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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Doing really very well you are Sujata.

I loved this part. I like the way they meet a second time. keep up the good work. 😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankyou Purva,Rosh,Faiza & Bobbie for liking it... here goes part 3

Part 3

Yudi's joy knew no bounds as their longing eyes met...he was dazzled by her beauty...he hated formal clothes....but he had a feeling he will soon begin to love them...she was so pure...He felt a sudden urge to touch her but slowly controlled his emotions...He was stupefied at his desires ranging which he had kept firmly locked in his heart...He felt the saxophones ringing... as if someone is playing his love music...this time he made it a point to shake her hands come what may....

Meanwhile Rani stood there in a trance...she could not believe her eyes.... Fate had got them back on the same platform...She could not understand the sudden ray of happiness that engulfed her face.... She felt a love music playing in the back-ground wondered whether it's her imagination... this time she really wanted to cure the uneasiness which lay in her heart for not shaking her hands the other time...

Still lost in each other's thoughts both moved their hands in order to shake... As they introduced themselves this time together...

"Yudi".. "Rani"..

"I Know"' "I Know"... Yet again simultaneously...

Both embarrassed at their behaviour'...smiled sheepishly at each other'...wondering what the other might think... but finally when their hands met.. they felt a sudden feeling of completeness...how much ever they tried they could not keep their eyes off each other...

Their eye-lock was broken when Yudi's father called out "Kunwar"' Rani was stunned to note that Yudi was the prince who had come from abroad'... before she could fathom this truth....Her friend Kali came there looking for her... both disappointed at the choice of fate.. excused themselves... as their hands separated...they felt a part of themselves separating from within...they could not understand what came over them..

His father introduced him to his friends.... Yudi pasted a force smile on his face... although he was talking to the guests...his eyes never met their face ...they were busy looking out for Rani'

Kali informed Rani that a small piece of decoration had come out...and asked Rani to fix it and handed over the table to her...Rani agreed to do it while Kali excused herself to do some other work...leaving Rani to climb on the table to fix it... Yudi excused himself on the pretext of checking out the catering... as that gave him a chance to know more about Rani without anyone suspecting him.. he frantically looked out for Rani and wondered where she had disappeared to..

Rani had finally fixed the decoration when the table tumbled...she tried getting down safely but the table gave away...she closed her eyes when she felt two sturdy hands holding her...she opened her eyes she was stunned here she lay actually in the arms of Yudi' !!!

Faiza... i loved your idea of posting pics in between... hope u don't mind me copying it.. 😳

Edited by sujji0609 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Yay!! 1st to comment!!
Beautiful Sujata!! Absolutely amazing & hmm........................hmm...........
Sach mein mindblowing!
Aaah.............Rani fell straight into Yudi's sturdy arms- those pics bring back old memories!
And that eyelock,that handshake....................no words,hun,no words!!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Awww!!! This is so cute!😃
I loved the magical YuRa moments!😳😍

Continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow didi just read all 3 parts and they are amazing so whens the next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sujata, yeh part itana chota kyun??? Yaar I read ur 2 parts and its really really good. I was expecting this one longer. But those photos are too lovely............ hmm, can see so much love in that eyes and nothing else.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Simply amazing Sujj. but yaar kuch long wala update karo na. I loved their hand shake it was so realistic. So she knows that he is a prince and I hope that does not stop her from getting to know him better. 😉😉
Waiting for the next part. BTW: Love the Faiza picture effect. 😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sujata I am very much enjoying every single part of your FF and love the way YuRa met and looking forward to more updates. Thank you
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sujata,

Lovely updates are coming by you. This too was a zabardast part. I love they met and she knew that he is a prince. Both's feelings were cutely described . I am looking forward how their relationship will build.

