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Posted: 17 years ago
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RK_fan : Thanks a lot! Yes, the language was an issue 😆 😆 😆 I really had to get the pure hindi out that was somewhere deep down hidden! The biggest challenge is that I cannot let Rani and the servants converse in English other than using a few words here and there. All of them have to talk in Hindi!!
In my FF too they will meet at a ball. But before that many things will happen!

Shweta : Thank you! It feels wonderful when you are appreciated. 🤣 Haan, Nandu yahaan bhi, but this Nandu is not as important character as the other Nandu was. 😆
And your comment that you were reminded of my FF has really gladdened my heart! Thanks a lot.

Lubna : Thanks a lot! I am very glad that you liked it. Next part will be up soon!! 😛

Benaz : Thank you! The first couple of parts will have a lot of introductions of the characters along with the story, specially because I have created my own characters!

Payal : Take your time! I am not going anywhere 😆 and thank you for liking the introduction!

Thank you everyone, for taking the time to read!!! The next part is ready. I am proof-reading it 😆. It will be up in a couple of hours!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Friends,

A couple of assumptions! I am not going to let Rani's character be an out and out servant and do any menial jobs, because I don't beleive it is practical for a servant to become Queen.
Next, among the servants, I am not going to have too many villains. Because I am sure that will be covered well in the serial 😉 😆. I would prefer to concentrate on the Prince and Rani. 😊

Next part..............

Re-cap : Rani reaches the city. She is awed by the palace. She is introduced to the Rajmaata (also called Rani maa) and the King. Rani maa mentions about Rani working for her which confuses Rani. The prince cannot forget Rani's voice.

