Asya SS ~Broken Dreams And Shattered Soul~Part 9 Updated on Page 81

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello lovely people
I really do not know from where to start
well from few days a idea for story of asya is going on in my mind so thought to penned down
so i am here with this story
hope you all like it

Prologue

what are dreams? some called what we see in sleep are dreams while some says with open eyes. What happens when the same dreams broken and shatters a innocent soul with them?
Two nurses are talking about a patient who is in the hospital from a month or two.Did she ate?asks the one "No" answered the other

Do not know what happened with her that she is broken to such extent and who is she? no one came from her family from the time she came here in this mental hospital and she does not utter a word while other patients in hospital are making horrible sounds.while they are talking ,at the same time in a corner of hospital sits a girl with empty eyes staring into nothing but remain unmoving in one corner with a bracelet in her hand .Her fingers held it so securely if it is her most precious thing in the whole world while she herself unaware of anything?

On the other part of city stands a businessman near his office's window staring into the people outside doing their works while he is lost in deep thoughts of someone who is nowhere seen as once lived with him and went so far that he cannot bring her back if he wants because he himself send her away from his life.
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INDEX

Prologue Above

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

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i do not know what have i written so ignore my mistakes which i am hunderd percent sure are in update
my exams giving me so much stress that i wrote this
so it is upto you people to like it or leave it 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Daljit
Nice start
I fear about asya past
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Sumi--

Hey Daljit

Nice start
I fear about asya past
Continue soon

Thank you Sumi
well their past is cruel that is why their present is painful for them especially for zoya
yes i shall continue it after my exams which are hovering on my head 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Intersting start...
Update soon

Thank you
shall continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The concept looks very interesting..
Looks like a dark and emotional story for me..
Waiting to read chapter1 of this to know why Asad and Zoya are soo much in pain..
Plzzz continue soon and do pm me..
~JAZ~

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Always_asya

Thank you Sumi
well their past is cruel that is why their present is painful for them especially for zoya
yes i shall continue it after my exams which are hovering on my head 😡

Best luck
Unfold story soon
I want happy ending 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start daljit ..
Continue soon ..n alot of luck fr exams
It's ur first story ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Sumi--


Best luck
Unfold story soon
I want happy ending😆

Thank you
only one exam remain after that i will post
hahaa don't worry ending will be happy bcs i do not like sad ending
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Daljeet..
Interesting start
Intrigued to read more..
The past seems too painful for both..

Hope your exams are going well..
Continue soon..
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Nice start daljit ..

Continue soon ..n alot of luck fr exams
It's ur first story ?

Thank you Shweta
shall continue
Yaar Three exams toh ho gaye hai pta nahi kya banega bas ek baki hai

yes it is my first story and i am very nervous about that

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