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Linsie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Pure! And beautifully written story.

Loved it..

A little slow moving one but, I loved the depth of emotions you entered into it making it extraordinary.

Keep writing it lil sista.

Big wala thumpy up for your beautiful work.

Take care and keep smiling.. Tata until next time!

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LuvurselF

@LuvurselF

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Amazing update 😊
And the banner is very lovely nd an amazing work sans
👏
Coming to the part
Beautifully written 👏
From this part we got a glimpse of Asya's personality
here Zoya is a business woman
Nd a lonely girl who's craving for love nd care
One side asad who's going back to his motherland
But still he feel some uneasiness .but why?
Is he thinking about zoya?
Interesting !!!
Eagerly waiting to know how their journey become their destination
Continue soon appu

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Edited by sanayasurbhi - 8 years ago

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LuvurselF

@LuvurselF

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
Wwoow 1st part bhi likh dia arpu tune👏
Me 2 love the banner ..Thnx to sans
Res for now

Or Res mere pyariyo ka bhi

Dillu
Ashi
Tehs
Somu
Anchal
Addu ( me toh khud he kr Lia )

Thanks 🤗

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aanchal

@Loving_life

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Wow firstly beautiful banner! Just loved it 😊

Coming to the update its beautifully written...😃

So zoya is a lonely girl here and asad has a family but still he is missing something

In childhood days she had a family staying at the apartment now there is no one means she has a terrible past related to her family

ASAD is missing zoya or someone else

Wow! Lot of suspense eagerly waiting for it to get unfold

Great work Arpita👏

And thank you so much for the res my sweetu shwetu🤗

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Unres

Congrats

It is amazing to see when readers turn writers

Glad u atarted with asya my all time fav

Love the banner and an awesome and interesting start to your story

So both are in London

Both returning home

One to a mansion and loneliness

One to a large family he seems happy but something is still amiss

Hoping you will be having them meeting on the flight

And hopefully maybe another run in when hopefully they have to work together on a contract

Well lets see what u have plan

Cont soon

Good luck

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Unres

Finally read the first prt

Soory late unres ke lie .. first story or kitani beautiful🤗

Banner ne to mujhe QH ke first episode me yaad dila dia

Beautifully written arpu..

So asad had a family still something missing

and poor zoya is all alone n in London fr work come holiday ..Waitng to knw about her true friend ..

Both going to return India I guess ..Hope both plane😃 me mile while going back ..Mujhe aise first meeting bahut pasand hai 😆

Looking forward to nxt prt ..Update soon jab bhi time mile ..Will all wait

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Sweetu Maine kabhi nahi Socha nahi th k tum itna long comment de sakti ho

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Sweetu Maine kabhi nahi Socha nahi th k tum itna long comment de sakti ho

Mene bhi dillu 😆

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Mene bhi dillu 😆

di..next part is already up..!

And I may surpise u..😉

Mostly next week woh bhi update karke I will move away..!

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