PART -2 : SERVANT PHASE


Lakshmi : Ab raat bhar yahin khadi rahegi kya? Chal jaldi!
Rani stares at Lakshmi.
Pradhan : Jaldi jaa kar so jao. Mei subah theek saat baje aa jaunga.
And he walks away and Lakshmi also starts to walk and Rani follows her slowly. They traverse through the same path again, but this time Rani does not notice anything in the palace!! Her mind is completely clouded. She is thinking "Lekin maa ne toh kahaa tha ke mei sheher mei college ki padhai karungi. Lekin yeh log toh kaam karne ki baat kar rahe hai. Mujhe kuch samajh mei nahi aa rahaa. Mei kya karu?" 😕
She is lost in thoughts and does not realize that they have reached the servant quarters. Lakshmi takes her to a room on the ground floor.
Lakshmi : Aaj se yeh kamraa tumhaara.
Rani enter the room and looks around. It will be a small room, perfect for one person. There will be a cot in one corner of the room with a mattress, a pillow and a bedsheet on it. There will be a cupboard and a table and chair, next to the bed. There will also be a lamp on the table. There will be a window in the room that opens into the garden. Rani goes and opens the window and from the window the whole right side of the royal palace is clearly visible.
Rani is staring at the palace when she hears Lakshmi talking. Rani turns to listen to her.
Lakshmi : Raj mahal ke bahut se taur-tareeke hai, jo har naukar ko yaad rakhne chahiye.
And she starts off.........
Lakshmi : Sabse pehle, jab tak koi kaam na ho, Raj mahal mei nahi jaana. Doosri baat, jab tak Raj parivaar mei se kisine tumhe bulaaya nahi ho, unke saamne mat jaana. Raj parivaar subah aath se sadhe aath baje naashta karte hai, baarah se ek baje dopahar ka khaana khaate hai aur shaam mei saath se aath baje, raat ka khaana khaate hai. Unke khaane ke baad hi, hum sabko khaana milega. Agar kisi wajah se tumhe baahar jaana ho, toh meri angya leni hogi. Baahar jaane aur aane se pehle, phaatak ke paas tumhaari talashi lee jaayegi. Raat ke nau baje ke baad, baahar aana ya jaana manaa hai. Har mahine ke paanch tareekh ko tumhe pagaar mil jaayegi...............
Lakshmi just continues without taking a break and Rani is listening to her hard!!
Finally......
Lakshmi : Agar tumhe kuch chahiye ya koi pareshaani ho to mujhe kehna, theek hai?
Rani shakes her head in the affirmative.
Lakshmi : Ab apna samaan leke aa jao yahaan. Mei ek ghante mei aaungi aur tumhe raat ke khaane ke liye le jaungi. Wahaan baaki logon se mil lena.
They both walk out of the room. Rani goes to the kitchen and takes her bag and comes back to her room. She closes the door and goes and sits on the bed. She is exhausted, hungry and her mind is in a turmoil. She does not understand what to make out of the situation. She thinks..."Pataa nahi kaise lekin Rani sahibaa ko koi galat-fehmi ho gayi hai. Shaayad Maa ne jo kahaa, woh unke samajh mei nahi aaya. Mujhe Pradhanji ko baataana hoga".
Rani opens her bag and slowly takes her stuff out. She first pulls out the family photo that her daadi had given her just before she started for the city. They all had taken that photo in the Lodhi mela that was held recently in the village. Rani stares at the photo. Tears fill up her eyes and suddenly she feels very homesick. She recollects what her daadi said about her being a fighter, who has always fought to come on top.
Then she slowly removes the eatables that her Mom had packed for her and she remembers what her mom had told her about studying well and earning a degree, thereby fulfilling her Dad's wishes.
And then she slowly takes out the pen that masterjee had given. Then, she remembers how she promised munna that she will not go to the city and she will burst into tears. 😭 😭
Rani cries her heart out and after a while controls herself. Just then she hears knocking on the door. Rani goes and opens the door. Lakshmi is standing out. Rani does not realize that an hour had passed already! Lakshmi sees the red swollen eyes of Rani and feels pity on her.
Lakshmi : Kya hua Rani? Tum ro rahi thi, kya?
Rani does not reply but just stares down.
Lakshmi : Tumhaare gharwaalon aur gaanv ki yaad aa rahi thi kya?
Rani still does not reply.
Lakshmi : Lagta hai pehli baar ghar chodh ke aayi ho.
She comes closer to Rani and rubs her back.
Lakshmi : Mat ro, hum sab hai na tumhaare paas. Dheere dheere tumhe yeh jagah bhi accha lagega. Aur phir tum hamesha ke liye thode na aayi ho. Ekdin phir gaanv chali jaogi. Bas dheeraj se kaam lo.
Rani looks at Lakshmi greatfully and says
Rani : Ji maasi.
Lakshmi (with a smile) : Ab maasi kahaa hai toh baat bhi maanani padegi. Chalo jaldi. Khaane ka samay ho gayaa hai aur tumhe bhook bhi lagi hogi. Apni aankhen pocho aur chalo.
Rani quickly wipes her eyes and both of them go towards the dining area which will be just outside the kitchen. They reach the dinig hall. Rani sees about 20 servants...men and women all taking their seats. She looks around for Pradhan and notices that he is not there. Rani understands that he eats in his room and does not mingle with the servants.
Lakshmi gets a seat arranged for Rani besides her. Everybody sits down when Lakshmi announces
Lakshmi (referring to Rani) : Yeh Rani hai aur aaj hi gaanv se aayi hai. Yeh Rani maa ke dekhbaal ke liye laayi gayi hai. Rani ko koi bhi kaam bataane se pehle, tum log mujh se pooch lena. Mujhe bataaye bina Rani ko koi bhi kaam mat saumpna. Samajh gaye?
All the servants whisper among themselves and everyone shake their heads. And then Lakshmi introduces them one by one.
Lakshmi : Rani, yeh chamki hai, yeh Jhumpa, yeh Nandu, yeh Billu, yeh Ramkhilawan................
And she goes on......Some give her friendly smiles, some are hostile towards her. And Rani just looks at all of them.
Lakshmi : Sabka parichay kar diya. Ab chalo khaate hai. Taayee, khaano paroso.
Taayee and her kitchen staff start serving food. Once they have finished serving, Rani closes her eyes and starts to pray.It is her habit to always pray before eating. When she opens her eyes after praying, she sees a hand grabbing the jalebi that was served in her plate. Rani will grab that hand and it freezes. Rani turns to see a 7 year old boy. He is looking with fear in his eyes. It is the same boy who had dashed into her outside the kitchen a few hours ago.
Rani (with a smile) : Tumhe jalebi chahiye?
The boy shakes his head in refusal.
Rani : Nahi chahiye? Toh theek hai mai kha leti hun.
She picks up the jalebi acting like she is going to eat it.
Rani : Kha loo?
The boy shakes his head again in refusal.
Rani : Accha, mei nahi kahu? Toh tum khaalo?
Rani takes the jalebi closer to the boy. Just then Lakshmi who was sitting next to Rani says
Lakshmi : Arre Chintu, tu abhi tak soya nahi? Yahaan kya kar rahaa hai?
Chintu runs over to his Mom looking at Rani
Chintu : Maa......mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi...
Lakshmi : Neend nahi aa rahi thi ya tu neend ko aane nahi de rahaa tha? Rani, yeh meraa beta hai. Bada sharaarati hai, iss se bachke rehna.
Rani smiles and again gives him the jalebi. This time chintu takes it and eats it in one gulp. Lakshmi and Rani laugh and start eating their food.
Chintu : Maa, yeh nayi didi kaun hai?
Lakshmi : Yeh nayi didi ka naam Rani hai. Yeh aaj hi gaanv se aayi hai. Didi ko bilkul pareshaan mat karnaa. Samjhe?
Chintu shakes his head in affirmative.
Rani : Aao, mere paas aake baitho. 😃
Chintu goes and sits beside her. Rani offers him another jalebi. He grabs that too and eats.
Lakshmi ; Arre rani, bas karo, varnaa yeh tumhe kuch bhi nahi khaane dega.
Rani : Koi baat nahi maasi, waise bhi mujhe mithayi zyaada pasand nahi.
Chintu : Tumne mithai dee hai toh Kya mujhe tumhaari har baat manani hogi??
Rani looks at him suprised. She remembers her brother munna and for a minute gets emotional. Then she says
Rani : Nahi munna, tumhe har baat nahi manani hogi.
Chintu : Meraa naam munna nahi Chintu hai. 😳
Rani blinks and smiles : Theek hai chintu, ab se tumhe chintu hi bulaungi.
Everyone finishes dinner and Rani cleans up her plate.
Lakshmi : Tumhe subah utha doo kya? Pradhanji samay ke bahut paaband hai. Aur unhe der honaa bilkul accha nahi lagta.
Rani : Nahi maasi, mei khudh uth jaungi. Mujhe gaanv mei jaldi uthne ki aadat hai.
She goes to her room bidding goodbye to Lakshmi and Chintu. Once she reaches her room, Rani unpacks all her stuff and stores them and then lies down to go to sleep. She cannot sleep for a long time and then Slowly she drifts into sleep.

