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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -Prinky-
Nice OS dear...
Beautifully written...I loved the alternate...happy ending...
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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

NO she died!

This was so cute.

I cannot believe she died, just after confessing their love. Such a tragic love story!

A very good first attempt! You should write more!

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan
NO she died!
This was so cute.
I cannot believe she died, just after confessing their love. Such a tragic love story!

A very good first attempt! You should write more!

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

beautiful os..
but emotional ending 😭
actually loved it very much :)

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: binuuu
beautiful os..
but emotional ending 😭
actually loved it very much :)

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Plz write an alternate happy OS part to dis one like Choco di😊

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Awesome OS dear👏😊
I don't like sad endings
But I loved d happy ending one
I can't believe dis is ur 1st try😃
Can brain tumour really get cured?
Sorry, I forgot to comment here even though I resd 1st

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