A Love Lyrical. An AsYa Ts. Last Part on page 5. - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Brilliant Part Nims..👏
Loved this Part...
It started off really well...and you know I like the way you explain the surroundings in your updates..its captivating and gives us a image to imagine..😆
Will see ab yeh twist kaisa hoga...
Don't want any one to be between them...
Love the choices of song too..
Happy Birthday Again Dear Choco..😃
Continue soonish.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
It was so so beautiful
All the emotions were penned down beautifully
Happiee bdayyy choco
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rarepearl


Res for Choco & Sis 😃



Thank you so much my dearest for this dedication. You make me feel so special and top of that world with an ASYA dedication for me on my birthday 😃


It made me feel like this


This TS is amazing just superb. I can't wait to see what Asad does to fulfill his promise. You have beautifully penned their emotions room the beginning till the end.


Their silent conversations and their loved filled ones, made my heart flutter and the passion in there last scene was just WOW ☺️

I picturized every word that you wrote Nims. It was like watching a movie.


Loved it completely


Thank you once again for this dedication my sweetheart
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Awesome part dear
Loved it
All the emotions was beautifully written
Update soon plz
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
This is beautiful...loved every bit of it...awesome and too overwhelming...wonderful job
Love Zoya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Many Happy Returns of the Day,Choco..🥳🥳
I am Wishing you to celebrate so many Birthdays like this.😊
Thanks to Rareperal for such an Lovely wishes.😊
It was so Happy to see you with New story ASYA(KABHI).😊
It was Awesome TS.😊
ASYA(KABHI) became friends was so Nicely explained.😊
The way Asad(KSG) and Zoya sharing things was so Nice.😊
ASYA(KABHI) love Confession was so Beautifully explained.😳
ASYA(KABHI) Love Moments and their Conversation was so Lovely.😳
Asad(KSG) took Decision to be Perfect for Zoya how her Parents want,it was so Nice and I loves Asad(KSG) Character.😊
Waiting for What will happen in ASYA(KABHI) life?😊
The Banner was so Nice.😊
Please Continue soon and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Awesome!!! Loved it! :D continue sooon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Superb work done by u dear.
Awsm update.
Luvd it.
Realllyyy superb awsm one
thnx for d pm
Plzzz do cont asap
Eagerly waiting for d nxt part
T.c
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Absolutely beautiful
Such intense love
Knew tht would have happened
But hope their love win in the end
Cont like now plz

HBD Choco
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
This was honestly so beautifully written!
Had me in tears at the end! But the best part was when he came to the airport and met her secretly!

Brilliant!

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