In the palace
Yudi is relaxing in his room, when his phone rings. Yudi picks up his cell phone.
Pramod : Pranaam mahaaraj!!
Yudi (a smile spreading on his face) : Pramod!! What's up buddy?
Pramod : Dhanyavaad maharaj, jo aapne hame pehchaana!
Yudi : Kaisi baat kar rahaa hai?
Pramod : Aur nahi toh kya? US se aate hi jaise laapataa ho gayaa? Na phone, na ataa, na pataa.
Yudi : Arre, abhi thodi der pehle hi toh aaya hun gaav se.
Pramod : Aapke rajya mei sab kushal-mangal toh hai?
Yudi : Mere rajya mei nahi, mere pitaaji ke rajya mei kaho.
Both laugh.
Pramod : Accha, kal ka kya program hai? Kal lunch mei mil sakte ho kya?
Yudi : Absolutely. Kal afternoon ko koi plan nahi hai.
Pramod : Theek hai toh mai tujhe theek baarah baje milunga, Country Club mei. Meine Softtech Inc ke do executives ko bhi bulaaya hai, hamaare proposal ko discuss karne.
Yudi : Excellent! Mei pahunch jaunga.
Then they converse for a while about his trip, their proposal and disconnect the call.
Yudi cannot sleep and so he starts to surf channels. In one channel a song will blare out of TV. Yudi remembers Rani's voice. He walks over to his almirah, opens it and takes Rani's dupatta out. He stares it for a few moments recollecting her voice. Then he sighs with frustration. Suddenly he hears somebody knock on his door. He puts away the dupatta and closes the door of the almirah. He goes and opens the door and a smile spreads on his face.
Yudi : Namrata! Tu kab aayi?
Namrata : Pranam Kunwar ji. Bas abhi abhi aayi hun.
And she walks in and Yudi closes the door.
Namrata (rushes to hug the Prince) : BHAIYYA!!!!!!!!!
Yudi (with a smile) : Andar aate hi bhaiyya aur baahar se Kunwar ji??????
Namrata (with a huge smile on her face) : Woh toh Raja saheb ke manaa karne ki wajah se mujhe aapko Kunwar ji kehna padhta hai. Varna toh mei hamesha bhaiyya hi kahun!
Yudi smiles and Namrata hugs him again and Yudi hugs back.
Namrata : Finally!! Ab jaake milna hua. Jab aap US se aaye mei Naani ke paas gayi hui thi aur abhi waapas aayi hun! I really missed you, bhaiyaa!!
Yudi : Me too! Aa, baithke baatein karte hai.
Namrata : Nahi bhaiyya, raat bahut ho gayi hai. Mei toh bas ek baar milna chahthi thi aapse aur yeh poochne aayi thi ki aapka kal ka program kya hai?
Yudi : Kal dopahar tak toh booked hun, lekin I am free in the evening.
Namrata (excitedly) : Theek hai toh evening ka program mei banaaungi. We will have some fun!!! Aap koi aapointment mat rakhiye.
Yudi (with a smile) : Theek hai!
Namrata again hugs him and wishes him good night and leaves. Yudi keeps watching her till she gets out of sight and he waves his hand at her just before she turns the corner and closes the door. Then he changes and turns in for the night.

