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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Absolutely amazing

One of the best two shots I have read

You bring everything to life, your description and emotions are spot on

Love you Nim

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anopama

@anopama

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Excellent

I have never enjoyed something so much

Absolutely heartwarmingly beautiful

Thank god for vickram he was such a father figure

Haha love how her father give Asad the phone to talk to her with even knowing

And he got his song inspiration

Omg he worked hard and he built their future not only his

He made his presence in her life in the first year and she didn't even know

He hired her to work in their company

So knew he was gonna design her wedding gown

And get her to wear it and propose her

Love it love it

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

It was beautiful

Loved reading it to the core

Definitely one of the best ts I have read so far

It was seriously a treat to read this flawless work

The description of emotions was spot on

It actually felt as if I am watching a live movie

Just cannot get enough of it and would always have a special place in my heart

Thankyou for such an amazing work! 😊

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Res for Sis, Choco, IBP, Mayur, Asif Bhai, Jass, Chillichick, Annie, PriyaCherry, Abi, V, Anopama, Ammy, Prinky, Binuu, Aju, Muskaan, Allwaysasya, Sasir, San and Fatima for always encouraging me with their comments.

Thanks for the res

Take care!🤗

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Amazing one..

Loved everything about this ts..

Asad was always with her..that bouquet

Finally Asad fullfilled his promise👏

Everything was a big surprise for Zoya..

Both the song sequences were wonderful..

Proposal

Thanku so much for giving this amazing story...

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Res for Sis, Choco, IBP, Mayur, Asif Bhai, Jass, Chillichick, Annie, PriyaCherry, Abi, V, Anopama, Ammy, Prinky, Binuu, Aju, Muskaan, Allwaysasya, Sasir, San and Fatima for always encouraging me with their comments.

Thanks for the res🤗

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neilavni

@neilavni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Superb awsm one dear.
To gud.
Luvd it.
Such a beautiful romantic story.
Plzzz do write more ts.
Thnx for d pm
T.c

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Res for Sis, Choco, IBP, Mayur, Asif Bhai, Jass, Chillichick, Annie, PriyaCherry, Abi, V, Anopama, Ammy, Prinky, Binuu, Aju, Muskaan, Allwaysasya, Sasir, San and Fatima for always encouraging me with their comments.

Thank you...

And and and this was all just like a dream...

An inspiring story of telling us never to give up...

Their pain and hardships were too much but they won at the end which matters the most.

Asad was always connected to her thought the flowers he sent her...only she wasn't aware..

Love you for writing this..

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Amazing update
loved it
asad worked hard for success
zoya's emotions were written beautifully
asad sent flowers to zoya on every special day
finally they confessed infront of whole world wow
beautiful totally loved it
write some more ts on asya and update your another story