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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh no! Why is this happening..

Waiting for the talk, need to know what is the story

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Originally posted by: kavyapramod99

Kaho hooo. ..update do na

Aajayega jaldi, right after I finish a story I'm writing, do check it out in the meanwhile if ya haven't! :D

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/5280703/new-asya-ts-if-only

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Hiiii! Will update this one right after I complete If Only!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice updates

Loved it

It’s very intense story with so many ups & downs. You wrote it beautifully.

Asad did a big mistake & now he has to tell her everything & let her decide his fate.

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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice updates

Loved it

It’s very intense story with so many ups & downs. You wrote it beautifully.

Asad did a big mistake & now he has to tell her everything & let her decide his fate.

Waiting for next update eagerly

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Thank you so much! Great to know that you liked it. Next update will come soon! I'm writing some of it right now.

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Read the story in one go

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Lost Without You

Chapter 19: Just a Chance


"Mitch, why is he here?" Zoya asked, ignoring Asad's presence. Mitch stared at her blankly, not knowing what to say. "Mitch!"


"Zoya I'm here because-"


"Mitch, answer me." She said continuing to ignore Asad.


"Zoya I'm sorry! Please just listen-"


"There is nothing left to listen, alright? I've had enough of this. I've had enough of your tough, Playboy act, of your lies, of your sick, shitty attitude!" Zoya yelled at him through tears. Asad's breathing grew uneven. It was wrong. It was a disgusting game that fate had played with them. This isn't how he wanted it!


"Zoya... Whatever you saw, it wasn't-"


"Don't you DARE say it wasn't true. I'm not blind for god's sake!" Zoya said and held her head. "And you know what your problem is," she continued, pointing a finger at his chest, "you ruin other people's lives to live yours! You think because you've had your share of hurt and pain in the past, it gives the right to do so! Well newsflash douchebag! IT DOESN'T DO SHIT! IT ONLY MAKES YOUR MISERABLE LIFE WORSE, AND WORSE, AND WORSE. SO GROW THE HELL UP, MR KHAN. AND GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!" Zoya bravely roared at him. Tears were flowing from a pair of angry eyes, but both were looking at each other with angst, and pain. The fire in Zoya's eyes burned his heart, and in that moment, he knew. That he had fallen in love with the warrior in front of him. That he had lost the love of his life, without even knowing it.

Zoya couldn't believe he dared turn up at her home after all the shit he'd thrown her way. She wanted to beat the pulp out of him. She wanted to punch him till he understood exactly how used she felt.


"Zoya...I just need to talk to you." Asad reasoned one last time. Zoya's fiery glare remained unchanged.


"Why don't you go talk to Tanveer? I'm sure she'll be happy to help." She bit out venomously. Asad breathed heavy.


"Zoya I -"


"Out!" Zoya yelled at him rudely and shoved him away from her door. Asad looked at her with pleading, guilty eyes. A familiar burning sensation rose in his throat and his eyes thinned, trying not to let a tear slip out. Last time he remembered feeling like this was on the funeral of his Ammi. The feeling that he'd just lost someone, forever. The only difference being that he had the tiniest of chances to possibly get Zoya back. He turned his back to her and slowly walked away. He looked at the small box in his hands with devastation, and kept in her mailbox before going to his father.


* * *


Rashid had his head in his hands. How did his son get caught up in all this? When did he go wrong? "What made you do this?"


"I...I had to find out what-"


"Don't you dare bring Dilshad into this." Rashid said angrily. This was the second time he had been this angry at Asad. "Gaffur told you he knows what happened to your mother and you believed him?! You know why it happened! She was too devastated by what happened, she thought it was her fault! She thought she was the you didn't get a-"


"She's alive Abbu!" Asad yelled back. Yearning to just let it all out.


"W-what?"


"Ammi, sh-she died in vain. Gaffur told me I have a sister." He said whilst looking into his father's sad eyes.


