AsYa SS: Crossed Paths- Important Notice | Pg 79| 28-11-2018

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey peeps,

Its me Arpita with my first ever story.

Before starting with my story I have a large number of people in this forum to be thankful. Because a girl who was even lazy to read a page of anything other than her textbooks(at times not even that) had suddenly changed into a bookworm or rather blog worm and the credit goes to all the wonderful writers in this forum. I know many of them have already left and very few are here but I thank all of them for their inspiration.And also all my dear friends here who have played part in my journey here.

As I said in the beginning this is my first ever attempt on stories so I am bound to make many mistakes. Still I tried my best to come up with something readable.

All criticisms are welcome.


INDEX

Prologue - Scroll down

Chapter 1 - Page 6

Chapter 2 - Page 16

Chapter 3 - Page 29

Chapter 4 - Page 56

Chapter 5 - Page 65

Chapter 6 - Page 72
Chapter 7 - Page 78(changed from 79)
Chapter 8 - Page 83

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CROSSED PATHS...

-When the journey becomes destination


Banner Credit - Sans{Zephyr.}

Prologue

'Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength'

A tale of two persons who learned to live when there were no hopes left, when their happiness have been snatched away mercilessly, when hoping became a sin, when the golden memories of past turned to a burden weighing down their shoulders yet- they fought with everything they had. They may not be similar in any way if you see, yet they have a similar story of battle, story of scars, and story of failures and the glorified tales of their success.

What will happen when their paths cross?

Let me tell you the tale is also of those two persons who would have hoped for everything but love.

What will happen when love barge into their life without a knock? Will they surrender themselves to this battle between their heart and mind? Or will fight away?

The tale of a girl who never believed in fairy tales, who despised prince charming, who gave up on happily ever afters' because life taught her better. She may be the strongest of girls with her appearance but remember, they say 'appearances are deceptive'.

This is also a tale of a man whose spirits are as high as the sky, who could move the mountains for a smile of his loved ones, who gave up on his happiness to sustain the same of others. He may be the one who taught others to dream, have you wondered what about himself? Some questions are better when left unanswered.

The two broken souls who were forced to lead their own way till now are going to crash into each other's world. Will they be able continue their pre-planned journey? If not, will the lost ways lead to a new destination, the ultimate destination?

Will they heal each other and complete the missing parts of their puzzled life? With no hate-love quotient, with no love at first sight will a love story be able to build up?

Edited by --Mirage-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Are you interested in this tale of little hatred, much understanding and immense love between the two?

Share your thoughts..

Feel free to criticize friends.

And as my signature says I will not be much active. My boards are in 2 months and I wrote this in my breaks from the studies .May be I will post the first chapter soon and then regularly in April.

Edited by --Mirage-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful Concept Arpu
Totally awed of it
two persons with different personality but gone through pain in past but still living for others and have no hope for love
awesome yr
please continue it
Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for all who are reading this..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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mere apru ke 1st story🤗 .. abhi res for us all
Edited by shweta_yadav - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Sis!
It smells interesting lol. 😆
And OMG It's Your first? A very big Congrats for that. 👏

Awesome story idea. Looks mysterious and full of secrets. I would love to see their hurtful past. And how they will cross each other.

Both ASYA sound mature and family lovers.
The whole concept is grippy.
Waiting for Chappy # 1!😉
Keep it up! 😳

_-_-_
Besty of luck for your exams! Do well. 👍🏼
Edited by CuteMonsta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Appu ur first story
Prologue is interesting
Look like they both are two broken soul
Looking forward to read more

Beautifully written
Continue soon 😊
Edited by sanayasurbhi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Congratulations!! for Your First Story on ASYA(KABHI).👏
It was so Happy to see this.😊
The Story line was so Interesting.😊
The Tale of a Girl and Man were so Interesting.😊
Two are so Different and Interesting.😊
The Title was so Nice.😊
Update When You are free.😊
All the Best for Your Exams.😊
Study Well.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice concept dear
Will loved to read how they reacted when love knock on their door.
Do pm me whenever u update
Thanks

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