PS: You know i am really happy that u are using my idea of adding pics. I feel like i am reading my own FF. And i am honoured if anyone gets inspired and follows .You should continue this style. Love you🤗and thank you for starting this FF to entertain all of us.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankyou Thankyou Purva,Rosh,Sadia,Darshu di,Bobbie,Juna di, Faiza for your comments it really really means a lot... 🤗
Hehe Faiza.. i was really inspired from your idea.. and felt they described the theme better...😳
Darshu di & Bobbie,sorry for the short update last time.... actually was in a process but later saw it had turned out to be a bigger update... so thought of separating them.. 😉
here goes the extended Part 3... hope you my dear friends like it...:)😃
Extended Part 3

Yudi thanked his lucky stars....he was delighted to note the fact that his desire to touch Rani was actually getting fulfilled... here the queen of his hearts lay in his arms looking so much in love... there was a feeling of contentment of holding her in his arms.... He wished to hold that feeling forever... when suddenly a strong wind blew from the window... her attention got diverted as she struggled to put her hair back... they seemed to bother her...he did not want his Rani to go through even the slightest pain... and helped her place the hair back.... What was happening to him... he was actually getting possessive about her... one meeting at the beach had changed his life forever... he desired to know everything about her but now all it mattered to him what she thought about him...

Rani felt as if all was happening in a dream'...she closed her eyes and opened it yet again to see Yudi still holding her in his arms and gazing into her eyes deeply...she felt a sudden thrill of happiness engulfing her within...she could not understand what had come over her' but realised she had never felt these emotions for anyone before...her miserable life had turned her into a stone making everyone believe as she was someone with no emotions...but meeting Yudi at the beach...had melted her wounded heart and had opened those feelings which she had kept locked forever...she had no intention of being in love with Yudi...but how could anyone manage to escape the loving gaze of Yudi...and she couldn't help falling in love with him again and again...she hardly knew anything about him...but longed to know what he thought about her...

They heard footsteps close by.... Their love trance was broken as they faced reality... Rani immediately tried freeing herself from his arms...Yudi sensed her discomfort and eased her...she tried moving away but her chain got tangled in the button of his shirt thus resulting in a hug'...

Yudi couldn't help laugh at her expense but managed to keep a straight face... her hands lingered close to his chest as she tried separating the chain from the button.... Yudi also tried helping her at the same time resulting in them holding each other's hands...
she looked a little embarrassed, a little coy... Yudi asked her wait in signs as he will separate her chain...Rani looked on...while Yudi couldn't believe his Rani was actually close to him... he could feel her heart thumping within...Yudi finally separated her chain...as Rani tried moving away... Yudi called out to her...

" Rani"'..

Rani felt as if she was transported to heaven...her name sounded so good when he called her...he didn't call her Rani... but Raane... But still loved the fact of him calling out her...she finally came to her senses and wondered what he wanted this time...She turned back to see him smiling..his killer smile sent a strange thrill across her body...he came close to her and looked deeply into her eyes...

Rani was petrified as to for what he was calling her...

When Yudi replied " I'm too hungry...can you get me something to eat'?"'Rani gave a relieved smile and asked him to follow her...Yudi followed her like a school going student followed his teacher...He knew this was the right way of making Rani comfortable...and that way he'll get to know more about her...

Rani showed him the food section and asked him what he desired to eat...Yudi eyed all the delicacies and was having a tough time in choosing what to eat... meanwhile Yudi's father arrived there...Yudi had seen RS from the corner of his eye' in order him to avoid RS suspecting him...Yudi started explaining to Rani...

" This is not the way to keep the table.... ah Miss forgot your name Haan Raane... this is not the way to serve the guests... you should keep this plate like this.... Blah blah...."

Rani looked confused at Yudi's behaviour and wondered what he is upto... RS was delighted to see Yudi taking so much care in catering... he was always aware of the fact if there was anyone who could carry on his business it was Yudi...he had the determination and intelligence required in that field...he decided to talk to Yudi tonight so that Yudi can start his own business... Content at Yudi's behaviour RS left...

Yudi heaved a sigh of relief.... And turned to look at Rani...his face broke into a smile when he saw the confused look on Rani's face... He winked at her and lovingly hit her forehead with his hand and asked her what happened.... Rani replied in negative... hearing her reply he once again eyed at the food...Rani felt like losing her senses at his recent behaviour... and had to be shaken...

Edited by sujji0609 - 15 years ago

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