AsYa TS : The Scars of Life... Third Shot - P. 29 !*COMPLETED* (16/10) - Page 9

Originally posted by: anuv6

awesome...interestng nd new one
i read the poem so many times nd i just wanted to save it fr myself , its just beautiful. i felt every time when i read i, nd it just filled my heart nd i can say it like a mem poem.
it... made the story, like beautiful scars of life.
yess, ur writing way is soo beautiful dear esp the way u described ASYA feelings when they met each other...excellent nd perfect.
waiting eager fr ur nxt update...update sooon :)

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

I luv the concept 👏

Start is vry beautiful

Continue soon

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Loved the start...waiting for more :-)

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Very interesting

Update next part asap

Originally posted by: suganti

interesting story with interesting concept.

hope asad will help zoya to come out from her shell.

Originally posted by: Angels_Ring

Interesting story line...
Would love to read it further

Originally posted by: Chillichick

This is so beautifully written!

Loved it absolutely...!

The poem is brilliantly expressed too!

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hue jab Call me...😆

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Par hua kaise yeh sab ?

And issey IF chodhne se kya matlab ??

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Par hua kaise yeh sab ?

And issey IF chodhne se kya matlab ??

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Actually I had to interview a person from joint stock company...so just went there and the office is on a very busy lane.. I was crossing road to bohat traffic tha and meri friend k scooty flyover k neche parking area me thi and I was holding my other friends hand vo a age badhi and vo kaise steps bigde and traffic k vajah se k there is a huge divider before the parking and main slip home dusri side gir gayi on my face( par gir k mud gayi isliye face bachagaya)!and vaha itne patthar the..

By god bohat filmy tha 😆

Iska IF se koi relation nahi hai

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

IF to main kisi aur reason se chodrahi hu

Pakka will unres the comment on KHTV asap

And uska new banner bhi try karungi