New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016)

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shweta_yadav

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

40 likes me se 1 like mera done 😛. Update is super duper...next prt update soon

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nilusoni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Superb part

Zoya bonding with zara and dilshaad najma wonderful

Asya childhood story wow

Asya moment is amazing

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next

Continue soon

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Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

WOW !!!
MIND BLOWING UPDATE JAS ...!!!
IT WAS SUPERB ... AMAZING ... SOOO BEAUTIFUL ...!!!
VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN ...!!!
LOVED IT SOOO MUCH ...!!!
CONTINUE SOON PLEASE ...!!!
AND PM ME IF YOU CAN ... I HAVE SENT THE BUDDY REQUEST TO YOUR PM ID ...!!!

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Zoya n Zara bonding is lovely😃. I wonder whether an infant can really understand people around them so much. Her scenes were d best part of dis part.

As much as I liked Asad n did not had any problem in d last part I hated them in dis part. How can Asad just be rude to his childhood friend just cuz she is loud n messy? I don't think there is any excuse for Asad to behave like dis wid his childhood best friend unless she turned out to be terrorist. I did not liked Asad manhandling Zoya n leaving bruises. Which gentleman does it even to a anyone man or woman? Asad did not wanted to celebrate Zara's b'day cuz his Ayesha baby died. Really? Wat will he say to Zara wen she grows up some years 4m now? Dat her mom died cuz of her so her b'day will never be celebrated? Zara will be miserable then. If he truly loves his baby he sud celebrate Zara's b'day in a grand way so dat she sud not feel her absence n never feels guilty abt mom her being dead. Its good dat Zoya made him understand but he sud have known on his own. Sorry, I ranted too much but day before yesterday I heard a dialogue in a show dat just cuz ur stressed out did not give to license to be weird n stressed out it no excuse...Period.

I felt Ayesha's character sketch somewhat boring like being simple, homely, calm, polite, reserved. Hope u don't mind. She herself is d fault of her own death n poor Zara is suffering wid Asad foolishly not wanting to celebrate her b'day. Wat was d need to hide her pregnancy complication news? Wat was d need to bcum mahaan of not aborting d baby? D baby cud have come in any other way but her life wud not have come back.

Loved how Zoya made Asad explain everything by showing him how much happy Zara was. Asad really needs to understand dat if he don't celebrate Zara's birthday, he will only make her depressed on her every birthday wen she is supposed to be d happiest on dat day.

Loved Asad n Zoya's hug. I am worried dat if in d next part Asad will blast on Zoya getn embarrassed dat he let out his emotion n hugged Zoya pouring out his emotions.

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Awesome update
I loved the way zoya confronted him and soothed him
And asad hugged her back
So cute
Zara is seriously cute
Loved it
Update soon

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Suganti Kularaju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

nice chapter.

zoya celebrates zara's birthday without asad's consent.

later she got to know that ayesha died on the same day.

love how zoya consoles asad..

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: MayurChan
RES for Tehs... aaj kal bahut jagah late hai unke comments...😆

Ohhh one of my favorite scenes...

😆

Yes late hai comments...

I don't come everyday these days...

And yes I am late here too..

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Jassu Kya mast update tha...

Masti, jhagda, emotional all in one package u gave us..

Zara is cute...

And looking forward to their love story now.

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Unres on page 15 😊

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Amazing update

Loved reading it to the core

Loved how zoya has mingled up with zara and is spreading happiness all around

The way zoya handled asad was a treat to read

We got to read a deeper emotional bond between the two

Looking forward to know how the story and asya love progresses from here

Please try to continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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