KNOCK KNOCK.........KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK! (Hard knocking!!!)

Rani jerks out of sleep and sits up on her bed!!!!Daylight is streaming into her room from the open window. She looks towards the door where somebody is knocking the door loudly. Last night's Laksmi maasi's warning comes rushing to her mind........." Pradhanji samay ke bahut paaband hai. Unhe der hona bilkul pasand nahi!!!". She is shocked!! 😲😲 She can't believe it is already 7.00 AM!!! She looks towards the door in fear!!! 😒😒
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ohhhhhh my god praggu..i don't know that u r such a good writer..i mean fan fictions..i saw u as a good analysist and balanced person at ED..wow..superb..the language u used and every thing fentabulous..first i confused a little about charecters..but after reading completely i am ok..will continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Just read the 2nd part Pragz!It is awesome! 👏 When I was watching the eppy i could almost see the scenes what u had written in the first part..too good yaar! 👏 You can easily forward this script to the production house...U are fantastic! 👏 I liked the way the Prince is involving himself in business! Hope to see more of him! 😳 It is good that Rani found someone similar to munna! Will wait for ur next part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pragalbha,

wow wow ...u r too good ... 👏 👏 ...felt like i was actually watching the serial ... 😊 ... really liked the way u brought someone whom rani can relate to as munna ..
keep it up .... will defo wait for the next part ...

lubna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sindhu : Thanks a lot dear! I feel really good to know that you liked the FF. Yes there are a lot of characters but I am sure you will get used to them, slowly.

RK_fan : Thank you!!! I am glad you noticed my 'sheher ka munna'! 😆 Thanks a lot for all your comments!

Lubna : Thank you very much! I wanted to alleviate Rani's pain a bit and so thought I will introduce someone similar to munna, so she will feel more at home! I appreciate your comments! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pppp😃

Iam still getting used to the character names and their relationships to Prince😆😆😆

Am luving the start off of the FF. Do continue and please yaaaar, dont elaborate on Rani's problems or the servant quarters now😆.... Jump straight into Rani-Prince story naaaa😆

And why did u introduce the best frnd of Prince now??? Iam hoping to not see another RaS here now😆😆😆

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Krishi,

Thanks dear for taking the time to read and leave your comments. I will not focus too much on Rani's servant quarter troubles at this point. But her meeting with Prince has to wait a bit. She will meet him soon, in a couple of parts. 😃

Next part...........coming up! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Re-cap : Rani comes to know that she is to be a servant. She is shocked! Lakshmi, head of the staff is a kind woman and comforts Rani. Rani meets chintu (Laxmi's son). Namrata, Yudi's sister is introduced and Yudi's best friend Pramod calls up Yudi.

