#3: AsYa FF - Mohabbatein: Part 33 Pg 67 Updated- 30/07/2019! - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2...
Ufff too much heavily emotional...
What was that?
a sudden turn of events...

I totally adore the way Farooqui brothers love their sister..
They dote around her like she is the most precious thing in the world for them..

The anxiety which they were feeling was so well written..

Most emotional was Asad sitting in the mazaar and praying for her..

But then came a big jolt of reality...

The truth of her cuttings...
And not just in front of one person but her entire family..

I love the bonding of Zoyaan the best.

The way Asad reacted to the news was portrayed very well..

Zoya's insecurities are put up so nicely..

In this situation between Asya there is only song that comes to my mind is Bolna from kapoor and sons..
Please if possible use this song once on them..

Finally Zoya came out with one part atleast that was bothering her since years.

The whole Asyaan convo was superb too..
Asad definitely needed the lowdown on Zoya's Life to understand her better..

Asad's Realization about her cry for help was so apt.

Loved this part again..

N9w will go and read the next part..

When I read it all and then come to comment I forget so many points to mention..
And since I have time today I thought of commenting on each part.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome update ... I feel for both of them... So much pain... But they recognize that they can heal each other... and I am so glad that zoya's misunderstanding is gone regarding asad.
Can't wait to read what masti will happen at the wedding...

Waiting 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So so so much pain...
How can one breathe with so much pain...

And Asad ... he is hurting and bleeding... I feel like rushing to him and give him a tight hug..
So to Zoya too...

After so much of pain finally there was a tiny wine lighter moment between them... I'm glad for that..

Ur a fraud... that's perfectly put up by Asad...

Loving the love and care her brothers are showering on Zoya.
But where is Ayaan?

I kind of miss him.
And going by your note can't wait to read the upcoming parts.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey wen r u going to update this story plz reply asap plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Daisy dear epi kb update karo gi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Can we ask for an update now Daisy?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Daisy update kb mile gi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys! I'm still writing...there's a particular point I want to end this part at so I won't be updating till I finish writing it...I know how hard it can be for someone to update a FF and I aplogize but please be just a little more patient we're almost there TRUST me it'll be worth it. I'm really busy this week so this month too the update will be in the last week of March (somewhere between March 26-28) - I appreciate your patience guys!! xoxo - dailydaisy
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Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Hey guys! I'm still writing...there's a particular point I want to end this part at so I won't be updating till I finish writing it...I know how hard it can be for someone to update a FF and I aplogize but please be just a little more patient we're almost there TRUST me it'll be worth it. I'm really busy this week so this month too the update will be in the last week of March (somewhere between March 26-28) - I appreciate your patience guys!! xoxo - dailydaisy

Ok dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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anyone heard from @always_asya and @anopama...I'm a little worried by their absence 😕

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