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Posted: 9 years ago
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Alternative Ending

Location:AIIS Medical Institute
Asad made his way towards his first class. ..As soon as he entered the class; the whole class started to settle down..After students settled Asad introduced himself to the class
ASAD: Hi everyone,I m Asad Ahmed Khan.As u all know that Mr Thakur is on paternity leave so in his absence I would be teaching u Human Anatomy N Psychology..firstly I won't tolerate anyone coming late in my class even by a single min.Hope everything is clear to u all, If anybody is having any query can ask
When nobody spoke, Asad decided to start his class.
After 15 mins of his lecture, Asad sensed a source of disturbance..When he again saw, he saw a girl trying to sneak in the class secretly.
ASAD: what the hell is happening?
All the students got startled by his voice..the girl also got startled. She kept glued to where she was standing. .
ASAD: Who r u N why r u trying to sneak in classroom like a thief..
ZOYA: WOH ACTUALLY.
.I M ZOYA,also the student of this class.Woh I got late for the class N from escaping ur anger , I tried to enter the class cheekily without making u knowing about it
To say Asad is astonished would be an understatement
ASAD: MAY I know the reason y r u late Ms Zoya??
ZOYA: it's not my entire fault sir...woh actually I was gonnacome to college on time but that stupid alarm clock didn't ring on time and made me late for the college..
Whole class was looking at her astonishingly. .N with one glare from Asad they all settled...
ASAD(in anger):SO MISS zoya , don't u know the importance of time...when the seniors r like what will juniors learn..what impression u r making on them..u seriously don't about ur studies, GET OUT of this class right now..N come in time tomorrow...
Tears started to make their way in those beautiful dark brown Almond shaped orbs of Zoya..She made her way out of classroom..nobody had spoken to her in that way , let alone insulted her ...She sat under the tree crying ...
AFTER Asad finished his class , all the students started to come out of the class .Ayaan, Nikhat, Nuzhat, Humeira, Armaan tries to find Zoya. THEY knew that when Zoya is upset , she sits under the tree which is behind the college.they all reached there N find zoya sitting hugging her knees.They do call her but she didn't listen. They all tried again N this time she looked at them.All her friends saw that her eyes r red N puffy due to crying.
Armaan goes near Zoya N tries to cheer her mood.
ARMAAN: ZOYA leave it yaar, stop crying..u don't worry, I will punish that Akdu teacher of ours , he will not try to do that again..Plz stop crying princess, u know na zoya, I hate tears re...
ZOYA starts giggling at this...Armaan : now show me ur dimples princess, then he starts dancing like monkey N Zoya laughs whole heartily...
Zoya: thanks dosto, agar tum sab nahi hote toh mera kya bota
All together : life boring hoti N tum hare jaisi jhalli ki jhelta kaun...
N All together for their home
From that day onwards zoya started to come Asad's class on time...She does started irritating Asad...ASAD was astonished with this girl's guts..but he got used to her presence...
One day after the day finishes at college, Asad was walking back to his car when he heard some noise coming from the nearby place . It sounded like someone was pleading for help. When he goes there , the scene in front of him shocked him..He saw that few boys were trying to misbehave with zoya N zoya tries to fight with them .He got very infuriated with this...
He shouted Leave her; or else u won't be alive to ur tomorrow...
The boys got shocked to see Asad there, they pushed zoya towards Asad N ran from there.Asad hold zoya N feels that she was trembling like leaf...he was shocked to see her state..he was shocked that the girl who stood in front of him bravely is no more looking same...He covered her with his jacket N decides to leave her home...
He dropped zoya at her home..when he was leaving
ZoyA: Mr khan thanx for helping me today N gave him small smile ..ASAD returned the smile N left for his home...once he reached home he feel that his head was aching..He decided to freshen up N eat N retire for the day...but Zoya was wide awake N her thoughts were revolving around Asad...She formed great respect towards Asad N slowly sleep engulfs her...
As the days passes zoya'a fondness for Asad increases..one day Asad stops coming to the college.She asked her friends about it but they also didn't about it ..after few days principal came to the class with a new teacher N introduce him as Asad's replacement..This thing worried Zoya..
As the year was about to came to end , all the the students were going for their internship..As zoya was passing through the hall ; she listened principal- teacher convo...
PRINCIPAL: MR saxena, I feel that we should provide fully help to mr Khan..u know how difficult it becomes for a person to manage everything when he is suffering from dangerous disease like brain tumour. ..
ZOYA got shocked after knowing about his disease ...she decided to ask principal whether she can work as Asad's intern N the principal agreed as Asad was one respected teacher of the college...

