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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Yudi-Saksh part was awesome,dear!! I loved it to the core!!
And,Yudi accepted NiSha-that was very kind & understanding of him!!
Hmm...........(thinking waala) finally, a bit of the misunderstanding clears!!
Jaldi se usse propose karwaao!!
Oh & yes,all the very best for ur exams!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Sujji enjoyed this part as well and loved that Yudi and NiSha are so close and they are supportive of each other. Good luck with your exams and looking fwd to next update when ever you do it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Really beautiful Update SujjišŸ¤—.....i loved How Yudi-Saksham became friends and how easily he accepted NiSha love story ......Ofcourse he knows him from childhood naNo one can better than Saksham for Nikki.

Raane's reaction was missing when she got to know about Nikki that she is his sis...šŸ˜†....i wanna read that !!!😃

Pics were as usual awesome and too apt!!!šŸ¤—

PS : Good luck for exams.šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Thankyou Darshu di, Purva,Juna di & Faiza for your comments 😃
thankyou Purva,Juna di and Faiza for wishing me... 😃
I know you all wanted to see a bike ride na... but i could not provide you in yesterday's part 6.... actually was not able to bring it there.... so have written this part 7... in this there is only a part bike sequence... hope u all like it.šŸ˜‰...
Darshu di & Purva ... don't worry... there will be a scenario where Rani will realise that Yudi loves her only😳.... but for that u'll have to wait hehešŸ˜‰....
Faiza... raane's reaction is here in this part 7.... hope u like it.... :)
and it feels even more great that everyone has come up with their updates in FF... in these gloomy days of Rkab these truly provide a ray of happiness to all of us... 😃
Edited by sujji0609 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Part 7

Rani's face brightens up…. She says " Sister?"…. Yudi replies "Sister!"…. she again asked " Sister?"…. Yudi looks perplexed at her behaviour before he could reply again…. Niharika replies "Sister"…. And moves her hands towards her to shake…. Rani shakes hands with her with great intensity…. She feels a relief escape her lips…. Niharika smiles as she understood what was running in her mind…. And decides to leave them alone…. Yudi turns to Rani and takes the papers and signs them and asks her to take them carefully…. Meanwhile Bhanumati walks in with a cup of tea… Yudi asks Rani to drink it after which he can escort her to the palace gate… He looks on as she drank the tea and wonders will she ever acknowledge his love…. His phone rings…. Its their client…. He explains his problem and requests Yudi to sign the deal today itself… Yudi tries to put it off… but realises that if they didn't finalise it today then it would take them a month to finalise it again and agrees to meet him….

Yudi turns to Rani who has meanwhile finished her tea…. And informs her about the discrepancy that has cropped up all of a sudden… he asks her to wait and informs her that they'll leave once his mother and brother have returned…. He moves outside…. And realises they have returned… he rushes to them and kneels on to his stepmother to take her blessings…. CR is forced to paste a smile on her face as RS is standing there…. She quickly gives him blessings and moves away…. Yudi feels hurt at her behaviour and hides back the tears…. He always knew his step-mother never loved him…. She was forced to show love and concern because of RS…. But Yudi always hoped that one day he'll get her blessings from the heart… and one day she'll proudly say that he is her son…. Rani had seen all this… and feels bad for Yudi…..

Rudr hugs him…. No sooner had he hugged Yudi gets a distinct smell of alcohol…. Yudi realises Rudr is drunk…. He realises if his father gets to know about it Rudr will get a big firing…. And takes him away from his father on the pretext of showing something…. This has a been a routine since childhood…. Yudi always managed to hide the mistakes of Rudr to which Yudi had often got scolded… his sister Niharika never liked their father scolding her brother Yudi…. She would come to his aid and put the blame on Rudr…. But this resulted in misunderstandings between Yudi and Rudr…. Rudr was jealous of the fact that Yudi was more loved than him…. He always would find some faults in Yudi but would never acknowledge his own mistakes… Once the coast was clear… Yudi asked Rudr whether he was drunk….. Rudr shouts back "Just now I have returned and I'm not in a mood to answer your question… and please let me go to my room as I wish to take rest"… Yudi is shocked at his reply and realises it's futile to talk to him and lets him go….

