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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Res for Sis, Choco, IBP, Mayur, Asif Bhai, Jass, Chillichick, Annie, PriyaCherry, Abi, V, Anopama, Ammy, Prinky, Binuu, Aju, Muskaan, Allwaysasya, Sasir, San and Fatima for always encouraging me with their comments.

Firstly, thank you so so much Nims for this beautiful Birthday gift. I loved it completely ❤️ And secondly Thank you for the Res too 🤗

This was simply superb. Every emotion was described was spot on. I love your. Use of vocabulary, it's amazing.

The longing, the pain, the anguish, the fear and the love that asad azd Zoya went through could be felt right through to my heart. It was so brilliantly written that I fail to find words to express my feelings.

I loved it completely ❤️

Thank you once again for the dedication Nims.

Love you Infinitely 🤗

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Superb..
Amazing..
Heart warming...
Loved it soo muchhh...

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Amazing update

All the emotions were penned down beautifully

Asya reunion

Lovvved it to thend core

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

A beautiful update
So well written
You did a magical job👏
AsYa❤️

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anuv6

@anuv6

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

amazing story...
when the story reached the end... i'm very disappointed
i mean...why it have to end very soon,
one of the best two shots ever i read
its just...perfect

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

So amazing and emotional

made me nearly cry

I love it

Continue soon

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so Happy to see your Update.😊

Thank you so much for Res me,It Means a Lot to me.😊

Both Parts were Awesome.😊

The way Asad(KSG) build his Career was Amazingly explained.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Love Moments were So Heart-Touching.😊

ASYA(KABHI) feelings were so Beautifully explained.😊

The way Asad(KSG) makes Zoya to wear the Wedding Gown was so Nice.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Love Confession and Kiss was so Beautifully explained.😳

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Edited by PriyaCherry - 9 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Res for Sis, Choco, IBP, Mayur, Asif Bhai, Jass, Chillichick, Annie, PriyaCherry, Abi, V, Anopama, Ammy, Prinky, Binuu, Aju, Muskaan, Allwaysasya, Sasir, San and Fatima for always encouraging me with their comments.

Thank U sooo much for the RES Nims...😊

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Comin to the part..

This part was a Roller coaster ride for ASYA especially Zoya...as because only her journey of 3 yrs was mentioned 😆

Her longing , pain and struggle was portrayed in a very good way..

Well that scene at the start when gaffy comes to met Asad , I am confused...why was he their and why did hee wanted ASYA to talk with eachother...

Loved their confession too..

All and All a very good part...and a good B'day dedication to our Sweetest Choco Ji😳...Belated Happy B'day again...😆

Actually speaking of her...this part now suddenly reminded me of her FF LOVE HAPPENS...usmein bhi they were going through hardships which were not created by a third person directly but yes they had tough times...I loved that FF very much..

Okay soo mein apni bak bak bandh karta hu...

Very good and well written part...

Continue soo with your other stories..

Take Care...😃