Qubool hai: a second chance [link for the second thread=p20]. - Page 4

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asya in Bhopal now. Journey towards family reunion started. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for PM

Nice update

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So Asya and seher ar both in India

Ahil is doing all he could to impress sanam

So Rehan returns wonder if he will meet seher

Omg Asya could have stayed with rahat and they could have found part of their family

But then tht would be bringing the story to an end 😃

Continue

I will continue as soon as possible 😆 thank you for you comment! I know they should've stayed with Rahaat but it was so easier to let them stay with him 🤔 But don't worry they will end up meeting each other

Here's the new part of the story I hope you'll like it 😆

~5~

I collapsed into the man's arms. No, this couldn't happen to me. I was so confident, it was impossible that they were dead!

"Are you ok?" He asked. No I wasn't. I wasn't ok. I came here for nothing. They were dead. I cleaned my face with a tissue then I nodded to the man before leaving. I needed to call Maya. She was the only who could help me.

Asad's pov.

This little cottage was so beautiful. I saw Zoya's smile and I smirked happily. I could make her smile again and I always loved it. I held her hand and I led her to our room.

"Jaan, go get some rest. I'll cook and then I'll wake you up to eat." She pecked my lips then she went to sleep. So I started to cook. Thanks god that Ayaan knew people who had bought us some supplies. With all they bought, we'll be able to stay in this house for at least a month! So I prepare some fish with veggies and rice. While I was cooking, I thought about our revenge against Tanveer. We already knew that she was in Bhopal, living in our house. So I decided that we'll scare by visiting her at night. I'd have to thank Zoya for building a secret path to snake out the house without being caught when we wanted to see each other just before our nikkah. I remembered how she was determined it was so cute!

Flashback.

"My Akdu Ahmed Khan, you know that Phupi nor Najma will let us see each other!" She had said while a man was building the path.

"Miss Faroo.." I tried.

"No Miss Farooqi! It's future Mrs Khan or Zoya!" She exclaimed.

"Well, Zoya, you know that being an adult, you have to think straight, and building a secret path is very childish!"

I said calmly...at least I tried to talk calmly.

"Jaan, you won't regret it!" She said pecking my cheek.

End of flashback.

And now I was happy that she hadn't listened to me!

"Jaan?" Zoya asked hugging me from behind. I turned into her arms and I captured her lips in a luscious kiss. She kissed me back and I was satisfied with all the passion she could put in just one kiss.

"May you please sit down baby?" I asked her. She gave me a small smile before going to sit down.

Zoya's pov.

Shit! He had made fish! I couldn't eat it..hell I couldn't even bear the smell of it. Well I had to hide this from him. If Asad knew that I was carrying a child, he wouldn't let me help him looking for Sanam, Seher, Ammi aur Haaya. He wouldn't take the risk. I knew that when I would tell him that I was pregnant, he would definitely kill me! I rubbed my belly softly thinking about my little baby.

Sanam's pov.

What did he want again? Mr Non-respectful was standing in front of me with flowers!

"What do you want?" I asked coldly.

"I just wanted to show you something." I tried to protest but this bas***d threw me on his shoulder and began to walk!

"Hey you bas***d! What are you thinking you're doing?" I asked angry as hell! He walked for at least 20 minutes before putting me down. I turned around and I was facing a dhaba. It was very beautiful.

"Why did you bring me there?" I asked and when I faced him he was holding his ears.

"I'm really sorry. I didn't want to burn your dhaba. It was just in my anger state. So I built another one for you." I was very impressed. Maybe he wasn't that selfish.

"Ok I forgive you. What's your name by the way?"

"Aahil Raza Ibrahim." He said.

"I'm Sanam. Sanam Ahmed Khan."

"You mean Sanam Ahmed Khan like the architect Asad Ahmed Khan?"

"Yes, he's my father." I said.

"Wow, you must be proud to be his daughter! He was known by everyone!"

"I'm not proud to be his daughter because he was very important, I'm proud to be his daughter because he had respected all the values his mother had taught him. He was protective and he always did his best to make my mother and his mother happy." I declared. "Thank you for the dhaba Mr Ibrahim. Now I have to go." I said.

"Wait! At least, accept to go to dinner with me."

"What?"

"Well, I want us to become good friends. You know I'm not that bad." I shrugged but nodded anyway.

"Good, I'll pick you up by 7."

"That's fine with me."

I left thinking about my encounter with Aahil. Allah miyaan, he was so strange!

Zoya's pov.

"Asad no!" I shouted as he ran towards me with a jar of water. Seeing him running was so beautiful that I stopped and he just poured the water on me.

"Well, Mrs Khan that your punishment as you distracted me until the fishes got burnt and inedible."

"You weren't that reticent when we were kissing!" I said as he hugged me from behind. He left wet kisses into my neck and I said:

"You know, we don't have anything to eat so that mean "pizzas"!" He groaned and I smiled.

"Calm down Jahanpanah, we're gonna cook it so, you'll be able to put as much veggies as you want!"

Asad just grinned and we made pizzas. Thanks to my power on seducing my man we didn't eat fish!

When we finished eating pizzas, we went to our bedroom where we discussed about everything. I talked about how I regretted closing the doors of my heart to my father instead of trying to forgive him. Asad expressed the same regrets regarding his father. we expressed how bad we wanted Najma and Ammi to name our daughter like they did with Sanam and Seher. I didn't say it out loud but I hoped that Ammi will name this baby.

Seher's pov.

When I entered Maya's mother's home, I got on my knees and cried. I cried so much that my eyes got numb. They were dead! Meri Ammi "Zoya" aur meri Abbu "Asad" were dead.

"Safaa beta, kya hua?"

"Khala, they're dead. A man said that I am looking like someone called Zoya. And then he said that..and I.."

I hugged Maya's mother tightly and she hugged me back.

"How can I find my family if my parents are dead? How can I know where they are when I don't have any clue to help me?"

"I don't know beta. But I'll be there for you."

I hugged Khala then I left to my room. I needed some time to think about what would I do. I wanted to visit my parents' grave then I wanted to look Sanam.

Sanam's pov.

I was still reticent about this dinner with Aahil but hey, I couldn't lose anything! But first I had to go check up on Haaya, my sister. She was mute and deaf and I was scared daily for her. As I looked for her in the road, I saw her walking in the road so I was running towards her when I saw a car with Aahil driving it and some girl beside him. He was approaching Haaya and honked but as she was deaf, she didn't hear anything. That when he did something cruel! He almost overthrew her!

"Haaya!" I shouted as he flew and Haaya was picking up her veggies who fell from her bag.

I hurriedly ran towards her and with signs, I asked her "Are you okay?" She nodded and I hugged her. Aahil Raza Ibrahim would pay for this. He could harm me if he wanted but if he dared to touch Haaya or Badi Ammi, then he would discover a new Sanam Ahmed Khan!

Nice update

Interesting update. Cute asad making food for zoya. Nice couple. Furious sanam will be nice to see. Feeling sad for haya and seher. Do update soon and pm me.

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

Aww seher pain but if she called maya she would get her answer

Omg Asad cooks zoya s pregnant she is hiding it

So sanam forgives ahil

A date made but then he almost ran over haya

Oh boy a mad Sanam now

Continue soon

Nice update dear
Loved it
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: tikit

Interesting update. Cute asad making food for zoya. Nice couple. Furious sanam will be nice to see. Feeling sad for haya and seher. Do update soon and pm me.

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Loved it
Thanks for pm