Asya SS ~Broken Dreams And Shattered Soul~Part 9 Updated on Page 81 - Page 7

Nice start dear
Asad hurt her & she is in mental asylum
Waiting for an update soon to know what happened that she reached in that position.
Do pm me plz
Thanks

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">It was very painful to see Zoya in that condition...feel so bad...she was suffering from the start...first her own father abandoned her...and then something drastic must have happen that she is suffering so much...
I wonder what happened in past...eight years ago...what Asad did??
Well, Daljit good going...👏👏
Loved reading first part...
do continue soon
Thanks for pm 😊
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Thank you Deepti
yes poor zoya bear so much
will reveal in next update what he did to her

P.S - tum update kab dene wali ho 😆

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Thank you Deepti
yes poor zoya bear so much
will reveal in next update what he did to her

P.S - tum update kab dene wali ho 😆

Really...then I can't wait...want the next update soon...
chalo now I got the chance to ask you for an update...
upadate chahiye...jaldi...

hehe...maine toh abhi tak kuch likha hi nahi...I am thinking about taking a break for sometime...as a writer I mean 😆

Originally posted by: anopama

Very nice start

I will not complain

As you are new to this and it is nice to see a reader turn writer

So zoya grew up with asad and family

Radil adopted her after finding her in orphanage

So zoya was so her adorable self and asad his akduness

So asad is haunted by zoya memories

8 yrs she left his home and even dilshad didnt stop her

What went wrong and y dilshad dint stop her seeing she claimed she loved her more thsn her own kids

So was soya an adult when she left and where did she go

Bcuz she was only in hospital 2 mths

Love when she calling his name it was actually like he could hear her

Sorry I like knowing age of characters

Cont soon

Waiting to see how it unfolds

Thank you anopama
yes its 8 years since she left or must say forced to be left
haha you are one who did not claim that asad was not the one whom zoya pleaded but just calls him the majority think othetwise
you will know about their ages slowly as the story will proceeds
thanks for understanding my hesitations as a new writer it is difficult to write down your thoughts properly and deeply
will continue soon

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Really...then I can't wait...want the next update soon...
chalo now I got the chance to ask you for an update...
upadate chahiye...jaldi...

hehe...maine toh abhi tak kuch likha hi nahi...I am thinking about taking a break for sometime...as a writer I mean 😆

Hahaa wait toh karna parega tume bhi to pta chale when writer does not give update toh poor reader kaisa feel karta hai 😆
are new writers ko thori choot hoti hai but older and experience writers ko nahi 😉
why break itna time mein break hi liya hai tumne

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I hate Asad here for being a jerk😡

How can he hate for being Gaffur's daughter especially wen he himself left her?

Wat kind of parents Rashid n Dilshad are who did not stopped Asad 4m hating Zoya?

I want Asad also to suffer badly

Well you will know slowly when stoery will proceed
he is already suffering

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Good that you added little more..😊

8 years since Zoya left Khans and 2 months for her stay in hospital..

Looking forward to know more about the past..

😳

Thnaks Arpita
yes 8 years
you will know in next update i think 😉

Originally posted by: ridhi95

Beautifully written😊

Amazing starting😊

Continue soon😊

Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Hahaa wait toh karna parega tume bhi to pta chale when writer does not give update toh poor reader kaisa feel karta hai 😆
are new writers ko thori choot hoti hai but older and experience writers ko nahi 😉
why break itna time mein break hi liya hai tumne

me kuch nahi jante girls ,,i need updates frm u both