AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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addicted_93

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Hey DailyDaisy
Have enjoyed all the chapters so far! I love your writing style and especially your attention to details
I'm a little confused about Zoya running away from her wedding and coming back to the same house.

I hope the Dilshad in this story ends up being stronger than the one on TV and doesn't run back to her spineless husband. I really hope she picks Asad over him or anyone else for that matter. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story!

Love,
S

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priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

i didnt read this much big chapter upto now tat to in one chap

nice chap

thanks fr considering my advice its nice to see now

hoping to get more asya fastly

cont sooon

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mummyoftwo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

3rd part read now, it was Awsome. Loved the electric dancing floor part, could imagine the crackling of tension between asya. Seems like they will have a very passionate affair.
Asad is very dark and a lot more angry in this story than in the show and many other FF. I'm liking it!

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shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Just finished reading 6 prt ..n nw cn't w8 fr asya together

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
Awesome updates
i read three parts yet
all are lovely
i am little confused bcs of large number of characters
one thing i did not understand that in the beginning zoya run away from her marriage and now she is again in her home how?

Thank You! Hope you read and enjoy the rest too! I know many people are confused by them but don't worry you'll get used to them over time and many will exit soon!

I actually clarified that in the first part I believe. Zoya comes to India and her grandmother has arranged for her wedding to take place same day without her knowledge because she doesn't want Zoya to live with them or be a part of their family (reasoning will be explained over time). After Zoya runs away her cousin-brothers (the Grandmothers actual biological grandsons) arrive from Mumbai as a surprise and question about Zoya's whereabouts. That is why the grandmother allows Zeenat to call her back so that she doesn't lose respect in the eyes of her grandsons as they love Zoya a lot.

I hope that clears it!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: addicted_93
Hey DailyDaisy
Have enjoyed all the chapters so far! I love your writing style and especially your attention to details
I'm a little confused about Zoya running away from her wedding and coming back to the same house.

I hope the Dilshad in this story ends up being stronger than the one on TV and doesn't run back to her spineless husband. I really hope she picks Asad over him or anyone else for that matter. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story!

Love,
S

Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you like the style I initially was very apprehensive thinking you guy's wouldn't like it but I am so happy you are! Glad you enjoy the details because I like to write down the scene EXACTLY as I picture it happening hence this style.

Seems many people are confused about Zoya's wedding. I actually clarified that in the first part I believe but nonetheless I'll clear it again. Zoya comes to India and her grandmother has arranged for her wedding to take place same day without her knowledge because she doesn't want Zoya to live with them or be a part of their family (reasoning will be explained over time). After Zoya runs away her cousin-brothers (the Grandmothers actual biological grandsons) arrive from Mumbai as a surprise and question about Zoya's whereabouts. That is why the grandmother allows Zeenat to call her back so that she doesn't lose respect in the eyes of her grandsons as they love Zoya a lot.

Dilshad's past is different from the drama and her future will also be different. Let's hope she stay's with Asad. I hated what Gul did with that track in the show (as she did with many). Firstly the track had NO depth. I waited from the first episode for Gul to explore it. Dilshads heartbreak, Asads heartbreak their struggle and the pain but NOTHING. I wanted to see Zoya and Asad talk about it and what not but NO. And it was so pissing off when she leaves Asad to go back to Rashid..like you two ruin the poor kid and then go be happy on your own?

Hope you enjoy the coming parts!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
Just finished reading 6 prt ..n nw cn't w8 fr asya together

Yes I will post the last 2 remaining chapters together which do have AsYa in them as well but after those they will officially be under one roof and their story will pick up pace!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo
3rd part read now, it was Awsome. Loved the electric dancing floor part, could imagine the crackling of tension between asya. Seems like they will have a very passionate affair.
Asad is very dark and a lot more angry in this story than in the show and many other FF. I'm liking it!

Imagine KaBhi enacting such a scene eh..I'd probably die of too much fangirling 😆! Their love story will be intense is all I can say and intensity always comes with passion. Yup Asad is very very dark and I haven't fully exposed his full character yet so there are a lot of angles still left to explore there. He is VERY angry and has a very troubled past. Hope you enjoy the developments in his character and story!

Hope you enjoy the next chapters!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: preetiasya
i didnt read this much big chapter upto now tat to in one chap
nice chap
thanks fr considering my advice its nice to see now
hoping to get more asya fastly
cont sooon

Your most welcome! Yes just bear with me for the next 2 parts which I will post together and then they will be under one roof! Hope you enjoy the coming parts!

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mummyoftwo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Now I'm up to date with the chapters and I can say I'm speechless. The story has a nice flow and even the parts u called filler in a post don't feel Ike fillers but a integral part of the story line.
I'm living dilshads character in this story, she seems stronger and more in touch with her feelings here than in the show.
I'm dead curious about the tension between zoya a nana and asad. If my hunches are right or wrong about asads character only time will tell. Let's se how his character develops aswell.

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