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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Thankyou Faiza,Darshu di,Juna di,Pinky2009,Bobbie, Rosh ,Purva & Sadia for commenting and liking it.. :)
here goes part 5 again a big update.... hope u all like it..:)

Part 5

Rani went to the washroom… as she splashed water on her face… she felt the whole world come crashing down…. She had literally jumped off her seat when she had seen Yudi…. She had a strong desire of hugging Yudi tightly and wanted to tell how much she had missed him… she used to think that she had learnt to live without Yudi… but now her heart refused to accept that fact… She could feel Yudi in her every heart –beat… she felt sorry for walking out off the party and longed to apologise to him… she had often come to the beach in the hope of seeing Yudi but had returned disappointed… she somehow managed to break her thoughts and quickly wiped off the tears…. And rushed to meet Yudi….

Yudi had his back turned to her and was talking to Saksham over the phone… Yudi had seen Rani coming and as she neared… amidst his conversation with Saksham… he started talking loudly…. " Oh sweet-heart… I missed you so much…!!" Saksham was confused and wondered what was Yudi upto… Rani's eyes turned red with jealousy and wondered it had been only a week… and Yudi had found someone so soon to replace her… she was cursing her foolishness for leaving the party abruptly that day… she felt jealous and wondered with whom Yudi was talking to… Yudi felt satisfied at the expressions Rani was giving…he continued… " You know how much I love you… I'll meet you this coming Monday…" …Saksham understood soon…. And asked "Is bhabhi near?"… Yudi replied … "Yes…"… Saksham replied mischieviously .. " I promise to be your sweet-heart for the time-being honey.."… Yudi laughed at his reply… later excused himself and ended the call….

He kept a straight face and composed himself… as he should not let Rani know that he knew she was standing behind… he turned and was almost going to collide with Rani when Rani caught his shirt… Yudi took her hands off him… and said " Ahh Miss Raane… you have come… let's proceed or we'll get late for the appointment… Rani expected Yudi to open the door for her but Yudi had reached the other side and sat in… Rani was hurt with Yudi's behaviour and her heart was grieving deeply at this … Yudi broke her trance and called out.. "What happened Raane… is everything ok?" Rani replied in negative and sat with a heavy heart….

Yudi felt sorry for his behaviour… but he wanted to make Rani realise her mistake and soon she will admit her love for him…. He got busy putting up the seat-belt… Rani struggled putting it up… Yudi saw it but chose to ignore it… but after sometime he could no longer bear to see her struggling…. He called out to her and as Rani turned… Yudi took the seat-belt from her hand… and helped her put it… but all this while Yudi did not even see her face… he could feel Rani gazing at him all the time…. Finally he finished putting it…. And without even looking at her he started to drive the car… Rani couldn't help stealing glances all the time…. Yudi was seeing Rani from the corner of the eye… and was feeling happy about the change in her behaviour….

Finally they reached the client's office…. Yudi introduced Rani to the clients…. After hours of discussion… their meeting came to an end… as they left the client place…. Yudi did not speak a word to Rani in the car… Yudi realised it was past lunch time and Rani must be hungry... he parked the car near a five-star hotel… he asked Rani what did she desire to eat… and soon their dishes were served….

Yudi was about to eat when he saw Rani struggling with the fork and the spoon… he thought maybe she was not comfortable eating at this place…. But soon realised that she did not know to eat with them… he realised this was not the right time or the place for his teaching… he must think of something so that she doesn't feel bad about it… Yudi kept the spoon down and began to eat with his hands… Rani was astonished at Yudi's behaviour… Yudi replied… " I believe the best way to eat food is with hands and I always eat with my hands… if you are not comfortable I don't mind having with a spoon…"… He was about to take the spoon when Rani caught his hand and said that she was comfortable eating with her hands…. And later confessed that she did not know to eat with the fork and the spoon and was afraid that she would embarrass him…. Yudi was glad to note that Rani was beginning to open up… he thanked NiSha in his mind for thinking of a way so he could be always be close to Rani….

