread the parts

thanks shanakyashran (wat is ur name yaar?)

Originally posted by: m4manju

hey i was waiting for this part..loved it... i always love the way u portray shan-khanak scenes ......... awesome...

and omg i cld perfectly imagine Sanaya as Aisha..(and who is Purab....Mohit?😉..JK)... ...loved the way he gave it back to Aisha at the end .....so i hope nw shan opens up to Aisha abt his anger and whatever his feelings were after their break-up....... waiting for next part...😊

manju Purab is mohit only for me.... but since he didnt hbe a significant role in the FF I though let ppl's imagination go wild.......

Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely part !!

But hey there was no Tonsil Hockeying in this one...!!

Hahahaa....I was waiting for sumthing...Hahhaa.!

Continue soon !!!

Luv,

Vandu

hahaha😆 I was planning for it but that part is in the nxt chap.... I hve a tendency to imagine the whole chap and it always ends up being content enough for two sometime three updates.... so lot of fun, cute, some romantic moments in the nxt chap.... and also the shaan- Aisha conversation...😃

Originally posted by: Yasharanrocks

ru updatng now???

no I will update arnd ...10:45 pm (indian time...)

haiiiiii Pooja!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

haiiiiii Pooja!!!!!!!

this was a mindblowin part yaar....thanks for tellin the reason behind their break up yaar main tho pagaal ho rahi thi😆

gosh i feel sooooo bad for Shaan but i know Khanak will take good care of him...

and yaar i love this angry shaan n hw he gave mooh todke jawab to Aisha!

thanks noorya!!😃

hey pooja... u are on an awesome writer i should say... potraying shaan and khanak in a totally different avatar is just amazing..... i am going fffidaaaaa over ur writing......and yet u maintain the essence of rbo i must say.... shaaan always confused and khanak the supporting and mature one...... waiting for some spicy shanak moments....... pls dont make us wait too long.....

Originally posted by: p.fashion.d

no I will update arnd ...10:45 pm (indian time...)

its 11:45 Indian time😡