16 Feb written - Ram back in Ayodhya

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Jai Siya Ram

I was not sure if I would be writing the update. Hence the delay.
Kaikeyi goes into a room. There are lots of spider-nets there. She sees Manthra in that room.
Manthra - Maharani Kaikeyi. (She laughs hysterically.)
Then she starts crying - Because of me, you and Bharat became most powerful in Ayodhya but you forgot me. Bharat did not invite me in his rajyabhishek though I caused Ram to be sent to forest for Bharat. Ram always respected him. And I was a fool that I always rebuked him. Maharani, please bring Ram back.
Kaikeyi cries and comes out.

In Nandigram:-
Bharat (to Vashishth) - Gurudev, if, before sunset, I do not get the news of Ram bhaiya's arrival, then I will jump into burning pyre and give up my life. You please take care of Ayodhya after my death and before Ram bhaiya comes back. It looks like during these 14 years, Ram bhaiya has forgotten me.
Hanuman takes the form of a brahman and comes there.
Hanuman - How can one forget the Sun of dharma?
Bharat - Brahman devta, who are you?
Hanuman - I am the servant of the Lord, who calls you Sun of dharma. I want to give a good news to you that Lord Sri Ram is coming with mother Sita and Laxman bhaiya.
Bharat - You are dearer and more precious to me than my life because you gave me such a gladdening news. My are my Ram bhaiya, Janaki bhabhi and my dearer than life Laxman? My eyes are eager to see them.
Hanuman - They are staying in sage Bhardwaj's ashram in Prayag. Tomorrow, in Pushp nakshatra, you will meet Lord Sri Ram.
Bharat tries to touch Hanuman's fees out of gratitude.
Hanuman - What are you doing? Lord Sri Ram's assistant is your assistant too. It seems like you did not recognize me.
Throughout sage Vashishth is smiling. It looks like he recognized Hanuman.
Hanuman says "Jai Sri Ram" and comes to his original form.
Bharat is happy to see Hanuman. They hug.
Bharat asks Vashishth to give this news to Ayodhya people.

Ram meets Nishadraj.
Ram - Friend, I am so fortunate to have friends like you, king Vibhishan and king Sugriv. I am indebted to you.
Nishadraj - Are you indebted to me or am I indebted to you?
Ram - No friend. I am indebted to you.
Ram accepts Nishadraj's hospitality. Ram, Sita, Laxman and others eat food provided by Nishadraj. (Looks like Ankit was very happy eating banana.😊)
Ram takes leave from Nishadraj.
Sita - Raghunandan, while going on exile, I had told mother Ganga that on coming back, I would worship her.
Ram - Certainly.

In Ayodhya, Kaushalya and Sumitra come out of the palace. There is huge crowd. They shout glory to Ram, Kaushalya and Sumitra. Soon Kaikeyi comes out. The public is enraged on seeing her.
They say - This is the Kaikeyi, who sent our Ram away from us. She wanted the throne. (To Kaikey)Ram called you mother and you sent him to forest. What kind of mother are you? Shame on you.
Sumantra asks them to stop.
A woman - I want to ask queen mother Kaushalya why did not kick Kaikeyi out of Ayodhya. Are you waiting for the solar dynasty to be destroyed?
Kaushalya - Please calm down. Let Ram come. He will answer all of your questions.
Public - When Ram comes, then Kaikeyi should not be here.
Shrutkirti - Keep quiet. Have you forgotten how to respect elders? Do not forget that mother Kaikeyi is queen mother.

Public - How can we respect the one who insulted our Ram? We are afraid that when Ram comes, then Kaikeyi will again make some scheme to send Ram back to forest. Before that we should send her away.
They pick some stones to hit Kaikeyi. But Kaushalya stands covering Kaikeyi. Kaikeyi cries and runs towards inside. Kaushalya consoles her.
Kaikeyi - Didi, I will leave Ayodhya.
Kaushalya - Without meeting your Ram? If Ram asks, "where is my mother?", what will I answer him?

