AsYa OS: 'Merry Christmas' (WILL UPDATE SOON*)

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AsYa OS: "Merry Christmas"


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A huge mansion was decorated beautifully with lights on the eve of Christmas. As in, a great but small party was arranged the next day.

And now at this moment, the lovey-dovey AsYa were watching to the moon together through the giant beautiful window of Khan mansion.

Let's sneak peek in their lives closely and hear their conv. as well😉

Some moments ago...

Asad was working in his laptop sitting in sofa of his room.It's midnight but due to loads of work pressure he's still working.
AsYa both were awake.Just some time ago, Zoya moved towards her room after passing a black coffee to Asad and a little chit-chatting.

So Asad was sipping his coffee with one hand and doing his work with the other hand in laptop.Suddenly out of nowhere Zoya barges in excitedly screaming "Merry Christmas Mr. Khan."

Asad almost choked his coffee, he kept the cup aside and standing up immediately stared at Zoya.


Zoya, before he gets angry and starts shouting at her, smilingly, a less exciting than before said again, "Merry Christmas Mr. Khan."

Asad almost choked his coffee, he kept the cup aside and standing up immediately stared at Zoya.

Zoya, before he gets angry and starts shouting at her, smilingly, a less exciting than before said again, "Merry Christmas,Mr. Khan."

And not giving him a chance to say anything said, "Where is my gift, Mr. Khan?"

Asad said calmly, "Merry Christmas, Ms Farooqui." "But is this any way to wish it?" raising his eyebrows he asked.

"Yeah.Of course." "Mr. Khan, it's christmas. Now we wouldn't be wishing "Happy Diwali" instead of "Merry Christmas".So wher..."

"I'm not saying that. I'm saying like you enter.."

"See, Mr. Khan. Don't change the topic."

"I'm not changing the topic.You're!"

"Okay.Fine.Then tell me, Where's my Gift?" Zoya asked forwarding her hand.

Asad gave a clap on her hand mocking Zoya and she jerked away her hand angrily.But after that what Asad said left her astonished, "GIFT?? Ms Farooqui, I wasn't aware you're so foolish."

Zoya shook her head confusingly.

"Santa gives gift in Christmas.Even the children know it. You don't know??" "Why will I bring gifts for you?"

"Because my Santa is You na, Mr. Khan.", An eyelock and Mitwa moment.


Breaking the glance, "Mr. Khan you really didn't bring any gift for me?" Zoya exclaimed sadly. "You decorated the whole house on the occasion of Christmas but you didn't bring any gift for me??! It's really SAD. I became so excited when I was suddenly reminded that it's christmas unnecessarily." Saying so Zoya goes to the window.

Asad stands beside her.

And reveals "May Santa give your gift to the party tomorrow" , he couldn't see her sad.



"Mr. Khan, you're saying as if Santa really exists.Leave it."

"But in your life, It Do!" Asad points out, "No?", he smiles looking towards her.

Zoya gets the signal and then she too smiles widely happily, then looks at the moon saying, "I'm waiting for it, MY Santa in that case." Asad too looks at the moon smilingly saying nothing.




In The Morning

All wishes "Merry Christmas" to the other instead of 'Good morning'. But Asad was nowhere to be seen. Dilshad says, "Najma, go and call Asad for breakfast. What's wrong with him? He never does so late!" Zoya replies that he must be sleeping as to he was awake till late night the previous day. When Najma answers, "Zoya, Ammi, Bhaijaan is not at home. He has left early at morning." Zoya says, "WHAT?!"

"Yes, Bhaijaan had an important work so he'll not be able to attending the party."

"HE'LL NOT BE ABLE TO ATTENDING THE PARTY!!" a shocked Zoya exclaims. "Why didn't he tell me before?"

Dilshad says, "Exactly, Najma.He didn't tell me anything either."

"I know.But it's as simple as that. If he'd told you both, you wouldn't have let him go and his going was very important.So.."

"And how come you let Him GO??" Zoya replies back "And what important work today? It's Holiday!!"

"I even didn't let him go without making him promise me that he'll here by today night itself. Actually there were some problems with land in Goa, one of Bhai's construction site. So he's gone to fix that."

"Ohh! That's how he was working so late yesterday.But it's not fair.He should've been here with me!"

"Yeah.It's not fair.At least he should've told us. But whatever happened, now forget it. Let's make preparation for the party after having breakfast." Dilshad says.
Zoya and Najma nods.
The trio sits for breakfast together...




By the evening, the house becomes even more beautifully decorated than it was before.

The entrance...



"Phupi, I can't believe Mr. Khan arranged the party such as if whole Bhopal will come to the party."

"How he will not? Though no outsider is coming, who are coming over means more than anything to him and besides it's your first Christmas in this house.So how will he not?"



The Christmas Tree

The decorations in Christmas Tree


"Even when he's not here. Phupi, how will they feel when they...Ayaan, Nuzhat, Nikhat will come here to celebrate with their brother but he'll not be here!"

Najma comes saying, "Not Bhaijaan, but the Q. is how will they feel celebrating the day with their would-be-BHABI?"

Zoya blushes slightly. Najma giggles.

Zoya chuckles at this at the next moment."Don't laugh tamatar.Let your Bhaijaan come.I'm going to take a nice class of him." Dilshad says, "Leave your anger now and get ready for the party baccha."

"Of course. I'll be going to get ready soon phupi. Why will I spoil my day because of him?" With that Zoya moves towards her room and gets ready.She looks like this


Najma comes in and gets shocked by seeing Zoya in this attire. "Why have you worn this dress,Zoya? You were about to wear a saree na??"

Zoya sighs deeply, "Why? What's the problem with this?"

"No problem, Zoya. But..."