He informs his father that he needs to go urgently to a clients' place to finalise a deal…. RS gives him his acceptance and Yudi calls out to Rani…. They had reached the palace gate when Yudi looks for his car…. He wonders where his car is … when Saksham comes there and informs him that his car has gone for a wash…. He asks for his father's car…. And realises that it has also gone for a wash…. Yudi doesn't want to drive his mother's or brother's car as he knew they won't like it…. He thinks of hiring a call-taxi when Saksham comes with his bike…. Rani is stunned to see the bike…. She realises that it is the same bike which she had selected the other day… she looks in awe at Yudi…. Yudi glares angrily at Saksham and through signs asks him to take away…. Saksham whispers into Yudi's ears.. "Someday she has to know about it then why not now?"…. Yudi realises that he is right and looks at Rani… he is happy to note the twinkle in her eyes…. And thinks in his mind that he is once again indebted to Saksham….

Yudi gets ready to drive the bike…. Saksham smiles mischieviously… Yudi remembers the other day's conversation… and assures through his eyes that everything will be fine…. They leave…. Saksham prays to God to always keep Yudi happy and fulfill his wish of making Rani fall in love with Yudi…. Yudi runs the bike with great speed and wishes she had placed her hands on him rather than behind…. But after a while he hears Rani shout "Please slow down"…. Yudi immediately parks the bike at the corner and turns to Rani…. She has her eyes closed and is sweating profusely… Yudi immediately takes his hanky from the pocket and wipes off the sweat from her face and asks her to open her eyes and assures her that everything is fine…. Rani opens her eyes and looks at Yudi with too much love…. She feels great as never in her life had anyone cared so much for her…

Yudi comforts her and places his hands on each shoulder and says is there anything she wants…. Rani playfully says "Yes"… Yudi wonders what it would be…. Rani replies…"I wish to ride your bike…. Can I?"…. Yudi asks her twice whether she really wishes to ride the bike… but Rani replies in affirmative and assures him that she knows to ride the bike… Yudi agrees and sits behind with the helmet still on him and refuses to part with it…. Rani smiles at his behaviour and asks him to give it…. But Yudi refuses saying that he doesn't want anyone to see him sitting behind her…. What will people think that he is making a girl drive for him…. What impression it will bring to other's minds…. Rani smiles and takes the helmet off him… Yudi is shocked at her behaviour….. and is happy to note that she is beginning to open up again…. He takes his hanky and covers up his face sparing his eyes…. And asks Rani to start driving…. Rani laughs at his behaviour and proceeds to drive the bike….

Yudi is amazed at Rani's driving capabilities… he wonders whether it's all a dream… is he actually sitting behind Rani…. And wants someone to pinch him…. But then is scared if it is actually a dream then he doesn't wish to break from the dream… suddenly the bike goes through a pothole and there is jerk… which results in Yudi losing his balance…. And for support he places a hand on Rani's shoulder…. Rani feels a sudden ray of happiness engulfing…. She is lost in her world which belonged to Yudi… when she hears Yudi shout "Raane!!!!!!"… Rani realises she has rammed into a tree… she apologetically looks at Yudi… Yudi gets off from the bike…. And bursts out laughing…. And says "I have already made it secondhand…. And you are ready to make it for a perfect disposal?"… Rani still is scared and looks on…. Yudi pats her back and says that "it's ok…. Don't worry…. Anyways we'll continue this session after our work ok…. Or else we'll be late for the appointment and I promise I'll drive slowly"… Rani smiles back and sits behind… together they head for the work-place….

