Asya SS ~Broken Dreams And Shattered Soul~Part 9 Updated on Page 81 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Looovelllyy start!!
Loved it
Seems interesting and promising!
Update soonishesty !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

It was a nice and short part...

Asad really misses zoya and zoya is in mental hospital..
Really sad to know that ..
Wondering what happened to her and how will asad find zoya and save her .
Thank u for the pm
And plzzz update next part soon...
But a long one...
~JAZ~

Thank you
yes it was short
i will try to give long update next time
shall try to update as soon as possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: anuv6

its too short...bt interestng
cont soon

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Looovelllyy start!!

Loved it
Seems interesting and promising!
Update soonishesty !!

Thank you
i will try to update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Always_asya

You are welcome Shweta sweetu 😆 well i did not write anywhere that zoya is scaring from asad 😉


😕
I knw u dnt said but
Mere imagination weird hote has rahe hai towards asad ..😆
I already declared him villain here

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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav


😕
I knw u dnt said but
Mere imagination weird hote has rahe hai towards asad ..😆
I already declared him villain here

Hota hai aisa kabhi kabhi well mere saath toh hamesha hota hai 😉
asad is not villain
villain ki entry abhi baki hai
Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Very nice start
I will not complain
As you are new to this and it is nice to see a reader turn writer
So zoya grew up with asad and family
Radil adopted her after finding her in orphanage
So zoya was so her adorable self and asad his akduness
So asad is haunted by zoya memories
8 yrs she left his home and even dilshad didnt stop her
What went wrong and y dilshad dint stop her seeing she claimed she loved her more thsn her own kids
So was soya an adult when she left and where did she go
Bcuz she was only in hospital 2 mths
Love when she calling his name it was actually like he could hear her
Sorry I like knowing age of characters
Cont soon
Waiting to see how it unfolds

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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
I hate Asad here for being a jerk😡
How can he hate for being Gaffur's daughter especially wen he himself left her?
Wat kind of parents Rashid n Dilshad are who did not stopped Asad 4m hating Zoya?
I want Asad also to suffer badly
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Good that you added little more..😊
8 years since Zoya left Khans and 2 months for her stay in hospital..
Looking forward to know more about the past..

😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Beautifully written 😊
Amazing starting 😊

Continue soon 😊

Thanks for the pm 😊

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