new Asya SS mysterious Love part 5 updated on pg78 (9/11) - Page 48

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Posted: 9 years ago
Binnu story start ki to ban ho jsyegi
Sha and nayu ki hui thi
--Sumi-- thumbnail
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Sirf batting dekhi😳
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Originally posted by: --Sumi--


Sirf batting dekhi😳


acha hua bowling nahi dekhi
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Is that u selected from novel ??
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Originally posted by: --Sumi--

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Wow finally catch up wid this part...
Amazing update sumi...
Asya are slowly falling in love...
and both realized somewhat but i dont think itna jaldi confession hoga...
loved sadiya and rehan for playing cupid for Asya...
wow they both confessd so soon...

so dance compition on the way.
eagrly waiting for next part...
update soon...
maafi for lateness...
love ya...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm dear!!

It was amazing and sorry for the late comment!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update :) Finally AsYa ki love story start ho gayi ;) And finally Zoya ko Asad ka sab sach pata chala at least ab vo usse misunderstand toh nahi kargi & Zoya started to like him at least..Hope ab sab thik ho jaye AsYa ke beech because Akram ne bhi koi plan kiya hai :) Superb Update & thanks for PM :)
Edited by coolKaBhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the PMS dear..beautiful updates..sorry for not being updated to u.was stuck with xams.hyy.new story is awesome. Nice plot
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Posted: 8 years ago
Character sketch:
Asad: handsome hunk ,dream boy of many girls,son of rashid ahmad khan.he is care free, insensitive, rude. Rehan's best friend .he have his past and he stayed with his brother Akram and step mom sharing.he hate them a lot. Their behavior also not good towards Asad.

Zoya:bubble,chirpy,innocent girl,loyal,have her own principles .stayed with her aapi zeenat.sadie her best friend in college. She belongs to middle class family

Previous plot
Asya fight a lot more than a normal part. Rehan and sadie registered their name in dance competition.

Edited by --Sumi-- - 8 years ago
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Part 5


"what?"

Asad asked him surprisingly. "Yes, I saw your and zoe name in the list tomorrow, you have auditions for Dance. Both of them looked at each other and shrugged.
Zoya looked at Asad with anger. Asad understand her intention to look at him

"What, Don't think it's totally done by me."

"And so who registered my name.
I don't know dance either and its better to dance with Akram. Asad listen his name , Leo Ahmad khan's anger reached at the high boiling point.Zoya turned to leave Asad grabbed her hand and pinned her to the wall .

"Don't dare to think about it?. NO one ignore me in entire life and you will pay for that. You have to wait and watch. Rahi bat dance ki to Asad Ahmed khan never looose his side. I will take part in this competition and win by hook and cook, "he demands her aggressively,like he have rights reserved on her lifespan.

Zoya opened her mouth but pouted. She didn't utter a word.

"na, na sunne ki aaadat nahi hai mujhe you are my partner . Its my luck then start from now onwards you can try your best to cancel this registration and I will embark on the preparation to win this competition by hook or crook. "


He didn't care where they stand and he spoke to her sharply.
Zoya paused, closing her eyes tightly. She was shaking under his gaze. His charm affects her . His hands pressed her to her elbow but zoya didn't utter a word. She opened her eyes and counted into his blood shot eyes. He saw into her full ocean eyes.He felt bad, he never wanted to offend her, but happening, every time he tried not to hurt, but it's done like planned to force her away from his mysterious life.

He bequeathed her, nothing happened her own ego damaged badly ,furious at the determination of the most important person in his life,is it? She was no where ,precious to give attention to her, but someplace in his tenderness, she counts in his day to day life.

Sadiya , still had a great deal to convince her to participate in the dance competition.

Rehan also tried his best, but completely in vain. Both didn't want to bruise each other, take step back.


Next day

"will she come?"Rehan asked sadiya to the entered into the auditions for dance competition.

"Yes, definitely" she winked to the Rehan."you simply have to wait and watch.
Zoya entered in college and Sadie called her to come across her in auditorium hall.