Ram, Sita and Laxman come by Pushpak. All are glad to see them. Bharat is standing with Ram's footwears on his head. Ram comes out of Pushpak, picks up some dust and touches with his forehead. The background song says that soil of one's motherland is more precious than anything else.
Ram sees Vashishth and touches his feet. Vashishth hugs him.
Vashishth - Ram, your glories will be sung for eras. By killing Ravan, you enhanced the glory of your ancestors and whole of your dynasty. Together with other sages, I am also very glad.
Ram - It was all because of your blessings, gurudev.

Ram goes to Kaikeyi and folds his hands. Kaikeyi, with tears in her eyes, lowers her eyes out of embarrassment.
Episode ends.
Precap - Ram meets the people of Ayodhya. Shiv and Parvati watch.
Edited by akhl - 16 years ago


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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi, sorry for being late, i went to library and just got bk home.

since avinash has already posted a detailed update, i will just post the short update i wrote for today
see the following post
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Posted: 16 years ago
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~~~***** feb 16th written update( short )********~~~~~~~~~~

Tannistha

Part1

Kaikeyi goes iin to mantharas room and finds out, she is ragged, half mad and decaying in darkness. On this auspicious of event of ram returning back home, she forgave her and pitied her.

In nandigram, bharat promises to guru vashisht that if his elder borther Ram doesn't come, he will follow his word and sacrifice his life in burning fire. At this moment, hanuman, in disguise of the Brahmin comes to him and brings him the good news of lord ram , mother sita and laxman's arrival.

Bharat asks where is he. Hanuman replies that they r in prayag, in the asrama of rishi Bharadwaj. And tomorrow,on the auspicious event of pushya nakshtra, ram will come to him.

Bharat goes to touvh hanumans feet when hanuman stops him and assumes his monkey form. Bharat and hanuman embrace each other.

Ram is in the kingdom of nishad king guha , where all his company become guhas guest. The lord adornes

Part2:

Mother Kaushalya, Sumitra, followed by sumantra , Urmilla and Shrutakirti comes to see the subjects. The subjects greet them heartily with blessings and love. Then Kaikeyi also follows. Everyone is angry seeing her. They think that she is again upto some new schemes. And they decide to drive her away before she can do their beloved ram any more harm.

Sumantra tries to calm them down and tells them to go back. An old angry woman refuse to do so and asks Kaushlaya why Kaikeyi is still in the palace. Even Shrutakirti steps up to stop them but they will not stop. They keep on shouting.

A shocked Kaikeyi runs away crying, she decided to quit Ayodhya. Then Kaushlaya stops her. She says will you live without meeting your ra. When ram will ask where is my mother, what shall I tell him?

Part3 :

Every one is waiting for ram in nandigram. Bharat with his shoe in his head, the three mothers, the three sisters all are eagerly waiting for ram.

Finally they all arrive in pushpak viman. First ram climbs down. Then he worships the ground and mother earth. Then they all climb down. Amidst the greeting of everyone, Ram , sita and Laxman and everyone else approaches. Ram first worships maharishi Vashisth. Then he worships his mothers. Ashe reaches Kaikeyi, she faces the earth in shame.

Precap:

Raja ram, in thousand forms, hugs and embraces and worships every citizen of Ayodhya .

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks avinash and tan for the update
they did rush through a bit and dragged it a bit too but it was good episode
i was wondering what happend to manthra now it seems ram wud forgive her too
pre cap was good
another of ram leela
turns into many rams to hug each and every citizen and in his royal attire
but i think rajyaabhishek wud be on thursday
today ram bharat milap
i liked bharat today
he was tooo good waitin for his brother and his emotions were good
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the fav update avinash👏
waiting for ram coronation , hope this time it wud be done with grand celebration scene, also waiting for four ved to come in human form to praise sri ram, wish sagar should show it in best of there abilities 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the updates akhl and its me tan for the good updates (and congrats on becoming a memeber of the Dev Team too).
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh yes, Ankit looked very pleased to have a banana!!

Thnx for da update to akhl n tan.


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