AsYa OS: 'Merry Christmas' (WILL UPDATE SOON*) - Page 4

Originally posted by: -loving_life-

Unres on pg 4😃😃😃

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Part 2 will be updated soon!😊

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra

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Is it a VM?

Or a story?

Did you injured your head or something??

I never thought about it exactly.Quite possible!! Maybe I'd a memory loss with that injury. So I forgot!!😭

Or maybe you were having fever, HIGH fever??

I forgot this too even!!😭😭

HOW CAN YOU CALL SUCH AN AWESOME PIECE AS TRASH??😡😡

Girl, I haven't updated the whole part yet... which is going to be trash, Understood?!😡

I agree it is not that awesome but as for your first attempt it is brilliant!!

The best I could ever give...More than it, its not possible anything from me. I guess you already understood by the other TS😆

Btw, Thanks!😳

Unres..

Thanks for unres-ing so soon.

You know I was waiting for you!😛

Totally amazing idea!

😎

I want to read something like this from a long time.

Why didn't you write yourself??😳

But glad that you gave me an opportunity to read it.

That's Cool!!😉

What were you saying that I shouldn't read it!!!

Thanks to myself that I read it else I would have suffered a big loss!!

Heheheh, what loss ma'am?? I've cooked a nice khichdi of next part...Then you'll realize I was telling RIGHT.

Start was beautiful enough...Next part won't be.That's why I haven't updated that still.😆

Whatever, coming to the review.

It was a nice concept.

Something new and creative.

Banner was lovely.

Thanks Thanks!!😃

Banner left side was by sans and right side was by me!

The way Zoya that you are my santa was .

Oh!! I was thinking maybe it was too... Like it shouldn't have been here.But Glad you liked it!

Then the pictures glorified the whole OS.

I know.After all the OS is about AsYa, that needed a prove.😆

Zoya's dress was nice.

That's why I chose this photo.😆 About dress, something is coming which will leave every AsYa fan awestruck😉

She didnt wore saree cause Asad isnt there to adore her.

You are feeling sad for her!! Don't be!!😆 I stopped the story on that point Means something is coming!!😉

Zoya he will come for you for sure!😉

You know it already!

But I cant guarantee!

Addrita ki writing hai Addrita hi jaane!

🤣The best line in your comment!!

I guess Asad is out for Zoya's gift.

😛Not gonna tell anything about it!

I am thinking what the gift might be!!

Think..think..you're sensible! Noone comment about gift, but you did! Yes, the gift is main!! For me...

But it was quite small!!

I had to stop at that moment to spice the story or else except the gift part, my story was complete long ago.

Try to update longer parts next time.😉

If I write though...😆

Waiting for the second part eagerly!

Update soon!!

And soon means SOON!!😳

Let's see..

ADVANCE HAPPY NEW GREGORIAN YEAR!!

BELATED MERRY CHRISTMAS.

Thanks for your wishes!😃

Last but not the least CONGRATS on your first attempt.😊

Thank you so much!🤗

Thanks for the special res.😊

You're welcome.

See I am also first!!😛

Nothing new to me. You're first at everything😆😉

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Superb Story with exactly matching pics

Originally posted by: .ROSY.

Lovely one..

Very nice,,

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel

Very nice

Like zoya pic

Thanks for pm

Update soon