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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Mera

Unres

Arshu darling 🤗

wonderful update

I loved the way you wrote abt Misha

her yellow mayon ka dress

her coming out of her home

too good yaar 👏 👏

us ke baad i loved the scene where zoya was prying and asad came to her

again too good

Zoya ke decision was bang on

i loved the way she asked for time

and asad ka usse samjhna and wait karna was simply wow

i know itna asaan nahi hoga but eventually asya will be together

love you for writing this story ❤️

Edited by AkaiBara - 8 years ago

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#182

For all the lovely readers

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Unres

Update is so amazing untill the unfinished end ..I m the person who's nt satisfied with such ending 😭

I agree z10 yrs ka pain 10 min ke confession se slove ni hota..but I still wnt a happy end fr my asya

Poor asya...

Nw u hv 2 write the OS to finish this one..i wnt proper ending happy wala..

Hope u continue

Edited by shweta_yadav - 8 years ago

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Great work..

It is true that the pain,the loneliness which we endured for 10 long years can never be ignored with few words...

I really loved how you ended the story..

Even though it is not a happily everafter..

We all do have to face hurdles in our path...

It is sure that he will win her heart again ...beacuse he is her first love n he very well know how to heal her..

It may take time n may be tough but AsYa will find a way to be together

Misha-Asad scene was also good...he did break many hearts...

And he surely will have to be face the consequences...

Loved Zoya's pov..she valued her self respect too..

For me the ending wasbjust apt for the story..

But would love to read a sequel..for this one..

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priya

@preetiasya

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

it was really nice

the ending was nice

but i really wanna know how the distance between will reduce

pls write a squel or an os

cont soon

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Jasmeet(Jass)

@-jass-

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

You may write a sequel?
you gotta kidding me!
You have to write a sequel for sure :-)
&
overall Interesting TS with a sad pre-ending
Why pre-ending?
cause
I am looking forward for a Sequel.

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ayat

@ayat20

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Not satisfied

A sad should have proved himself

Both should have accepted

But still nice part

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Awesome Ending Dear ...!!!
I completed agree with your point of view ...!!!
Loved it ...!!!

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siyasharma94

@siyasharma94

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Amazingly written😉

Great ending..👏

Bt I m eagrly waiting for the sequal of this OS to see them together. 😃😃

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anuv6

@anuv6

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#190

did u just...finished it????
its a very nice update nd i want asad to knw the pain of zoya also bt i also thought that u'll bring them together at the end, bt...
its so sweet that u r concerned abt ur readers, so yeah if u'll bring sequel , then it'll be awesome bz i too want to knw ASYA after long seperation ;)