On their way back…. Yudi recollected his father had asked him to select a car for himself…. And had asked him to go to the vehicle corner… He stopped at the vehicles corner…. But was having a tough time choosing it…. He felt like a kid standing in the candy store… Yudi thought this was a good way of knowing Rani's likes…. Yudi asked Rani, had she been in his place what she would have chosen…. Rani hesitated…. Yudi sensed it and asked her to choose one and that he would stand here only… only after she selects she can tell him…. Rani finally selected one…. And pointed in the direction…. Yudi was curious to know her selection when he stunned to note she had chosen a bike…. !!!

Yudi asked her several times…. Whether she had actually chosen a bike…. All the times Rani had replied yes…. He was soon reminded of the incident some years back when Saksham had tried teaching him but had been unsuccessful… Yudi had vowed never to ride a bike…. But he did not wish to hurt Rani… for Rani's sake he would learn to ride a bike…. He excused himself and asked her to wait… and went to tell the manager to deliver at the palace…. After all this… they returned to the office… Yudi asked the staff to leave early…. They all left happily including Rani…. Yudi returned home…. He had just got to his room when NiSha almost ran there… both were curious to know about his encounter with Rani… before they could ask… Yudi said " Saksham… now you have to teach me to ride a bike…" NiSha started laughing…. Yudi retorted.. " Hey guys I'm serious"….. Saksham smiled and said " you are actually ready to break the vow you made some years back?".. Yudi replied .. " I have to atleast for Rani's sake".. Saksham thought to himself… What all people do when they are in love but then he would have done the same thing had it been Niharika…. And decides to help Yudi….

Yudi had just managed to sit on the bike… he could not balance it and collapsed with the weight of the bike on him… Saksham tried hard controlling his laughter and pulled Yudi up… there was not a place left in the backyard of the palace where Yudi had not rammed into…. He smiled fondly as he thought of the day when he will tell Rani what all he did for her… soon after some minor accidents which made the bike look like a second-hand…. Yudi had actually learnt to ride a bike…. Yudi asked Niharika to sit behind him…. But soon had Niharika sat and caught hold of him from behind…. His thoughts wandered… how he would have felt if Rani had held him tightly from behind…. He really wished to experience that thrill of happiness…. He realised that sort of experience he would never get in a car… Rani's love for a bike was a perfect idea for romance… When he heard a loud shriek…. Before he could come to his senses he realised he had rammed into a tree… Niharika teased him… " Bhaiyya,… it was not Bhabhi…. Wonder what would have happened had she been there…"… Before he could reply to this … Saksham said "Attention attention everyone…. Prince Yudishtir is going to damage all the government property and is going to lose his licence… catch all this fun soon when Rani Bhabhi sits behind him… "… after telling this both NiSha run with Yudi coming behind to hit them…. Niharika trips over a pebble and Saksham catches her…. And they are lost in their world…!!!

Edited by sujji0609 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
Awww..... so sweet Sujji loved every bit of it and you updated this part so quickly. Great Choice Rani made with a bike and how romantic and love the way Yudi is wooing Rani hope this kind of courtship continues for a longer period. Thanks for updating it regularly Sujji and now I cant wait until the next update. Will Yudi get a chance to get Rani on his bike? Where are they going to go for a long ride? 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Very nice part Suj......but a bike? hmm I see the FF going Faiza style. 😉
As long as there are YuRa moments I am ok with the bike. 😳😳 Please do continue.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Sujji,

This was fabulous yaar!😎 I just loved Rani felt jealous, she actually selected a bike for Him - Just WOW!!! Aww! Poor Yudi he had to break his vow and learn bike for Rani's sake!😳

Just like Faiza, You just select such apt pictures according to the the scenes!

Please continue soon - I'm expecting a bike ride of YuRa soon!😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Sujji ,

That was awesome ....awww Yudi learnt how to ride bike....Just for Rane😉....I really like the way he calls her'' Rane''....and in this update .....Nisha were teasing him na ...Lub it.😆

This FF is going very interesting yaar. Continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Roshni.

