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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here's my new update for my amazing readers! I'll update each Monday and Thursday! So thank you for your comments and likes, you're amazing!



Leeds, England.

Safaa woke up sweaty and afraid. She touched her right forearm as she felt some sort of pain but there was nothing!

'It's so strange.' She thought. She was going to sleep but she screamed in pain as it seemed like something was pushing hard into her chest. Her screams woke up her room mate Maya who came as quick as possible. She hugged her friend and tried to calm her. When she hummed a song that was played by Safaa's music box, the terrified woman drifted to sleep. She mumbled some words like 'Sanam'. Maya found it weird that her friend pronounced someone's name that she never heard about before. Safaa and her were best friends since kindergarten. Life wasn't fair with Safaa as she had been adopted in India by a good family but unfortunately her adoptive parents died in a car crash when they just arrived in England so her governess had taken care of her since she was four. When Safaa finally fell asleep, Maya kissed her forehead and went to sleep as well.

Punjab, India.

As Aahil was smiling evilly behind the woods, watching Sanam's dhaba destroyed by the fire, the poor woman had been ejected from the place because of the explosion. Her unconscious body laid on the road and for a while, Aahil felt guilty because he didn't expected Sanam nor her family to sleep in the dhaba. But they had done so as they were tired so they decided to sleep in the dhaba instead of going to their house, plus they had rooms to sleep in so it wasn't a big matter.

Dilshad searched for her granddaughter until she found her on the road.

"Sanam!!" She shouted as she ran towards her granddaughter. She took her weak body into her arms and hugged her granddaughter while she prayed god to keep Sanam safe as she wouldn't be able to live if Asad's daughter died. She promised on her life that if she lost another daughter, she would die as well. Sanam and Haaya were her family. She lived for them and only for them.

"Sa-sa-sanam beta, please wake up! I can lose you!" Haaya seeing her sister like this ran away to search for help. Dilshad saw that Sanam was burnt on her right arm just like Zoya and her chest was covered in blood. She kissed Sanam's forehead and kept her head close to her heart.

"Phuphi..." Sanam whispered and Dilshad cried more.

"Marhaba Najma. Marhaba for having protected your niece." Dilshad pronounced as the ambulance was coming to drive Sanam to the hospital. They rushed Sanam to the hospital and Aahil followed them behind. His goal wasn't to harm someone, he just wanted to give Sanam a lesson for her slap earlier this day by burning her dhaba.

Sanam's state was very worrying as she could've died because of her injuries so Dilshad and Haaya kept doing du'as for the woman's recovery.

Leeds, England.

Safaa woke up next morning as worried as ever. She had this feeling that something wrong had happened.

Anyway, she had to go to South Shields to visit her governess.

South Shields, England.

Zoya woke up at the sound of Antara's voice. She hurriedly put some clothes on and got out of the room to welcome her family. She kissed Antara and Amitabh on their cheeks and greeted Ayaan, his wife and Sheereen.

" Ammi, did you already have a breakfast?" She enquired.

"Don't worry Zoya. Ayaan has bought croissants, you just have to prepare some chai." Sheereen answered and Zoya just nodded before going to the kitchen.


Punjab, India.

Sanam had finally woken up. Dilshad and Haaya were relieved to see their Sanam all right.

"Daadee, I think when I'll be better, I'm gonna look for a job." Sanam declared.

"Nahin Sanam, we will find a way to earn money. Get some rest now." Dilshad said. She must sound selfish but she wouldn't let Sanam be away from her. When Dilshad and Haaya left to buy some food, Aahil took the opportunity to visit Sanam.

"Tum!" She exclaimed.

Surprisingly, he got on his knees whispering "I'm sorry". Sanam looked at him in disbelief.

"I'm sorry but I don't understand."

Then he said it: "I was the one who burnt your dhaba."

"What? Why?" She asked crying. Why someone whom she barely knew would do something inhuman like that?

