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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Awsm updt.
Very emotional.
&m satisfied wid ths end.
asad deserve tht nt bcz he didnt lv her bt bcz he wsnt thr wid her whn she needed him most..
Har kahani ki happy ending nehi hosakti.

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Aaroo ki bachi..cliffy end ..I will kill uh if u didn't write sequel for this ts...

Coming to the update...it was beyond superbbb...

Little emotional, n u know v r senti partners...so obviously i will love it..

Felt very bad for Misha..but kya karu...Asad Zoya ki h..

Finally aftr lng 10 yrs Zoya is gng to get her love back..

Zoya teacl him good lesson ;)

Aaroo..i wanted to read more..but u ne end kiya yeh story...

I wanna sequel for this...strike on...strike on...

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Not complaining

But definitely have to write a sequel

It is not tht it wasnt good

It was awesome

Asad got what he deserves

He cant get zoya so easily by just saying

Sorry and I love you

He has to work hard to get forgiveness to build tht trust he shatter as a friend more so a childhood bestfriend

He needs to beg and grovel

Glad zoya self respect matter and she didnt fo falling into his arms

Felt sad for misha but it is asya forever

Loved it

But sequel in some time sion

Good luck

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Love it

Surely want a sequel os

This is not done

But update was brilliant

Thanks for pm

Waiting for os

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
Tehs aka my CP

🤗

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Arooo

I would have hugged you so tight after reading this...

Aroo this was just so perfect...

U surprised me with the end.

Yes I had thought it would be a happy ending..but I don't mind a cliff hanger knowing they will fight for their love even after 10long years.

I am speechless not knowing how to review this.

Misha with a lot of dignity said everything which was perfect..

Just perfect.

And I wish Zoya would have questioned him about misha..

Like what about her?

Did you leave her at the altar?

I wanted Asad to answer those questions.

I'm glad Zoya don't go running to him and made him realize.

Or he would take her for granted again..

But the happy ending sucker reader in me always wants to see a happy ending so I would really live to see a sequel or OS about how they progress.

But I know how busy you are and won't force you for this..

And I can't express how happy I am and satisfied with this whole story..

The way you weaved it.

The main part which I wanted to read.

The pain with it..

I couldn't imagine anything better than this.

And I love you so much for this aroo..

I have written so much here that I don't know ab private mein Kya review doongi main 😆

But thank you once again for writing this especially for me.

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#197

perfect ending

beautifully written

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Amazing update
loved it
zoya did give up easily and she is right on her place
how can you expect a person to forget ten years of pain in ten minute
but i wants a happy ending too