"But...that's impossible. Dilshad. She said the baby died in the delivery. They said the pregnancy had unknown complications. Wha- I don't understand. How ..." Rashid sank down on the sofa and broke into tears. The love of his life, his wife, had died because of a lie. Asad was instantly at his father's side, in tears himself. "No, you don't cry. Don't waste your time over something that has already happened. This is my burden to bear, you have yours. She left, but she left loving all of us. She wouldn't want you to stop. Now...tell me. Why did Gaffur want you to get close to Zoya?" Rashid questioned darkly. Urging his son to give up his pride for once.


Asad sighed and started, "I got a call. The day after I had gotten drunk and Zoya had brought me home. I wasn't thinking. I was desperate and hadn't gotten over Ammi's barsi. He told me that...that he could tell me who was responsible for Ammi. Who lied...to her. He told me I have a sister, s-somewhere in the world. Who never knew her real parents. I wanted to find her, know about her, dig out who put her there. And so..." Asad trailed off, remembering the moment he made the biggest mistake of his life.


"So?"


"So he offered me a deal. Which states that in return for him telling me information about my sister, whoever she is, I have to get him...Zoya."


"Asad." Rashid sighed and buried his face in his hands. "What have you done? You do know that Zoya is Humeira's sister right?"


"Yes."


"You know how she turned white every time someone mentioned her father?"


"Yes."


"Why do think that HAPPENED ASAD? Why would even agree to such a deal! Your life will be complete while another's goes down the drain!"


"I'm sorry!" Asad cried out and fell onto his knees. "This whole time, I was just too messed up to think. I wanted everything. Everything I thought could make me happy. I thought that finding out the truth would finally give me some relief, that meeting my sister would complete our family. But I didn't realise that my happiness was right in front of me the whole time." Rashid looked at his crying son and placed a hand on his shoulder.


"So you knew what your mistake was?" Ask the father with a sad smile on his face.


Asad nodded, his breath ragged from crying. "I fell. I had to bring her to him but I couldn't watch her getting hurt. She doesn't deserve this. She deserves better, much better. I have fallen in love Abbu. But it's too late now." His voice whispered weakly, withering as he spoke, about the person who had changed his life. "It's too late."


Rashid, being the lovely father he was, was at his sons side in a flash. "It's never too late for true love beta."


* * *


She was standing all alone in the middle of the road. The cars were zooming past her, not giving her a second glance. She was scared. She was running. She looked over her shoulder and saw a dark looming figure stalking behind her. Her cries for help were anything but being heard. The vehicles passing by got even more careless, more closer to her. She desperately searched for them, the eyes that assured her that everything would be alright.


Crack!


No. No please no. The distinct sound of a whiplash echoed in her head infinitely. Help. Help me please! She yelled and saw the one she knew would take her away from all this. Protect her, support her when she broke. Asad! Asad help me.

She smiled when she saw him run towards her. His eyes seemed fixed on her. His figure grew closer and closer and closer, her arms opened themselves to receive him. They were just a foot away.


"Babe!" A familiar female voice floated in from behind and the owner of it launched themselves into his arms. She stopped. Everything had frozen around her. Asad and Tanveer turned thair backs to her and gaily walked away. She fell onto her knees. No! She screamed as the dark figure came close behind her.


Crack!


"ASAD!" Zoya shrieked and found herself sitting on her bed, sweating profusely. She heard running footsteps outside her bedroom door before it burst open. Mitch was looking at her with worries.


"Darling, what happened?!" He asked her as he instantly sat on her bed by her side, putting a comforting arm around her shoulder.


Zoya didn't speak for a minute, trying to catch her breath. "N-nothing. It was a nightmare, as usual."



Yeah so no pre-chapter comment today. Although I have to apologise for the length of the chapter, I can't write any longer than this due to studies taking over my life right now. But if you guys want long parts then the waiting will be long. I guess it better to give you guys shorter but more frequent updates rather than making you wait weeks.

Anyhoo, love y'all! 💖

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Posted: 3 years ago

wow, I loved this one!!! 💕 Especially the part where Zoya gave it back to him. Hope they figure it out soon.

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