"I wanted to take my revenge for the slap yesterday. I didn't know that you were in the dhaba." Sanam fumed with anger.

"How could you! This dhaba was everything we had my family and I! You destroyed my life! Get out of here right now!" She shouted. "You, Mr whatever your name is, I don't want to see your face any more! I thought that being a rich person you'll have at least some respect but I did a big mistake!" Aahil left the room ashamed. She was right. And he knew that he had to do something to make her forgive him. Even though they barely knew each other, he couldn't leave thinking that he had destroyed her life. That was when an idea popped into his mind.

He called his brother Rehaan.

"Rehaan?"

"Kya hua Aahil?"

"I need you to do something for me."

South Shields, England.

Safaa had finally arrived at her governess's house. Priya Mukherjee had settled in England for Safaa, to make her feel that she had someone to rely on. Safaa hugged her governess whom she was used to call Ammi. They ate some meal prepared by Priya then they left for a walk.

"Ammi, actually, I wanted to ask you something."

"Go on beta."

"I just wanted to know if you knew something about my family.. I mean, my real family."

"No, I'm sorry, why?"

"I think it's time for me to find them. Except the music box, I don't know anything about them but I know that god will help me find them." Safaa took the music box out of her bag and opened it.

She listened to the music box while she cried on her Ammi's shoulder.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear
Loved it
Safaa felt the pain as well
Najma saved Sanam
Aahil confessed that he burnt dhaba & she was angry.
He called Rehan for help him
Safaa & Zoya in same area
She decided to find her real family
Waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Loved it
Safaa felt the pain as well
Najma saved Sanam
Aahil confessed that he burnt dhaba & she was angry.
He called Rehan for help him
Safaa & Zoya in same area
She decided to find her real family
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

I'll update soon and you welcome ^^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
So safa/seher is going out to find her real family
She felt sanam pain when she got injured
So now sanam will have a scar like her mother
Ahil is in regret and he apologized but she didn't forgive him
So what will he do now
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So safa/seher is going out to find her real family
She felt sanam pain when she got injured
So now sanam will have a scar like her mother
Ahil is in regret and he apologized but she didn't forgive him
So what will he do now
Update soon

Thank you for your comment! I'll update tomorrow 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Don't know what to say..So enjoy the chap!

~3~


South Shields, England.

Zoya was perplexed about the events at the pizza parlour. Why this man called her Safaa? Was it possible that she had a doppelgnger somewhere in England? And what if it was one of her daughters? But why did he call her Safaa if it was Seher or Sanam??

"Jaan?" Asad called for the tenth time. Zoya hummed in response and he hugged her from behind.

"What are you thinking about?" He enquired.

"Actually I was thinking about yesterday when this man had called me "Safaa". Don't you find it odd? I mean what if he thought that I was one of our daughters so he called me Safaa.."

"Jaan..If it was really our daughter, why he called you Safaa and not Seher or Sanam?" He asked.

"Maybe Ammi has got their name changed to be sure that Tanveer will not find them." Zoya answered and Asad was pretty intrigued. He assumed that maybe his wife was right. "Jaan, tomorrow we'll go back to the pizza parlour and we'll ask the man if he can give us information about this girl." Asad declared as he kissed her shoulder.

"Thank you baby. I love you so much."

"I love you too Mrs Khan."

South Shields, England.

"Ammi, actually I came to see you today because I had booked a ticket to India and I'm leaving tomorrow morning."

"And where will you stay Safaa?"

"My best friend Maya said that her mother will let me stay at her house." Priya hugged Safaa and exclaimed:

"God will help you to find your family beta." Then she kissed her forehead and Safaa left sadly but hopeful as well.


Punjab, India.

Aahil had met his brother to see if he could build another dhaba for Sanam. The first thing that Rehaan thought was why? Why some douchebag like Aahil would do that? But when he saw Sanam's face, he understood. Aahil was seeing Sanam as a potential prey.. like always. But this time, Rehaan wouldn't let Aahil take advantage of Sanam as he was as well under her spell.