ZOYA reached Asad's home..ASAD got shocked seeing Zoya there.
ASAD: Tum yaha kya kr Rhi hoo..
Zoya: I came here for my internship...so technically I will take care of u
Asad got infuriated at this this...Zoya kept her Zoya N goes to kitchen to prepare soup for Asad ..When she gave tried to gave it to him , Asad'a hand starts shivering during to semi - paralysing of it hands...his hands starts trembling...N the soup bowl broked after it fells from Asad's hand ..Zoya made Asad sit on sofa N starts cleaning the mess...This infuriated Asad to the core as he never remained dependent on Nyone ..He shouted At zoya...
ASAD: tumhe ek baAr main samajh nahi aata ki I don't won't ur self...nahi chaiye mujhe tumahari yaa kisi ki bhi sympathy. ..tumhe maza aa rha hoga na meri aise condition dekh kr. ..khush ho rahi hoti na tum ki jo insaan human Anatomy N pyschology ka teacher tha us dependent on others today...Listen I don't want anybody's help.so plz leave now..
Zoya was shocked to the core..stubborn tears make their way out from her beautiful orbs..she left the place crying
She complained looking towards the sky
ZOYA: Allah miyaan, what's wrong with Mr khan...unhe kya lag ta hai ki woh jab chase mujh pr chilla skte h ...unhe aisa kyu lagta h ki sab itnemail Khali bhaithe h unhe sympathise krne k liye. ..agar woh ziddi h toh main bhi kami nahi...Aakhir Zoya farruqui hu main, I can do anything. ..
With this determination she made her way inside his house.Asad was shocked..
ASAD: AB KYA KRNE AAYI HO YHA..
ZOYA: AAPKA DYAN RKNE. .na ki aapko sympathise krne...ab chupchap apni medicines le N rest Kreme. .
A smirk played on aaad's face seeing zoya's confidence...slowly N steadily their relationship converted from Tom N Jerry to friends ...Zoya helped Asad in recovering from his disease N Asad got healed fully ..unknown to each , they both had fallen for each other..
One day Zoya came to Asad's house chirping. .After asking the reason , she gave him a three piece suite N asked him to change it.Asad didn't wanted to say no to say so he changed in it..After looking at him in new dress; She saw him shocked ..he was really looking hot N charming in his new look..
ASAD: zoya aaj kya khaas baat hai..waise aaj tum baht khoobsurat lag Rhi hooN
Zoya: thank u...woh actually aaj Hamare college main seminar hai toh main aur baki sab chathe h ki aapp apne kuch life experiences share kre. .toh app chalenge na plz...she asked making her best puppy face...
How Asad say no to this puppy face..he nodded N Zoya got happy...As they started leaving Asad pulled her towards him N zoya collided to his hard chest ...
ASAD: JANE SE PHLE MAIN AAPSE APNE DIL KI BA AT KHNA CHATHAM. I DON'T KNOW FROM WHEN BUT I HAD FALLEN FOR U MS FARRUQUI. .I DO FALLEN FOR UR DETERMINATION; UR CRAZINESS ; HAPPY GO LUCKY , I REALLY REALLY LOVE U ZOYA
ZOYA EYES GLISTENED WITH TEARS..SHE NODDED HAPPILY
ZOYA: I LOVE U TOO ASAD..FROM WHEN U SAVED ME FROM GOONS ; THE WAY U HELPED ME IN STUDIES; I STARTED RESPECTED U N U BECAME MY INSPIRATION ..I REALLY LOVE U TOO Asad
They hugged each other. Suddenly Asad remember something
Asad bent down on his knees
ASAD: ZOYA main tuMhare liye shayad tumhara prince charming na hoon but main tumse beintehaa mohobatt krta hoon...jab main tumse mila tha toh tum mujhe thodi ziddi, thodi jhali thi shayad abhi bhi waise hi ho...tumhe kaha tha na ki main tumhari inspiration hoon but in reality YOU R MY INSPIRATION ZOYA...tumhe mujhe jeena seekhaya ...tumne mujhe nayi zindagi di hai ...kya tum mujh se nikaah kr ke mujhe world ka luckiest insaan banaogi
Tears of happiness pooled in Zoya's eyes.she nodded N Asad placed ring on her finger
ZOya: I love u tooo Asad
An they lived happily after

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Nice OS
But ending was sad
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Nice one anshul
But sad one
Please write possitive ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice OS
But ending was sad

Thanks for this lovely comment
Glad u like it :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: azsumay

Nice one anshul

But sad one
Please write possitive ending

Thanks for this lovely comment
Glad u like it:-)
I have posted an alternative ending for it too

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for this lovely comment
Glad u like it :-))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: azsumay

Os nice second ending

Thanks u 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awww it was so sweet.
I loved how Zoya took care of Asad and made him recover from disease.

The ending was shocking though. I mean, it was beautiful but so sad.

Please write another story with a 'together forever' ending for AsYa.

I would love to read it.

Thanks for the PM.

Teddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh I found the alternate ending on page 2.
Thanks a lot 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice alternative
A happy ending is always welcome

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