AsYa (KaBhi) Lyrical FS : Tu Hi Re... Part 3 - A/B, Pg 18 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: MayurChan

HeLLo Di..😊


Hello to you too champ 😊
Coming to the Update..
This was an Amazing and Well written part..

Thankew 😳
Even though their was a character going through a FRIENDZONE problem , this is what normally happens in real life too...and you wrote that part excellently..👏

Yes...absolutely this happens in a real life but in fictions situations turns out in their favors and in real life it can be different
I love the songs too..

You should watch the Sanam's version of this songs...and I start fangirling here😆 but can't help...
Suhani si ek bacchi is hiding something...is Zoya the reason ???😆

Hehhe...my suhaani si bachhi is planning to give a surprise to her Aashu...actually she is much eager to meet Zoya
It seems that Zoya has gone through some troubled times after being away for 3 years...

Hmm...she suffered too...but that was her own decision
Their are some many things which i want to know...and eager to read about their reunion..

I hope the reunion turn out well
Continue soonish..

will try to continue soon 😊
# This also got me to think that , here Asad was #FRIENDZONED by Zoya and i think it is normal and we can't force things on someone and we accept it...but what if the scenario was the total opposite ???? what would have been the reaction then ????

About the #FRIENDZONE...yes it's normal and you know coz of ShraMan I have thought about different scenarios too...well it turn out good and worst too...if you remember coffee...
I am thinking about something cute too in that matter...
But in real life I have witnessed something tragic too...so the reaction is really depends on the situation...the maturity level of both persons...other persons feelings and if the feelings are not in favor then how the person handle it...



But one thing...I really like to write on this plot #FRIENDZONE 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

❤️ 🤗😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Hello
I am here finally...

Very very awesome update...
O mere dil ke chain sequence I loved it was so good..

And what happened to Zoya,,,
Kya mess kiya usne...

It's written so we'll all the parts..

Ab continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Ab toh iss story ko update kiye hue bhi time ho gaya Deepti ji
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Deepu...read first part..
very nice part..
loved suhani very much..
running to read next chappy...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
deepu...it was amazinggg...
totally fell in love with story..
loved their friendship..
what decision zoya took in past which she is regretting now..
i can't wait to know...
plzz update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Chapter 1
So its me RJ Ridziiee tuning in to this wonderful si story by none other than the very gorgeous and very talented my deepti didu! Yaaayyy!!!
So...my message for her there it goes:

Didu!!!
I just loved it!!!!!
First of all the song!
I just love this song...
Old melodies are my fav!!!
N this was so beautiful!!
I loved Suhani! She is adorable!!
N their tuning!
I saw myself somewhere... When once we had no problems and we smiled so full of life, that childhood!
Lovely!!!
Now I am really excited for the next part !!!
We will be having AsYa...
I guess the 'someone' he mentioned was her...
This was absolutely beautiful!!!
N this song added it's own charm!!
Didu mujhe bohat accha nahi nahi bohat zyaada acha laga...
U know I just love reading lyrical!
N meri har story bina kisi Song ke nahi complete hoti...
Absolutely awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just loved it!!
Loved it loved it loved it!!!

Friends I hope aap sabko bhi yeah part bohaat pasand aaya ho!!
Stay tuned for more and more and more and moreeerrr haha I know aisa koi word nahi hai Lekin yeah dil mange more
Kya hai AsYa ka past? When are they meeting? Kaha hai Zoya...Kaun hai Zoya? Loved Asad and Suhani? Then stay tuned to this awesome work!!
Stay tuned and take care
For now me your apni RJ Ridziiee jumping on to the next part and signing off for now...
Stay tuned!
Till then Dil Ki Suno Dil Ki Karo!!
Much love
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
So it's me RJ Ridziieee back on the channel with get another interesting and much more amazing chapter... Well I just mean the review..come on chado mat!
The first thing..the songs...
Oh my my
Songs Ki to jaise mano diwali festival me ladi hi lag chuki thi
Oh my my
N love all of them!
N the lyrical thing was absolutely awesome!!!
We finally had the much awaited AsYa!
N don't you thing friends, Ki Zoya reminded of Bunny from the movie, Yeh Jawani Hai Deeewwaayyyaannniii!!
Hahaha
Mujhe ese vibes aaye...
Anyways getting back to the update... It was flawless!
So crazy so funny
However because main abhi rokar uthi hu to I just went with Asads character in the FB...jab humare karte hue bhi koi nazarandaz kare...it's a talent that itne kam words me itni beautifully pen down karna itna relevant lage...hats off..mujhe dekhiye itna bolgayi fir bhi bata nahi parahi Ki how much I loved the update!
Mera kharab sa rotlu Sa mood was my cherry on this wonderful piece of cake...lekin ab ekdum awesome hogaya padhkar 😃
Vaise talent hai na..itne rotlu mood me se nikal kar inni mast RJ banne ka 😆
But the FB was awesome
She was so dependent yet so aloof!
Usne kabhi realize nahi kiya and Asad silent legendary devdas bana tha...offooo!!😛
N my fav line from the update was...

He blinked his eyes in denial and his hands reciprocate her actions...as he hugged her back...to let her go...


Ufff Mardala!!
Such beautiful lines!!
Lady, you ought to be magician, because I am under the spell!!!!

Oh waaoooww
Just loved it!!
N suhani and Asad...the two awesomeness Ki heights!!!
Beautiful
N woah woah audience... hochuki hai Zoya Ki entry...in present I mean!
Lag chuka hai suspense ka tadka!!
Oh lala
Now this is gonna be awesome..
But.mujhe bunny se achanak se chashmish Kyu dikhi?!!
Now I am pretty much excited!
N so u all are!!!
Stay tuned for noewww!!
This getting too interesting!!
Please leave ur feedback and encourage and support this amazing writer!!
I will take ur leave for now
So your apni RJ Ridziieee signing off
I hope aapko meri commentary sunkar acha laga ho!!
Buh bye..take care!!
Much love!!
See you soon at the same place!
Stay tuned!!!
N ya update soon!

Edited by riddhi1206 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Finally managed to catch up on this amazing work
And I am really sorry for not commenting before
Life just loves to test at times
Coming to the story, it was so beautiful
In love with the characters especially suhani
Asad suhani scenes were a treat to read
Asya flashback was heart touching
So seems like after staying away from asad zoya has finally managed to realize her feelings for him
Felt really bad for asad in the flashback story but hoping that he gets his share of happiness in the future with zoya by his side
Looking forward to the meeting of asya again and their reactions on finally seeing each other
Hopefully, would have a confession soon
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue very soon
Will be waiting impatiently
And would try my best to comment super fast for the next update
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Deepati ab iss update ka v kuch karo 😆

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