Once they have reached their client-place…. Rani is shocked to see someone there…. Yudi begins to introduce her…. "Raane, this is…….?.... Raane?...Raane?..."… Yudi wonders where Rani has disappeared to…. He excuses himself and frantically searches for Rani…. When he hears someone cry softly in the ladies washroom… he stealthily opens the door and realises it's Rani crying…. He looks here and there once he is sure that no one inside the washroom but Rani… he moves inside…. Rani sees him coming through the mirror and quickly splashes water on her face and is unaware of the fact that Yudi had seen her crying…. And says that she had come here to get fresh as she was feeling sleepy…. She tries to move away when Yudi catches her hand…. And asks "What happened Raane?"… "You can share with me…. "…. Rani is stunned to note the true concern in his eyes… she gets teary and runs into Yudi's arms and starts crying…. Yudi is stunned at her behaviour and comforts her and lets her cry completely so that she feels better….

Rani confesses her that it was her uncle Sudharshan and tells him everything about her tragic life…. Yudi feels shattered after hearing Rani's life story…. And promises in his mind he would never let his Rani ever go through any pain…. Rani requests Yudi that she is unable to find guts to face her uncle and asks him to excuse her from the work and that she'll wait for him at the parking lot… Yudi understands her discomfort and agrees….

After a short while Yudi had returned… Rani is stunned to note that Yudi had returned so soon and asks him about the deal… Yudi says that he has declined the deal…. Rani is shocked to hear this… she is about to say something when Yudi says that he was not happy with their deal…. And changes the topic by telling that we need to continue our session right?"… Rani is confused… Yudi puts the helmet on her and replies "You promised to ride the bike after our work is done…. And now I have one more work for you… today you choose the restaurant where we are going to dine and also the dishes"… Rani looked startled… he hits her forehead and breaks her trance…. And winks…"Shall we proceed Raane?"… Rani smiles at Yudi's behaviour and gets ready to drive the bike…. Yudi thinks in his mind .."I know one should not mix professional and personal life but I don't wish to associate with any person who made my Rani cry… and I don't want Rani to sense discomfort everytime by coming face to face with such a person…"…

Edited by sujji0609 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Sujji I loved every part of this update and the mischievous Raane and the sensitive and sensible Yudi. But did I forgot if u have mentioned her earlier life with her uncle - in your next update could u just give an outline of her tragic life and how her uncle is part of that.
I enjoyed this update and the pics were awesome again
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Sujj,
Very nice parts.......just read last two. Love the visuals too. Do continue šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Juna di.. i have specified in part 2....
"Rani was not in a mood to go but it was her sole way of earning income...her parents were no more in this world leaving her as an orphan... as she thought about the day when she had eagerly awaited her parents return from the hospital with her kid sister... their car was run-over by a truck...her kid sister who had not even opened her eyes to see the new world around her had closed her eyes forever... she had to live with her uncle who considered her to be a burden on them... she somehow survived in this family as her cousins were very good to her... but her happiness was short-lived as soon after her 12th...her uncle's business came to a stand-still...it became difficult for him to meet the needs of the entire family... they decided to marry her off to a 45 year old man... Rani had run away from the house as she did not wish to marry a man who was more than twice her age.... getting a job was not easy...but due to the suggestion made by her friend Kali... she opted to work at a catering company...she even got a place to stay as the company gave her a room to share with her..."
hope u follow now...:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Sujji ,
a request please !!! Yaar can u make your post (part 6 n 7 ) in a lil bigger fonts? .....Dont think i am chasmishšŸ¤“šŸ¤£.....mujhay saaf dikh raha hai but takki laga kay parhna par raha hai yaar ....screen ghoor ghoor kay aankahin thak jain gišŸ˜†...


Ok i have finished reading 7th part in chota chota fontšŸ˜†.....but its OK....Lovely update yaar .. i love your FF Yudi who is so much concerned about Raane .He has cancelled deal for her prestigešŸ‘šŸ˜†...Me loving it !!!

Bike ride was awesome hunšŸ˜†and that disposal wala dialogue is making me🤣....excellent !!!

Update soon.
Edited by Faiza_sam - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

thankyou Bobbie,Juna di & Faiza for commenting it..

hehe Faiza i have increased the font size hope it's fine now...:)
Edited by sujji0609 - 15 years ago

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