"Your bhaijaan will not be coming. I skipped saree that's why...When he'll not be here whom should I adorn for??" She smiles sadly.

"But if by chance, he makes out here."



To be continued...


How was it?😳
Merry Christmas to all.😊And to our AsYa!!😳
Hope it was worth reading and you enjoyed it.Rotten tomatoes and vegetables are welcome!😆It was My first attempt at writing.No idea how was it!!
Please let me know how was it by your comments!😊
It's an OS but being busy with studies, I'm going to post it in two parts. I was going to post it in Christmas but couldn't do it as well..



Part 2


"But if by chance, he makes out here." exclaims Najma a bit excitingly to move Zoya's mood.

"Arey Zoya, why have you wore this?" Dilshad comes in telling.
"Is this so bad?" She pouts. "Mr. Khan will not be here so I kept it simple."

"How can you say this so firmly,Zoya?" "You know Christmas is a season of perpetual hope. So keep your hopes high.He might be able to make his presence.Don't lose hope."

By now, Dilshad also knew what others knew apart from Zoya.

Zoya tries to argue "But phupi.."

"My heart says he'll be here soon."

Zoya's face get enlightened hearing that. "A mother's heart can never say wrong. I'll change this soon tamatar and phupi."
The invited guests arrive means Ayaan, Nikhaat, Nuzhaat, Humaira.Only they were invited to the party. They are also amazed by the beautiful arrangements their bhaijaan have made for them.

Zoya comes out of her room after draping a saree and making her hair curly. She only got ready for her Mr. Khan this time and she was waiting eagerly when he will be coming!

They wish each other and in the meanwhile a Santa clause comes with a sack in his shoulders which contains gifts and a bell in hand. Ringing the bell while singing he enters, "Ho ho ho ho ho ho Jingle bell, jingle bell, jingle bell rock, Jingle bells swing and jingle bells ring.."

Zoya surprisingly telling, "From where he landed up? I wasn't aware any santa is coming!"

"Maybe bhaijaan hired him." Ayaan suggests.

The santa starts giving gifts to everyone.


Zoya thinking, "Whom I've been waiting for is not here but from where he landed up!! Mr. Khan would have told me na if there were any Santa claus coming!"


"May Santa give your gift to the party tomorrow!" She gets reminded of his words.


"Yeah. Maybe Mr. Khan has sent him to reach his GIFT to me. Himself couldn't come, now sent his gift by other so that can keep his word of Santa giving gift to me to the party. Hmph!!!" Zoya thinking to herself.


"BTW Phupi was right. It's Christmas and I should keep hope. Now I am getting my gift soon. Maybe possible that Mr. Khan also attends the party."


Zoya looks towards Santa hopefully as if a child is looking at the moon. Santa gives away gifts to everyone apart from her. "Excuse me, WHERE'S MY GIFT?"


By now, everyone knew it was Asad except Zoya. The Santa comes to her, "Ho ho ho merry Christmas child, is there any wish you want to grant from me?"


"Mr Khan ki bacche.You didn't send me any gifts!! I'm not going to spare your life." Zoya murmuring.


Asad heard that and smiling inwardly, he decided to tease her with that.

"Bacche.So you want child!"


UPDATING...In The Process..Please Wait.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Special res for Daljit aapi, Shweta di, Soumya, Aanchal, Maina and Sathya! And res for all beautiful readers who will read this story.
Edited by GorgeousSmile - 7 years ago
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res////
Is it a VM?
Or a story?
Did you injured your head or something??
Or maybe you were having fever, HIGH fever??
HOW CAN YOU CALL SUCH AN AWESOME PIECE AS TRASH??😡😡
I agree it is not that awesome but as for your first attempt it is brilliant!!
Unres..
Totally amazing idea!
I want to read something like this from a long time.
But glad that you gave me an opportunity to read it.
What were you saying that I shouldn't read it!!!
Thanks to myself that I read it else I would have suffered a big loss!!
Whatever, coming to the review.
It was a nice concept.
Something new and creative.
Banner was lovely.
The way Zoya that you are my santa was .
Then the pictures glorified the whole OS.
Zoya's dress was nice.
She didnt wore saree cause Asad isnt there to adore her.
Zoya he will come for you for sure!😉
But I cant guarantee!
Addrita ki writing hai Addrita hi jaane!
I guess Asad is out for Zoya's gift.
I am thinking what the gift might be!!
But it was quite small!!
Try to update longer parts next time.😉
Waiting for the second part eagerly!
Update soon!!
And soon means SOON!!😳
ADVANCE HAPPY NEW GREGORIAN YEAR!!
BELATED MERRY CHRISTMAS.
Last but not the least CONGRATS on your first attempt.😊
Thanks for the special res.😊

See I am also first!!😛

Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra

res////

Is it a VM?
Or a story?

Errmm...Tried to write a story...But maybe I like trashes more!!😛
And see, you're here for searching the trash!😆
An OS...After a lot of hurdles.. Somehow..!!😳
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Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Errmm...Tried to write a story...But maybe I like trashes more!!😛
And see, you're here for searching the trash!😆
An OS...After a lot of hurdles.. Somehow..!!😳


It is always necessary to search out new talents inside you.
It is amazing that you are bringing them out slowly and steadily.
Already waiting for it.
Update soon.😊
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Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra


It is always necessary to search out new talents inside you.
It is amazing that you are bringing them out slowly and steadily.
Already waiting for it.
Update soon.😊


Hehe... I'll bring out that mess soon!!
Update in 24 hours or less...😊
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Updated first part!😊
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Superb Story with exactly matching pics
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Congratulaton for the os
Res as of now
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Congratulaton for the os

Res as of now

Thanks!😃
Unres soon. . .
Will be waiting for your review eagerly..

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