AsYa TS : The Scars of Life... Third Shot - P. 29 !*COMPLETED* (16/10) - Page 8

Main yeh kehne wali thi and isliye ese baat karrahi thi bcoz I am leaving IF

Originally posted by: jas91

Huggie Janna tyt 1 🤗

meri maani nahi na piche se kar diya updt 😆 ...Koi ni I love u ❤️ & Bhala ho Mayur ko ja agar pehle pahunch jaye toh sabke liye res kar deta hai 😛

Coming 2 TS or its FS..kya maine sahi suna 😆 Chalo hum toh khush hi honge but yeah FS hui toh u'll take 2 weeks who meko manzoor nahi hai 😈 ... meko peanut ke mumma papa ki story bhi padni hai 😆

Chalo abhi seriously coming 2 plot
Its really a hard hitting 1& kudos 2 u 4 taking up d plot 👏 Sam di ki poetry was also awesome blossom something that tugs ur heart 😃
So both Asad & Zoya had a terrible past... poor babies 😭 I 1st felt Asad had tough 1 as he lost his parents at tender age & than had 2 face tough life 2 provide 4 Niks & later lost her too his only family ...But it takes great courage 2 come out of that phase & than become something so that u can help such ppl who also suffered same tragedy in life... I can say he's grown up 2 become a great Human being 👏 👏 or he could have also got lost in darkness & spoilt his own life & future.

Coming 2 Zoya her story also was heart wrenching... 4 a period of her life she has lived a normal life wid high spirits but 1 incident changed her life... d family she Loved all her life disowned her what can b more hurtful than that... A wounded soul got more pain while she has 2 b showered wid love & care.

Asya ki 1st meeting was unique & so happy shappy... & I felt ki Asad ke aate hi her old self came out... d way she shouted at him it was so natural at normal meeting yahi hua hota. & than their monologues Asad ki curiosity 2 see her, & Zoya's fear & the insight of her heart... d girl inside her who yet wants 2 b loved it will move anybody's heart 😔...therefore it brings more questions in my head that how can her parents turn their backs 2 their own blood & flesh 😕

It'll b interesting from here 2 see how & where Asya ki destiny will lead them 😊 ... & will her family make a re entry in her life? How will love blossom & Zoya's reactions 2 it... Btw Janna u toh told us some other concept par yahan toh waisa kuch tha hi nahi??... abhi aage ayega ki hume ullu bnaya 😆 😆

Chalo Love u🤗... jaldi isse finish karo taki Peanut ke mumma papa ki rentry ho 😆 😆

upar maine kya comnt kiya I don't know & if doesn't make any sense toh isse bura sapna samjjh ke bhul jana 🤣

meri Sweetheart agayi !!! 🤗
kya karun ? subah ko online hona it's hard for me because i'm in class at that time 😆
i love u too ❤️ haan bohot sweet hai humara Mayur 😳

FS toh kya ? lagta hai yeh SS banne wala hai 😆 nahi i'll be updating quite frequently more than i thought actually 😆

thank u so much !! i'm really glad that this plot got so much attention fr'om people
Aapi ki toh shayari waise bhie Ma Sha Allah hoti hai !!😳
Asad is a great human being because he has been helpless in life and now when he has the means to help, he's doing it generously 👏
haha that's exactly what i wanted to show, Asad ke aane pe hi, Zoya can be how she wants to be without any pretenses 😳
it's cruel the way her parents abandonned her 🤢

concept yehi tha !!😆 i said something that quite happens in India/Pakistan😆

love u too !!🤗
i'll be updating both so don't worry 😆

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Salaam Bano...

This is something serious...

First of All Welcome Backk...Aapi...😊 , I know she is not here yet...but her words are here...and they are enough to fill for her absence...I will get back to the poem later..

Coming to the update...,

Well this was wonderfully written Bano...we can see how sensitively this OS and its topic had be written...

Kudos to you for the topic...and i can say Aapi's influence is their in the words...because this topic somewhat reminds me of Aapi's work...because she used to write on such topics...

And how you adapted this on ASYA is very good...i like how you wrote about Zoya and her life , her struggles and how she is living her life now...Will see how Asad fits into her life now...

And at last the poem...have no words for that..it is just beautiful , kind of it sad also ( which you GUYS Love ) ...

Well written part ApPy...

Continue soonish...😊

Walekum Assalaam !! 😃

too serious ? 😆
see ? yeh tha poem jisne mujhe itna inspire kiya !!😳

thanks a lot for mentionning Mayur !! i was scared of being insensitive to the topic or that some people might take offense😕

lol thanks !! yeah Aapi ka jaadu har jagah pe hai😃

kya karein ? we r kinda depressive like this 😆

thanks a lot Mayur !!❤️

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Main yeh kehne wali thi and isliye ese baat karrahi thi bcoz I am leaving IF

Isliye...

I will unres my comment on your story ASAP

Take care!

Abhi zyada type nahi karsakti haath me lagi hai

Chota sa accident hogaya tha subah

Originally posted by: navk

so beautiful
loved it

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel

Love it

Very beautifully written

Love to read more soon

Thanks for pm

Update soon

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Amazing update loved it so much.

Continue soon.

thank u so much guys !! 😳

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Very beautiful concept.
Totally lv it.
Intrstng.
Xcitd 2knw asya's lv journey..
Whn asad saw side profile of zoya &th8 her 2b a beautiful grl tht remind me a old film 'satyam shivam sundaram' featuring sashi kapoor &zeenat aman.
Hope it ll nt go lk tht film whr ML leave FL aftr seeing her face.
Ovarall lv it.
Pls pm me if possible.

thank u so much dear !! i'm glad u liked it !! 🤗
yeah i heard about that movie after i posted this story 😕
no this is strictly a HAPPILY EVER AFYTER story ! buddy mr for PMs😉

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Abhi haath kaisa hai Riddhi ???

Aur yeh kya I.F chodhne ki baat karr rahi hoo..??

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Happy to see you with another Different Story on ASYA(KABHI).😊

It was So Interesting and Awesome TS.😊

Zoya Part was so sad.😭

How can Zoya's Parents also do like this with her.😭

Asad(KSG) Past also so sad,her Sister also victim of this Acid Incident.😭

ASYA(KABHI) Part was Awesome.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Conversation was so Nice.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Feelings towards Zoya was so Nice.😊

The Poem was Awesome.😊

Thanks to Saima-Syed fo this Poem,it was so happy to see with this Poems.😊

Thanks to Miss-Appy for mentioning these Poems.😊

Please Continue soon and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

thank u so much Priya !! 🤗

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

A breathtaking start to a beautiful story

Really very speechless with this amazing work

Loved how you used a very realistic plot that many girls go through in real life

Looking forward to know that does asad support her in spite of knowing what she has gone through in her life

Please continue soon

Eagerly waiting for this one

😊

thank u so much Muskaan !! i'm glad u liked it !! 🤗
yes i tried to be as realistic as possible, knowing that this is a sensitive topic and i can't just add things of my own😲
i'll update as soon as i reply to all 😉

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Thodi si swelling hai and dark hogaya thoda

Jaha cuts hai vo bhi jalta hai thoda thoda

Zyada move nahi karparahi

And baki sab jagah par muscle pain hai thoda

Ha maine db pe bohat pehle update kardiya tha

Bohat sochne k baad ye decision liya hai

iF is a family for me... To it's not easy to leave

Par pure din e mail aata hai IF ka jinhone bhi Padha

Isliye online aayi abhi

Aap kaise ho?😊