PART - 3 : HONORED & APPRECIATED

Rani gets tensed and rushes to the door. She opens the door and finds Pradhan standing at her door with a deep frown on his face. 😔
Pradhan (very coldly) : Tum abhi tak jagi nahi???
Rani (flustered) : Ji.....ji woh mujhe raat ko bahut....bahut der tak neend nahi aayi. Subah aankh lag gayi aur...
Pradhan (cutting her) : Mujhe bahaane MAT sunao! Mujhe sakht chid hai unn logon se jo, samay ke paaband nahi!!! Aaj pehli aur aakhri baar tumhe kshamaa kar rahaa hun! Aadhe ghante mei tayyar hoke, baahar aa jao. Thees minute ke baad ek bhi minute mei intezaar nahi karunga? Samjhi???
Rani shakes her head and he leaves abruptly. Rani rushes to the bathroom and quickly brushes, showers and gets ready and runs out.
At 7.29 AM she will be standing in front of Pradhan huffing. Pradhan gives her a cold stare and starts walking. Rani follows him. They reach his office room and he sits in his chair while Rani stands in front of him.
Pradhan : Rani maa ka thode din pehle ghutnon ka operation hua tha. Ve ab swasthya hai, lekin abhi bhi unhe uthne-baithne mei takleef hoti hai aur unhe madad chahiye hoti hai. Unhe dawaiyan yaad nahi hoti hai, hamesha yaad dilaana padhta hai. Lekin iss umar mei bhi unka dimaag bahut tez hai aur woh hamesha koi na koi kaam mei lagi rehti hai. Unhe apne paas koi chahiye jo unke bataaye hue kaam kare. Raj parivar ke sab log bahut vyasta rehte hai, toh wo bahut akeli ho gayi hai. Tumhe unki sewa karni hogi. Unhe sahaara dena hoga.
Rani (mustering some courage) : Mei......mei aapse kuch kehna chahti hun.
Pradhan : Jo bhi kehna ho jaldi kaho, waise hi hame aadhe ghante ki deri hui hai.
Rani : Woh....woh meri maa ne mujhse kahaa tha ke Rani sahibaa mujhe sheher padh.....
She is interrupted by a servant.
Servant : Pradhanji, Rani maa kaa aadesh hai ke aap unke saamne upasthith ho.
Pradhan (getting up from his chair) : Theek hai. Chalo Rani.
Rani : Lekin mei keh rahi thi ki....😕
Pradhan : Baad mei keh lena, abhi chalo!
He walks out and Rani has no option but to follow him. Pradhan takes her to the interiors of the palace. In the palace all rooms of the princesses and Rani maa will be in left wing. The rooms of the princes will be in the right wing and the King and Queen will live towards the center of the palace.
The palace is 4 storeys high and so there is a centralized internal lift system that is available for use between the floors. And the palace is linked to the servant quarters through a corridor that is open on the sides but covered at the top and lined with beautiful flowers on both sides.
The first floor has several drawing rooms, entertaining halls and dining halls.
The second floor is completely the living quarters of the royal family.
The third floor will have guest bedrooms, a huge library, a game room, a media room and a completely equipped gym.
And the top floor is the terrace, part of it covered and part open, filled with small pocket gardens some of which are private, providing a relaxing location to sit and enjoy nature and a swimming pool for the personal use of the Royal family.
And upfront will be a beautifully maintained and manicured garden. In the middle of the garden will be a small temple. The temple will have a most beautiful murti of RadhaKrishna. This temple will be the personal temple of the royal family but everyone in the palace is allowed to visit. A resident priest conducts puja in this temple every morning and evening. Rani maa makes it a point to attend the morning puja everyday.