Awww! Suj...This was fabulous..So dreamy..So wonderful!😍
Love at first sight me loving it!😳
Loved the pictures idea as well..And then those wonderful scenes again!😳
Please continue soon!




Awesome sujata ,I am loving your story :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Hi sujji...
I just read all your parts...
At first, I seriously thought it is so sad..
But later on, very nice to read and chuckle.. Hahahahz..
Great job and you have made NiSha also fall in love?
That is too good to look forward..
Keep it up...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Hey,Sujata!
Sorry for commenting so late,hun!!
I'll get straight to that beautiful update of urs.....so nice.........I could actually picture YuRa sitting on a bike.........so romantic........... hmm...........hmm...............hmm..................
I loved Saksham's announcements about the impendidng disasters Yudi is yet to cause!!
And in the start the way he was making her feel jealous........so chweet!!
I am waiting for more Nisha moments-shuruaat to ekdum zabardast hai!!
Continue soon,dear!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Thankyou Juna di,Pinky,Bobbie,Rosh,Faiza,Azfee & Purva for commenting and liking it...

sorry for the late update as have my exams coming up so busy with the preparations.... anyways after yesterdays & today's episode of Rkab my head is spinning.... and i wish to forget what happened in these episodes.... i have posted a short update hope u all like it....

Part 6

Saksham thought to himself that life doesn't give him such opportunities where he could be close to Niharika…. He looked deeply in Niharika's eyes… he could feel them reciprocating the same feelings which he had in his heart for her…. Yudi's absence from their lives had resulted in them coming closer…. Yudi was the keeper of all their secrets…. Their common bond was Yudi…. Their missing Yudi had culminated into them pouring each other's heartfelt thoughts and feelings into each other and acknowledge each other's presence in their lives….

Meanwhile Yudi had reached that place…. He saw them lost in their world…. He broke their thoughts and caught their ears…. NiSha looked embarrassed ….. Yudi teased them…. "here I'm asking you to help me with my love story and you two are busy with your romance?" Niharika blushed and turned to leave when Yudi caught her hand and said… " I didn't know my darling sister is in love" and further joked… "Didn't you find someone better than this Saksham?" it was Saksham's turn to glare angrily…. Yudi hugged Saksham and said " I know there is no one better and so it's a no wonder that she chose you…."….

There was a big smile on Saksham's face as he thought fondly of the day when they had become friends….. Yudi was always confined to play only at the palace…. He was never allowed to play with the middle-class crowd outside…. Saksham was often seen playing around with everyone …. But he often saw a pair of eyes inside the gate staring at him all the time…. Saksham had often longed to go and play with Yudi but his father who worked at the palace asked him not to…. One day when Saksham was returning home from a shop…. He had fallen off the cycle on the main road…. Yudi had happened to see him and had rushed to his aid…. Yudi managed to take Saksham home in his car…. Once home…. Yudi refused to leave Saksham's side till he was alright…. Which resulted in Yudi returning late at home for which he had got a big yelling from his father…. Saksham was hurt and had longed to meet Yudi…

he somehow managed to convince his dad to take him to the palace…. He felt lost in the palace as he frantically searched for Yudi's room…. He had just found it when he spotted Yudi's father shouting at him for helping the servants at the palace…. Saksham immediately somehow managed to hide behind the curtains outside… he waited till his father left the room…. Once his father had left the room…. Yudi had turned the other way trying to hide back the tears…. When Saksham stealthily entered his room and locked the door from inside… the sound of the door locking had alarmed Yudi and he turned…. he was perplexed to see Saksham…. As Yudi poured out his heart to him…. Saksham vowed never to leave Yudi alone and promised to be his friend always…. He realised being near to Yudi was not easy…. but God had fulfilled his wish… Yudi's father had wanted a servant who could be with Yudi all the time…. He did not specify age limits…. Saksham grabbed this opportunity and since his father was a loyal servant of the royal house-hold…. RS had agreed to it…

Now back to reality…. Saksham realised he had got Yudi's acceptance…. He got tears in his eyes and hugged him back… the threesome headed to the palace grinning happily….