Leeds, England.

That was it, she was ready to leave. She had spent all night blabbering with Maya about their friendship and about everything. Safaa had thanked Maya for being there for her and Maya had cried as Safaa was like a sister to her. They drove to the airport and Safaa was holding Maya's hand tightly.

On the other hand, Zoya and Asad finally reached the pizza's parlour.

"Excuse me?" Zoya said to the waiter they had met last time.

"What can I do for you?" He asked politely.

"Last time I came here, you called me Safaa, why?" She enquired as Asad was holding her hand tightly.

"Safaa is one of my current client here. She use to buy a lot of pizzas in our shop." Zoya smiled as she supposed that Safaa was indeed Seher.

"And don't you have her address? " Zoya asked.

"I do have it but.." The waiter was saying but Asad spat back saying:

"Listen man, my wife and I are searching for our daughters for 17 years so if you don't help us then..." Zoya hugged Asad to calm him down and they waited for the waiter. Zoya was so happy! She would finally meet her daughters. Asad too was happy but he wasn't so confident as life had told him to be a bit suspicious. The waiter gave them Safaa's address and the couple rushed to her house. When they arrived there, there was no one.

"Jaan, maybe we should come tomorrow." Asad suggested. But Zoya refused to go so they waited there until Maya got back from the airport.

"Hum hi!" Maya said shyly. "What can I do for you Mr and Mrs Khan?"

"Asad, look she's the nurse we met three days ago!" Maya wasn't comfortable so she just told them to enter her house so they could discuss. She knew that it was about Safaa.

Zoya and Asad sat on the sofa in the living room seeing photos of Seher and Maya.

"So what can I do for you?" Maya asked.

"We want to know about your friend Safaa. We supposed that she is our long lost daughter."

"I need proofs." Maya said.

"What?" Asad asked.

"You heard me. My best friend had suffered since she was little. First YOU left her by herself. She was living in the road before her adoptive parents Mr Adil and Mrs Rani Omarjee found her searching for food in a trash can. Unfortunately for her, when they came in England, they died in a car accident but Safaa was lucky enough as her governess raised her like her own child! And now you're coming here like anything had happened?!" When Maya ended her speech, Zoya was crying in Asad arms.

"But we didn't mean to.." Zoya sobbed. "We had been harassed on her second birthday, a woman had almost stabbed us to death. We have been saved by my brother. He said that as the woman was still in the house, he checked up the house and only found dead bodies so he assumed that my Ammi had managed to escape with the children. We're still looking for my Ammi and Safaa's twin sister." Asad said. Maya was taken aback, Safaa had a twin sister?

"Her twin sister is Sanam, isn't she?" Zoya nodded.

"How do you know her?" Asad asked.

"Safaa had mumbled her name when she was having a nightmare. Zoya hugged Maya and thanked her.

"Don't you know where she is?" Asad enquired.

"I'm sorry but she has left to go to India today. She said that she needed to find her family. But she told me when I took her to the airport that she had forgotten her favourite photo." Maya went to look into the room of Safaa and she found the photo. She brought it to the couple and Zoya broke into tears as she saw a photo of Seher at the approximative age of 6, holding her music box. She held it closed to her heart while Asad hugged her tightly.

"Mrs Khan, we're going back to India. We're going to find our family. I promise." Asad announced.


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Really sad
Brings back a lot of sad memories of that episode
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hajr

Really sad

Brings back a lot of sad memories of that episode

I'm sorry if it saddens you but that's for the best. Soon they will be together. Just some clues to compensate your sad mood: Before Zoya and Asad find their daughters, Tanveer will die and Sanam and Seher will reunite.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sad update
But loved reading it
Hope the family reunites soon
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
And thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Sad update

But loved reading it
Hope the family reunites soon
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
And thanks for pm😊

Thank you for reading it though 😊 I may update it tomorrow I'm not sure yet

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