She skipped to meet Asad after that incident. She just entered into the hall. And spot light spotted her at the entrance. The song popped up in the background

Mere dil ke ye tukde hai
Nigahon se chunu yaara
Mohabbat ki kahani hai
Mohabbat se suno yaara

Main aaya hoon tere dar pe
Toh ab jaana nahi hoga
Jiyunga ya marunga main
Jo hona hai yahi hoga


Kehta hoon main besakhta
Sunle yeh mera khuda

Asad kept his hand on her waist, pulled her slightly backward. He grabbed her another hand with his. She didn't understand what was lasting on, it felt different.

She squirmed around and look into his eyes, their eyes pass the feeling to each other. His touch made her thrill. He tripped the light fantastic with many girls before, but her touch was different.

He can't find out she's making him crazy now
He didn't believe she knows she's amazing how
She has him having got his breath
And then he would never pretend
That he was a none such unsuitable, suited for her

Tera ishq hai, meri saltanat
Tu hai zid meri, tu junooniyat
Main hoon dil jala
Mujhe teri lat
Tu hai zid meri
Tu junooniyat oo..

She merely closed her eyes and her back faced his front . he pulled her and snapped back.she bumped into a hard body. Her back facing his front. She didn't understand what's going on he made her to fall out his moves.He held her right hand and another hand on his shoulder. He then slowly made her look straight at him.

Kitabon mein pada tha ye
Khuda ko pyaar hai pyara
Kiya jo pyaar humne toh
Hua dushman jaha saara

Thukra diya, maine yeh jahan
Le aaj tujhko chuna

Tera ishq hai, meri saltanat
Tu hai zid meri, tu junooniyat
Main hoon dil jala
Mujhe teri lat
Tu hai zid meri
Tu junooniyat oo..

Both looked at each other without blinking the eyes. Both have tried to quit numerous times
hide their emotions but somewhere heart connected to each other. She rested her hands on his chest. She strained to feel his love, find out his sorrow, she always saw in his blood shot eyes.

Badi khush rang thi woh shaamein
Bada roshan savera tha
Woh kyu khoya jise chahan
Woh kyu bichada jo mera tha


Udke zara tu dekh le
Itni si hai ilteja..

Asad wants to apologize for his all behavior. HE never tried to injure anyone but his ego came together to hurt precious people in his lifetime.

Tera ishq hai, meri saltanat
Tu hai zid meri, tu junooniyat
Main hoon dil jala
Mujhe teri lat
Tu hai zid meri
Tu junooniyat oo..

She always wants to interpret his feelings and when she looked in his eyes felt pain he survived in his life, she was contacting her stars
wWith him and every time he hurt her seriously and pushed back with his ruthless behaviors.

A lone tear rolled down her cheek. Asad try to push but zoya step back and just ran away. All students clasp for their performance and they appreciate Asad, but he desires to speak with her but she just steps back. He didn't acquire a chance to talk with her.

They qualify in the first turn.
"congratulations Leo , your team qualified for this round. One of his musical department.

That happens very quickly and well. Everyone supposed to be zoya 's entry was planned except trio.

Sadie came and hugged zoya and zoya understand that sadie called her for test round gave her angry look .sadie felt sorry for zoya. She dragged Sadie out of the hallway.

"What the hell is going on Sadie,you rang me to test drive and..."
"that was my plan" Asad intterupted in between from some distance.
Zoya looked back at him candidly. She didn't want to start an argument just looked away.

" I enjoined you, I want to win this competition by hook or crook.and I never pressure on you if you don't want to participate then I will find another partner for the dance. I Also don't have interest in you. If you want to continue then come tomorrow at the same time for the next session "Asad played games with her.He knew that somewhere Zoya has feeling for him .She felt jealous .Why she can't envision him with another girl .

P.s. please ignore my mistake and auto edited words by my keypad lol😊

Edited by --Sumi-- - 8 years ago

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