After passing several rooms, Rani and Pradhan reach Rani maa's room. Pradhan stops outside and knocks at the door. A servant comes out and checks who it is and then she goes in and announces them.
Servant : Pradhanji aaye hai.
Rani maa : Unhe aane ki angya hai.
The servant goes out and lets them in. They walk into a beautiful, huge, amazing room filled with rich decorations, exquisite chandeliers and portraits of the royal family. Rani is mesmerized and her mouth is left open. Rani maa is sitting at her study desk and looking at some papers. She looks up at them.
Pradhan : Pranaam Rani maa.
Rani walks up a bit closer to her and bends down to touch her feet and says
Rani : Pranaam, Rani maa.
Rani maa (shaking her head as accepting the pranam) : Raat ko neend acchi aayi?
Rani shakes her head in the affirmative.
Rani maa (with a smile) : Kya samjhaya Pradhan ne tujhe? Ke mei buddhi ho gayi hun, aur mujhe sahaara chahiye? 😊
Rani does not know what to answer.
Pradhan : Rani maa!!! Mei aisi baat aapke baare mei kaise keh sekta hun?
Rani maa : Haan haan, jaanti hun tumne kya bataaya hoga. Yahaan toh sab mujhe besahaara banaane pe tule hua hai! Accha Pradhan, ab tum jao. Puja ka samay ho gayaa hai. Mei Rani ko leke mandir jaungi.
Pradhan : Jo angya, Rani maa!
And he leaves saluting the old Queen.
Rani maa (looking at Rani) : Chalo Rani, mandir ho aate hai.
It will be 7.45 AM and time for Rani maa to go to the morning puja. So she gets up with Rani's help and walks towards the door. She has just about reached the door when she suddenly remembers that she has not worn her shawl. She turns to Rani
Rani maa : Rani, baaju waale kamre mei, sofe pe mera shawl hai. Thoda woh laake degi?
Rani : Ji, Rani maa.
Rani walks out into the other room when a knock is heard on the door. The personal servant of Rani maa will open the door and Yudi is standing outside!!!
Servant : Pranam, Kunwar ji.
Rani maa : Arre beta tum?
Yudi comes in.
Yudi (touching her feet) : Pranaam, Rani maa!
Rani maa (her face radiating a wide smile): Jeete reh puttar. 😃
And she kisses his forehead.
Yudi : Aap mandir jaa rahi hai shaayad?
Rani maa : Haan, puja ka samay ho gayaa hai na. Aur aaj thodi der bhi ho gayi hai.
Yudi : Chaliye mei aapko leke chalta hun.
Rani maa : Theek hai. (Turning to servant)...Rani ko mandir kaa raasta bataa dena aur kehna ki woh wahaan aa jaaye.
Servant : Ji, Rani maa.
Yudi holds his grandmother's hand and they both walk out of the room and slowly walk towards the lift, talking enroute.
Yudi : Aaj aap ki tabiyat kaisi hai, Rani maa?
Rani maa : Beta, yahaan toh aur koi nahi hai, mujhe daadi kehke pukaar.
Yudi : Ji, daadi.
Rani maa : Acchi hun.....bas budhapa hai aur koi bimaari nahi hai. Aur budhape ki dawaai hai bacchon ka saath.
Yudi : Jaanta hun Rani maa, mujhe bhi bahut dukh hai iss baat kaa, ke mei paanch saalon se aapse door rahaa hun. Lekin ab waapis aa gayaa hun, toh aapko chodhke kahin nahi jaunga.
Here Rani comes out with the shawl when the servant tells her that the prince is escorting Rani maa to the mandir and Rani maa has asked her to come to the temple. Rani sees Rani maa walking in the corridor at a distance. She starts after them. Rani just turns the corner when she sees them getting into the lift. Rani sees the staircase right next to the lift and takes the stairs. Rani maa and Yudi have reached the ground floor and are just out of the lift and walking forward when Rani also reaches downstairs. Rani comes up from behind them and whispers to Rani maa...
Rani : Shawl, Rani maa.
And hands over the shawl to Rani maa from the side. She cannot get a glimpse of the prince and he does not even realize that she is present. The prince and Rani maa walk upfront, while Rani walks several steps behind. Once again she can only see the prince from the back but still his magnetic personality will amaze her. 😳 He is six feet tall, very well-built and has a very authoritative gait.
They reach the temple. The prince and Rani maa go in. A few of the servants will be standing outside and Rani goes and joins them. She has a clear view of the deity and prays to the God with her hands folded and her eyes closed. The priest conducts the puja and after the puja, gives prasad to Rani maa and the Prince. And then he passes the prasad to his assistant who gives it to all the rest of the people. Rani maa and the Prince turn to leave when Panditji calls the Prince
Pandit ji : Kunwar ji, mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi.
The Prince walks back to him while Rani maa continues to walk. She soon reaches the stairs and everyone present wishes her and she responds to everybody. Soon all the servants leave and Rani maa says to Rani
Rani maa : Rani, tu bhi ab jaakar nashta karle. Nashta karke phir dus baje aa jaana mere paas.
Rani : Ji, Rani maa.
She does pranaam to Rani maa and leaves. Rani maa sees her going and thinks aloud
Rani maa : Bahut acchi bacchi hai. Kitni bholi hai!
Yudi (from besides her) : Kaun bholi hai Rani maa?
Rani maa : Rani.
Yudi : Kaun Rani?
Rani maa : Wahi ladki jise Rani sahibaa ne meri dekh-baal ke liye gaanv se laaya.........usska naam Rani hai.
Rani maa is staring after Rani and the prince follows her gaze. He just catches a glimpse of Rani before she turns a corner and is gone!!
Yudi : Arre haan, Rani maa. Mei bhi usse dhanyavad karna chah rahaa tha.
Rani maa (puzzled) : Dhanyavad? Kyun??
Yudi : Aap ghabraa jaayengi iss liye nahi bataana chahta tha, lekin kal gaanv se aate samay, ussne mujhe saanp se bachaaya.
Rani maa (alarmed) : SAANP?? 😲
Yudi : Haan, agar ussne mujhe dhakha nahi maraa hotaa toh, woh saanp mujhe zaroor dhas leta!
Rani maa shivers involuntarily and holds the Prince's hand very tight. The prince reassures her that everything is fine and escorts her back to the palace for breakfast.

