Asya SS ~Broken Dreams And Shattered Soul~Part 9 Updated on Page 81 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-1
Flashback
Ashu! Ashu!Ashooo! shout 10 year old zoya in her full lungs while running towards the garden where asad was watering plants.
"What is this zoya?why are you shouting i am not deaf" chided asad.Ashu see nazma spoiled my painting and she broked my colourbrush too cried zoya."So what! i am not going to fight with my sister for you "rebuked asad.zoya's innocent eyes filled with tears.everyone loved her except asad who did not like her much due to two reason.First because she is the daughter of gaffoor siddqui who is the big enemy of his father because rashid's company Dilshaad Construction reached on highest position than his company and secondly she is total opposite to him messy and talking machine.He dislike her but not hates her completely.somewhere he has a soft corner for her because of her past but does not show to her
flashback ends
"sir Mr. sharma is asking whether you are going to meet him today or some other time"parsad called him and he comes out of his thoughts."I wish i never behaved with you like i did zoya" sighed asad.

At mental hospital

"Leave me please! i did not do this,i wi...will no... not do this again please leave me.I did not ruin your suit please let me go please!please!please leave me" cried zoya.Nurses were trying to hold her but she became out of control so they injected her to slowly to sleep.pleasee leave me... Ashuu!! after saying these words she became unconscious
in these two months this is the first time she uttered something that such painful words with such emotoins anyone can feel her pain behind these words.

At Khan villa

Asad is sitting in his room doing his office work on his laptop while his real interest in the wallpaper which is photo of his,nazma and a smiling zoya with mischievous eyes.Asad admires the picture with soft eyes and remember how the picture had been taken by his abbu when he was busy glaring at zoya because she again did some stupid thing to irritate him .
suddenly he got up from his seat and started looking in different directions as if she calls him.He cannot help but feel a dull pain again as he is feeling from last 8years from the time she had gone from his house and his life.But being a emotionally challanged person he ignored it always or his responsibility towards his mother and sister overtaken of everything
Dilshad was watching various emotions playing on her son's face.She knows what is he going through right now though he does not tell anyone especially her.She knows that he was at fault 8 years ago but somewhere she considers herself responsible for this.She is equally as regertful as asad .If she stopped zoya that day may be circumstances would be different today only if she had.She and rashid loved zoya more than nazma and asad and bring her to their home when they found her in an orphanage after zainab's death.Zainab,Rashid and Dilshad were friends from college days.After their college rashid and dilshad got married and zainab went to Newyork while rashid settled his business in Bophal.After seven years they got the bad news of the death of zainab.They tried to contact her relatives and came to know that she had a daughter but no one know about her whereabout.They tried to find her everywhere and finally they came to know that she is in an orphanage and her own father gaffoor siddqui left her there because he did want her in his life anymore.Rashid and dilshad adopted the little five years old bubbly zoya and brought her home with them and from that time she was their family.

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Done hope all of you like it
ignore the mistakes please

Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
So here the first seems interesting..
Let me tell you its very short but since its exam days you are excused..
But next time try to make it little long😳
AsYa..
Asad is the Akdu as usual and Zoya is a sweetheart..
Looking forward to read more..dar
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Mirage--

So here the first seems interesting..

Let me tell you its very short but since its exam days you are excused..
But next time try to make it little long😳
AsYa..
Asad is the Akdu as usual and Zoya is a sweetheart..
Looking forward to read more..dar
Continue soon

Thank you
yes i know it was
well you forget Arpita that i am very new in writing so itna toh banta hai yaar
mene apne comment ke size ka update diya which shows that i am a reader 😆
Besides mere phone ki battery dead hone wali thi and i was engrossed in a movie so thought to end here
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Daljit
is this first part or teaser😲 ..start hote he khatam😆

itnana chota ab toh exams r over na so ... pls increase the length

the prts is so good i toh start hating asad abhi se ...

update next soon .. n big prt this time
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Always_asya

Thank you
yes i know it was
well you forget Arpita that i am very new in writing so itna toh banta hai yaar
mene apne comment ke size ka update diya which shows that i am a reader 😆
Besides mere phone ki battery dead hone wali thi and i was engrossed in a movie so thought to end here

yes I know you are too new as a write...
so as the story progress you will be able to polish this skill of yours
and also could increase the length of the updates..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
I hate Asad n Najma too😡
Cuz of Asad n his hatred she will even go to mental hospital
Hope Zoya does not forgives him
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Daljit

is this first part or teaser😲 ..start hote he khatam😆

itnana chota ab toh exams r over na so ... pls increase the length

the prts is so good i toh start hating asad abhi se ...

update next soon .. n big prt this time

This is side effect of being a new writer 😆
Chalo isse teaser hi maan lo tum
i will try for long update next time
abhi aur occasion milega hate karne k liye
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Mirage--


yes I know you are too new as a write...
so as the story progress you will be able to polish this skill of yours
and also could increase the length of the updates..

yes thats true Arpita
update will automatically be long when my hesitation will decrease 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Always_asya

This is side effect of being a new writer 😆
Chalo isse teaser hi maan lo tum
i will try for long update next time
abhi aur occasion milega hate karne k liye



i m glad tum writer toh bani finally...

i ya 99.9 % stories asie hai is forum pr ..jisme sab akdu ahemend khan to starting me hate he krte hai

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how's u r exams ..kon sa tha paper

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

I hate Asad n Najma too😡
Cuz of Asad n his hatred she will even go to mental hospital
Hope Zoya does not forgives him

Thank you
yes asad is responsible for her state to some extent but not too much
zoya will make him realise it

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