Once in his room… Yudi thought about NiSha's love…. which reminded him of his eye-lock with Rani at the party…. He was still not able to trace the reason as to why Rani had left him…. He wanted to clear out the misunderstanding as soon as possible…. He wanted to make sure that there was no fault on his side….. he wondered what had made Rani walk out so abruptly and that too at the time when everything seemed perfect…. He would have got to know more about her… but fate had other plans stored for him…he broke his thoughts and realised tomorrow his step mother and step-brother Rudr were returning from London….. he was eagerly awaiting for their arrival… he discussed the preparations to be made for their arrival with Saksham…. And once he had done with them…. Yudi called up Rani that he won't be coming to the office as his mother and brother were returning from London…. Rani reminded him that he had to sign some important papers…. Without which their work won't proceed…. Yudi asked Rani to come to the palace at 9.00am along with the papers and he would sign them here…..

Rani had come early at 8.00 am and stood outside the palace…. The guards escorted her to the palace entrance and showed her the direction to Yudi's room…. She looked at the rooms… she realised the size of one room here was more than the size of her room given by the company… she realised she still had to go further…. When her eyes caught something…. her Yudi was here swordfighting.... she eyed his well toned body… how much ever she tried she could not take her eyes off him…. She felt weak on her knees…

in the meantime Yudi's lessons were over and he turned to retreat when he saw Rani…. The first thing he did was look at the time…. He wondered he was late and had made Rani wait all the while… he soon realised that she was here early…. Yudi realised he was actually standing shirtless… he felt little awkward… and immediately seized the towel from one of the servants hands and covered himself and moved towards Rani….

Rani lowered her eyes embarrassed at the way she was eyeing him…. Yudi came closer and smiled at her…. Rani felt crushed by his smile….he signalled a servant to send tea to his room…. and asked Rani to follow him to his room….

Once in their room… Rani handed over the papers…. But Yudi declined saying that he needed to take a shower first after which he'll sign the papers… he asked her to sit on the bed …. No sooner did Yudi go inside Rani eyed his room… it was beautiful and spacious…. there was a huge photo of Yudi… he looked every bit of a dreamy prince…. There were many pics with his mother…. soon Rani came across a picture of Yudi with a girl…. She was hugging Yudi in the pic…. Rani felt a sting of jealousy run within… as she remembered the other day's conversation when Yudi was talking to a girl…. She wondered whether Yudi had really found someone to replace her in his life…. She was curious to know who the girl was….

Meanwhile Yudi in his hurry had forgotten to take his clothes… he realised his clothes were spread on the bed…. He thought of calling Saksham but then realised that he had gone to get flowers…. Finally he picked up courage and called out for Rani and asked him to give his clothes….

Rani took his clothes from the bed and gave it to him…. As her hands touched his she felt a new excitement run within…. Yudi felt an urge to pull her inside but controlled his emotions and quickly grabbed the clothes…. Rani had just given the clothes when Niharika walked into the room…. Rani realised it was the same girl in the pic…. Niharika gave a mischievous smile and enquired about Yudi… before Rani could answer Yudi had come outside…. Niharika ran into Yudi's arms…. And told him that the plane had landed and they were heading towards the palace and asked him to join her…. Yudi hugged her back and said he'll come as soon as he has signed the papers…. Rani had seen all this with a big lump in her throat…. Tears began to flow from her eyes…. As she saw Yudi turning towards her…. She quickly wiped them off …. And handed over the papers to him….. Niharika ridiculed him that won't he introduce her to his guest…. Yudi smiled … "Raane… meet my sister Niharika… and Niharika meet my PA Raane"

Edited by sujji0609 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
This one really nice Suji. But Rani only got clue that Nikki is Yudi's sister. She doesnt know yet that Yudi loves her only. I am happy that Yudi has accepted Nikki and Saksh relation. Do continue

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