Rani is walking back to the servant quarters admiring the lovely garden on her way. She had never seen so many beautiful flowers together in one place. She slowly walks through checking out the flowers and the plants when she suddenly stops in her tracks!!! There is a water fountain right in front of her!! Rani is amazed, as she had never seen anything like that before!!! Rani slowly walks up to it, staring at the water being pumped in and out of the fountain. She walks around the fountain, her face and hands getting wet with the cold water that is splashing up a light shower on her. She looks at it for a long time and then slowly makes her way to the dining hall in the servant quarters. She eats her breakfast and while cleaning up, sees Lakshmi there and approaces her.
Rani : Lakshmi maasi, Chintu kahaan hai?
Lakshmi : Arre, woh toh school gayaa hai. Dopahar ke do baje lautega. Tu kaisi hai? Rani maa ke paas kaam shuru kiya kya?
Rani : Haan, wahin se aa rahi hun. Abhi thodi der mei phir waapis jaana hoga. Maasi, Raani maa bahut acchi hai.
Lakshmi : Haan, woh toh devi hai devi. Bahut hi dayaalu hai. Aur unhi ke jaise hai Kunwar ji. Bahut hi gunavaan aur dayaavaan!!
Rani's ears perk up as soon as she hears the Prince mentioned. But just then someone interrupts Lakshmi and she leaves. Rani also leaves. She seeks another servant's help to get to Rani maa's room. She is getting familiar with the palace but is still very confused about navigating through the palace. She reaches Rani maa's room and seeks permission to enter. She is asked to come in.
Rani maa : Aa gayi, Rani?
Rani : Ji, Rani maa.
Rani maa : Mere paas aao.
Rani comes and stands near Rani maa. Rani maa takes a gold chain out of a box near her and asks Rani to come closer. Rani goes more closer to Rani maa and Rani maa puts the gold chain around Rani's neck. Rani is shocked!
Rani : Rani maa, yeh kya???
Rani maa (her eyes a little moist) : Meine sunaa hai ke, tumne kal Kunwar ji ko saanp se bachaaya! Bas isi baat kaa inaam dena chahti thi.
Rani : Lekin, Rani maa, woh toh meraa dharm tha.
Rani maa : Lekin phir bhi tumne jo kiyaa, woh Raj parivaar peh bahut badaa upkaar tha.
Rani touches her feet. She feels very honored!
Rani maa : Arre bas, bas. Ab uth jao.
Rani gets up and while getting up notices that the Queen is painting. She is painting a village scene. The scene depicts the village temple where all the villagers have assembled to celebrate the festival of Lodhi. She is an excellent painter. Rani is amazed to see the painting. She cannot take her eyes off the painting. Rani maa notices it and says
Rani maa : Acchi lagi tumhe meri yeh chitr?
Rani shakes her head in the affirmative.
Rani (excitedly) : Rani maa, yeh toh bilkul meri gaanv ki tarah hai!!
Rani maa : Haan, mei tumhaari gaanv ki chitr hi banaa rahi hun. Kai barson se mei gaanv aur haveli ko dekhne nahi gayi hun. Isiliye soch rahi thi ki ek chitr banaakar hi apni yaad tazaa kar lu.
Rani : Lekin, Rani maa, mere gaanv mei toh Shiv ji ka mandir hai, aapne toh Krishna ji ki murthi banaayi hai uss mandir mei.
Rani maa stops painting and stares at the painting for a moment and then bursts out laughing 😆 😆
Rani maa : Arre, sach kahaa tune. Gaanv mei to Shiv ji ka mandir hai. Lekin koi baat nahi, bhagwan ke roop kai hai, lekin bhagwan toh ek hi hai na?
Rani shakes her head in the affirmative.
Rani maa : Accha, kuch aur bataa apne gaanv ke baare mei jo meri iss chitr mei nahi hai.
Rani (looks at the painting, deep in thought) : Gaanv ke mandir ke paas jo pedh hai, usspe bahut si auratien aakar dhagaa bandhti hai, vrat aur mannat ke dhage. Lekin aapke chitr kaa pedh toh ekdum khali hai.
The Queen smiles. Rani suggests a couple of other improvements and Rani maa loves the straighforwardness of Rani. After seeing cunning and conniving people around her for years, Rani's disarming honesty and clarity is very refreshing to her!!!
Rani maa (with a smile) : Bahut bhadiya Rani!! Tumhaari avalokana (observation) shakti bahut acchi hai! Chalo tumhaare bataaye hue sudhaar karte hai chitr mei.
Rani maa starts to make the improvements. She continues to talk to Rani while painting
Rani maa : Accha Rani, tumhaare parivaar mei aur kaun kaun hai?
Rani starts talking about her family - her mom, daadi, munna while Rani maa is listening intently. They keep conversing and time just flies.

Meanwhile Yudi meets up with his Dad as scheduled. They discuss Yudi's future plans and his intentions to join the King's business interests versus starting off on his own. The King brings him upto speed on several ongoing projects. After the lengthy meeting, they disperse and Yudi drives off to meet Pramod for another business lunch at the Country Club.
Pramod and he meet up. They embrace each other with a lot of affection.
Pramod : Yaar, aisa lag rahaa hai jaise kai mahinen ho gaye tujhse milke!
Within a few minutes they are joined by the other two men, executives of the company with whom Yudi and Pramod are wanting to start a joint venture. They all sit for lunch. Those two executives are in awe of Yudi! Eventhough no royal dynasties are recognized anymore by the Government, it still does not reduce the royal aura that people feel around the Prince!!
They discuss a business proposal drafted by Yudi and Pramod. The business lunch continues for almost an hour and a half. Finally it is decided to hold a presentation in front of the other top executives of the company. They conclude the lunch and the other executives leave.
Pramod and Yudi settle down to have some coffee. They are discussing several aspects of the proposal while sipping coffee when Pramod suddenly says
Pramod : Kaun hai woh, Yudi?
Yudi blinks at him confused : Kya matlab?
Pramod : Tujhe itne saalon se jaanta hun, ke mei teri har bechaini bhaanp sakta hun. Tere mann mei kuch chal rahaa hai. Tu meeting mei participate toh kar rahaa tha, lekin kisike khayalon mei khoya hua tha. Kaun hai woh?
Yudi stares at Pramod, shocked and surprised at how well his friend knows him!!! 😲
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Pragggg ..tumne mujhe bataya nahi ki tumne FF Start ki hai 😭 mujhe RK ne bataya aaj ..so main tujhe iss galti ke liye kabhi maaf nahi karungi 😡😆

maine 2 parts read kiye hai ...so 3 part main shaam ko read karungi 😳 and than i give my comment 😳 cos abhi main baacho ko school lene jaa rahi hoon ..so baad meh aati hoon 😳

And both parts are mindblowing 👏..wesse toh maine yee serial abhi nahi dekha ...lekin ab sart karungi ...

See u later 😳

Manpreet

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